for The Ravenclaw's Heir10/20/2020 c2 Maria Julia G
Hi first I wanted to say that even though all these years have passed since you wrote this wonderful story, I am really in love with it, it really is a wonderful story and the stories of Hermione I decided to generate a Thousand Years Ago are simply wonderful. I really wanted to see Hermione and Elena get to know each other and then myfones discovering that she is Rowena's daughter would have been really incredible too bad that you stopped writing. But even so I want to say that you write very well and that it is a really captivating and exciting story.
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From your fan, Maria Júlia
Hi first I wanted to say that even though all these years have passed since you wrote this wonderful story, I am really in love with it, it really is a wonderful story and the stories of Hermione I decided to generate a Thousand Years Ago are simply wonderful. I really wanted to see Hermione and Elena get to know each other and then myfones discovering that she is Rowena's daughter would have been really incredible too bad that you stopped writing. But even so I want to say that you write very well and that it is a really captivating and exciting story.
Kisses
From your fan, Maria Júlia
9/18/2017 c2 
1Trice Eaton
Your fanfiction is of to a good start! the only things I can say is that you nrrd to be careful about language consistency other then that keep updating!
1Trice EatonYour fanfiction is of to a good start! the only things I can say is that you nrrd to be careful about language consistency other then that keep updating!
7/19/2016 c2 Guest
Why haven't you continued this story?
Why haven't you continued this story?
1/17/2016 c2 bittatatat
Nice fic, great idea for story plot. I think you should use the detention to mix Harry's and Hermione's blood next (Hermione could trip/fall from bloodloss and Harry could help her to stand up, they wounds could touch). It could form a bond between them, not marriage, but they could start to share dreams. It could also kill the horecrux and scare Delores that she somehow overdid the detention and killed Potter by accident - that would be bad for her and the Minister of Magic.
Perhaps you could even show that Umbridge isn't so bad, but just very set up in her ways? The woman could do something to help HP&HG, unknowingly in more ways than it was intended by giving some potion.
Nice fic, great idea for story plot. I think you should use the detention to mix Harry's and Hermione's blood next (Hermione could trip/fall from bloodloss and Harry could help her to stand up, they wounds could touch). It could form a bond between them, not marriage, but they could start to share dreams. It could also kill the horecrux and scare Delores that she somehow overdid the detention and killed Potter by accident - that would be bad for her and the Minister of Magic.
Perhaps you could even show that Umbridge isn't so bad, but just very set up in her ways? The woman could do something to help HP&HG, unknowingly in more ways than it was intended by giving some potion.
12/27/2015 c2 Darkangel665
I was wondering if you purposefully put "Spanish 'I think'" in the story and then put the English translation right after? Also because of this I'm a little confused about the whole conversation with Harry and Hermione.
I was wondering if you purposefully put "Spanish 'I think'" in the story and then put the English translation right after? Also because of this I'm a little confused about the whole conversation with Harry and Hermione.
12/6/2015 c1 3Nrandom
Hello! I sent you a pm, but I don't know if you got it so I thought I'd approach you here as well. I was wondering if you are still interested in having a beta reader. If you are, I would absolutely love to be your beta.
This is a very interesting story so far, and I can't wait to see where you plan on taking it. Good luck :)
3NrandomHello! I sent you a pm, but I don't know if you got it so I thought I'd approach you here as well. I was wondering if you are still interested in having a beta reader. If you are, I would absolutely love to be your beta.
This is a very interesting story so far, and I can't wait to see where you plan on taking it. Good luck :)
12/5/2015 c1 Lala
i suggest getting a beta or using spell check.
i suggest getting a beta or using spell check.