for Mixedblood6/4/2016 c7 Guest
kili is a lying little prat! He lied to Fili and what the heck is wrong with him. I would have made him feel guilty about the cup, then I would have stomped up to Fili and told him exactly how I felt about his brother and what he said. Kili lied to Fili, because he knew what he did was wrong. Ooh I hope she gets the chance to clobber him somehow.
kili is a lying little prat! He lied to Fili and what the heck is wrong with him. I would have made him feel guilty about the cup, then I would have stomped up to Fili and told him exactly how I felt about his brother and what he said. Kili lied to Fili, because he knew what he did was wrong. Ooh I hope she gets the chance to clobber him somehow.
3/31/2016 c5 
12BlondiezHere
I think you've got the beginnings of a wonderful story here. I love seeing Kili and Fili being protective, and I hope they change Malithra's mind very soon about dwarves!
12BlondiezHereI think you've got the beginnings of a wonderful story here. I love seeing Kili and Fili being protective, and I hope they change Malithra's mind very soon about dwarves!
3/19/2016 c1 Guest
Ooh! This seems very original! Awesome! Please do not abandon the story and update soon!
Ooh! This seems very original! Awesome! Please do not abandon the story and update soon!
3/16/2016 c1 Guest
I love this story it made my day please update
I love this story it made my day please update
3/16/2016 c1 Guest
Update please it's really good
Update please it's really good
3/15/2016 c1 Guest
Please update I really like the story and I NEED MORE!¡!im going to continue until you update!
Please update I really like the story and I NEED MORE!¡!im going to continue until you update!
3/13/2016 c4 Guest
Please update more often I really appreciate your stories! Please! And no none of the words seem off! :)
Please update more often I really appreciate your stories! Please! And no none of the words seem off! :)
3/12/2016 c4 Guest
Oh my goodness I just started reading this today and Iove it! It is not poorly written at all which is very rare and the pace is not to slow or too fast! Please update soon! Also I have a few questions… what are the ages of the main characters? Also, how often will you update? Every day? Week? Month!? Sorry I'm just impatient and I really want to see what happens next and her past! :)
Oh my goodness I just started reading this today and Iove it! It is not poorly written at all which is very rare and the pace is not to slow or too fast! Please update soon! Also I have a few questions… what are the ages of the main characters? Also, how often will you update? Every day? Week? Month!? Sorry I'm just impatient and I really want to see what happens next and her past! :)
1/10/2016 c2 Guest
U r Catholic ?
U r Catholic ?
11/28/2015 c1 5Celebrisilweth
Interesting start. Waiting to learn the back history and see where this goes.
5CelebrisilwethInteresting start. Waiting to learn the back history and see where this goes.