for The Night She Decides To Leave9/7/2018 c1 
3nattysuits
Lovely and sad. So, lovely sad? Tight prose, you didn't beat around the bush. I like that!
3nattysuitsLovely and sad. So, lovely sad? Tight prose, you didn't beat around the bush. I like that!
4/20/2016 c1 DeejayMil
You've brought back all my mixed emotions about Emily leaving. I CANNOT HANDLE EMILY LEAVING. And the song that played and her dancing and just... everything about that scene hurt so much.
You've brought back all my mixed emotions about Emily leaving. I CANNOT HANDLE EMILY LEAVING. And the song that played and her dancing and just... everything about that scene hurt so much.
12/4/2015 c1 rmpcmfan
Awesome! It was just so sad to see Emily feeling this way, so lonely. I have to say that Clyde seemed very perceptive about her. I wish the show would have spent more time on why Emily left. Really enjoyed this. Keep going.
Awesome! It was just so sad to see Emily feeling this way, so lonely. I have to say that Clyde seemed very perceptive about her. I wish the show would have spent more time on why Emily left. Really enjoyed this. Keep going.
11/30/2015 c1 6thehecticglow
Really nice job with this! I love how clearly you were able to show the tension behind her decision to walk away; it's impressive how well her character comes through in so few words. It's such a great, bittersweet contrast to see her reflecting on how hard things have been while she's making the choice to do something about it by leaving.
6thehecticglowReally nice job with this! I love how clearly you were able to show the tension behind her decision to walk away; it's impressive how well her character comes through in so few words. It's such a great, bittersweet contrast to see her reflecting on how hard things have been while she's making the choice to do something about it by leaving.
11/29/2015 c1 LetMeWalkTheEarthWithYou
I really loved that! Short, straight to the point and Emily, written just the way I love her.
Plus, there was Clyde. Well, done!
I really loved that! Short, straight to the point and Emily, written just the way I love her.
Plus, there was Clyde. Well, done!