6/2/2016 c10 ChibiReads
*claps* this fanfiction is so good and I really like the ending even if it is sad to see it come to an end *sad face*
Thank you for using your own time to write such an enjoyable story *smiles* and I'll keep a look out for your other stories.
Is it possible for a sequel, like maybe a new villan that will test jack, mentally and physically or after a long time, have the guardians and Jack plus Pitch join for this one time to fight against 'evil'? Some little ideas...
See ya around -ChibiReads
*claps* this fanfiction is so good and I really like the ending even if it is sad to see it come to an end *sad face*
Thank you for using your own time to write such an enjoyable story *smiles* and I'll keep a look out for your other stories.
Is it possible for a sequel, like maybe a new villan that will test jack, mentally and physically or after a long time, have the guardians and Jack plus Pitch join for this one time to fight against 'evil'? Some little ideas...
See ya around -ChibiReads
4/24/2016 c9 5A-stranger-in-the-world
OH MY GOD! I didn't expect a new chapter so soon but I'm very happy! This one was so good that I would have wanted it to go on and on. This final really makes me want to read the next! Hope you find the time to write soon. I'm definitely one of your fan ;)
OH MY GOD! I didn't expect a new chapter so soon but I'm very happy! This one was so good that I would have wanted it to go on and on. This final really makes me want to read the next! Hope you find the time to write soon. I'm definitely one of your fan ;)
4/24/2016 c8 A-stranger-in-the-world
Hi! I'm so happy that you published again! Your story is still wonderful and the possessiveness of Pitch is so cute!
I know what it's like to have so much work to do that you can't do anything else, I live that myself. I hope you're doing well and good luck :)
Hi! I'm so happy that you published again! Your story is still wonderful and the possessiveness of Pitch is so cute!
I know what it's like to have so much work to do that you can't do anything else, I live that myself. I hope you're doing well and good luck :)
4/20/2016 c8 15Serami Nefera
Loved it. I can understand how life can get in the way of having time to write or read. My work prevented me from having the time to read this chapter. I look forward to how the Guardians try to get Jack back. I'm wondering what your canon is for this story. Is Jack going to be Nightlight or are they two separate people for this story? If they're seperated then maybe Nightlight can help Jack... if not, then maybe Jack's nature as a former Nightlight can help him.
Loved it. I can understand how life can get in the way of having time to write or read. My work prevented me from having the time to read this chapter. I look forward to how the Guardians try to get Jack back. I'm wondering what your canon is for this story. Is Jack going to be Nightlight or are they two separate people for this story? If they're seperated then maybe Nightlight can help Jack... if not, then maybe Jack's nature as a former Nightlight can help him.
3/4/2016 c7 5A-stranger-in-the-world
It was so cute, I like the rambling of Jack it was adorable! I think it's a good thing that you stop there because it would have been too fast for me. Like, they just learn that they love each other and they already have sex? You did wonderfully. If Bunny saw Pitch kissing Jack he would have a heart attack. ( I already have the picture in mind D)
Each time that I see that you have updated your story, a big smile appear on my face. Continue your great job and I will take a look at your next story.
Have a good day (or night)
It was so cute, I like the rambling of Jack it was adorable! I think it's a good thing that you stop there because it would have been too fast for me. Like, they just learn that they love each other and they already have sex? You did wonderfully. If Bunny saw Pitch kissing Jack he would have a heart attack. ( I already have the picture in mind D)
Each time that I see that you have updated your story, a big smile appear on my face. Continue your great job and I will take a look at your next story.
Have a good day (or night)
3/4/2016 c7 ChibiReads
I was thinking, if its too awkward or difficult or any other reason to write smut or go further on than kissing then you could put simple hints on what's going on instead don't know if that helps at all.
Great story so far! So you deserve a *thumbs up*.
I was thinking, if its too awkward or difficult or any other reason to write smut or go further on than kissing then you could put simple hints on what's going on instead don't know if that helps at all.
Great story so far! So you deserve a *thumbs up*.
2/28/2016 c6 Jelsa4Evur
I was reading this chapter and noticed your note to me in the Author's Note! THANK YOU! I feel so loved! haha!
I was reading this chapter and noticed your note to me in the Author's Note! THANK YOU! I feel so loved! haha!
2/24/2016 c6 GracefulDark
Omg I'm feeling giddy just reading this X3 is it bad I really want to see the small smut part XD lolz can't wait for the next part!
Omg I'm feeling giddy just reading this X3 is it bad I really want to see the small smut part XD lolz can't wait for the next part!
2/13/2016 c6 X-x-A-x-X
Omg! Keep writing pleasseee! I really REALLY want to know how this ends! Don't stop! I'm serious you're really good at writing!
Xxxx A
Omg! Keep writing pleasseee! I really REALLY want to know how this ends! Don't stop! I'm serious you're really good at writing!
Xxxx A
2/7/2016 c6 A-stranger-in-the-world
Hi,
I really loved the chapter, it was really good. I'm definitly falling in love with your story :)
Also, thank you to have write the jealous Bunny scene, I was so happy when I read it!
(Did you know that it's really difficult to write in english with a french corrector? :) )
I wish you good luck with your study, I have spent the past two weeks doing homework with absolutely no free time, I know what you live.
Until the next chapter (Hopefully soon)
Hi,
I really loved the chapter, it was really good. I'm definitly falling in love with your story :)
Also, thank you to have write the jealous Bunny scene, I was so happy when I read it!
(Did you know that it's really difficult to write in english with a french corrector? :) )
I wish you good luck with your study, I have spent the past two weeks doing homework with absolutely no free time, I know what you live.
Until the next chapter (Hopefully soon)
1/8/2016 c5 ChibiReads
For what you said at the end of this chapter (its a nice build up chapter I find) I think fluff would fit more better
I think Pitch just cares for jack like best friend or son maybe. *thumbs up*
For what you said at the end of this chapter (its a nice build up chapter I find) I think fluff would fit more better
I think Pitch just cares for jack like best friend or son maybe. *thumbs up*
1/7/2016 c5 A-stranger-in-the-world
Hi, I didn't find that this was a shitty chapter like you said, in fact I rather like it. I found it funny when you think:Oh no, what Pitch is doing to Jack? And they are really just playing tag :)
Also, I found it cute when Pitch called Jack "Snowflake". He should call him that more often. And it would be funny if Pitch call Jack Snowflake in front of Bunny. His reaction would be fun like: Hey, I'm the only one who gives Jack nicknames :) ( It's just an idea mind you, you do what you want, it's your story.
For your question, I think it would be great that they develop a relationship, it would make the story even better. But I really like your kind or fluff so keep doing it please.
Have a nice week!
Hi, I didn't find that this was a shitty chapter like you said, in fact I rather like it. I found it funny when you think:Oh no, what Pitch is doing to Jack? And they are really just playing tag :)
Also, I found it cute when Pitch called Jack "Snowflake". He should call him that more often. And it would be funny if Pitch call Jack Snowflake in front of Bunny. His reaction would be fun like: Hey, I'm the only one who gives Jack nicknames :) ( It's just an idea mind you, you do what you want, it's your story.
For your question, I think it would be great that they develop a relationship, it would make the story even better. But I really like your kind or fluff so keep doing it please.
Have a nice week!
1/7/2016 c5 Jelsa4Evur
I think the fluff is good. Any more of a relationship will seem forced and odd. I like Jack how he is in this story, because he seems even more dependent on Pitch like a caretaker, but I also like how Pitch is unnaturally tender with Jack.
I think the fluff is good. Any more of a relationship will seem forced and odd. I like Jack how he is in this story, because he seems even more dependent on Pitch like a caretaker, but I also like how Pitch is unnaturally tender with Jack.