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4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Awesome work! And omg… I’m certain Severus was absolutely horrified to see his own spell/curse, Sectum Sempera used to harm Violet! This is no coincidence any longer. That spell is known only to a handful of people. Also enjoyed how proud Severus was for Violet identifying all those potions so well even if she was stumped and had to guess a few of them. The way he was reminded of Lily also was cute in its own way as well. Keep up the grand work!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkAwesome work! And omg… I’m certain Severus was absolutely horrified to see his own spell/curse, Sectum Sempera used to harm Violet! This is no coincidence any longer. That spell is known only to a handful of people. Also enjoyed how proud Severus was for Violet identifying all those potions so well even if she was stumped and had to guess a few of them. The way he was reminded of Lily also was cute in its own way as well. Keep up the grand work!
3/28 c36 Kaia
Totally worth the wait! I love that you do other people’s POVs, it makes the story more unique and entertaining. Still would love to know how people in the ministry are reacting to how unfair Violet’s being treated due to the tournament, even the other students; they know that Violet isn’t being scored fairly it’s waaay to obvious that she’s not…
Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up you’re amazing work, and take care of yourself!
Totally worth the wait! I love that you do other people’s POVs, it makes the story more unique and entertaining. Still would love to know how people in the ministry are reacting to how unfair Violet’s being treated due to the tournament, even the other students; they know that Violet isn’t being scored fairly it’s waaay to obvious that she’s not…
Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up you’re amazing work, and take care of yourself!
3/28 c36 13Stephanie MRV
Ugh.
No matter how many times I read this stupid task I hate it even more.
They are trying to kill her. It's not a mistake. But who. She has so many enemies. The potential killers are many.
I am hoping Tom eventually starts trying to protect her dammit.
I preferred it when rose was dying over violet.
I really hope her world crumbles.
13Stephanie MRVUgh.
No matter how many times I read this stupid task I hate it even more.
They are trying to kill her. It's not a mistake. But who. She has so many enemies. The potential killers are many.
I am hoping Tom eventually starts trying to protect her dammit.
I preferred it when rose was dying over violet.
I really hope her world crumbles.
3/27 c36 1amerdism
Looking forward to the next chapter in 1 to 2 years lol, but seriously, can't wait till everyone in the story against violet, be it rose or albus, gets their comeuppance
1amerdismLooking forward to the next chapter in 1 to 2 years lol, but seriously, can't wait till everyone in the story against violet, be it rose or albus, gets their comeuppance
3/26 c36 BlindFaunusGirl
Nice bonus chapter, I enjoyed getting Severus’s pov again. I love the story and look forward to next chapter.
Nice bonus chapter, I enjoyed getting Severus’s pov again. I love the story and look forward to next chapter.
12/26/2024 c35 Halloween Spirit
Have to say I have found this book very entertaining seeing as I binged read this in two days. Love the changes to the Tirals look forward to seeing this mystery unravel.
Have to say I have found this book very entertaining seeing as I binged read this in two days. Love the changes to the Tirals look forward to seeing this mystery unravel.
12/23/2024 c35 Ghost
Dumbledore is such a git, but it does fit him. Moving his chess pieces and never acting himself for the most part.
I wonder if he's behind the core siphon to make his saviour stronger and weaken the dark twin? Only to not realize that he's wrong.
Not to mention the rigged scores...
Dumbledore is such a git, but it does fit him. Moving his chess pieces and never acting himself for the most part.
I wonder if he's behind the core siphon to make his saviour stronger and weaken the dark twin? Only to not realize that he's wrong.
Not to mention the rigged scores...
12/23/2024 c34 Ghost
nice story! I binged it, but i m pretty sure the Remus magical core light/grey/dark alignment happened before already. Also when he asked here where she got it from.
nice story! I binged it, but i m pretty sure the Remus magical core light/grey/dark alignment happened before already. Also when he asked here where she got it from.
12/10/2024 c35 Kaia
Awesome chapter! I like how you gave us a little insight to Flint’s actions regarding Violet. I’m wondering, which twin will be used for Voldemort’s ritual if you use the ritual in the book?
Keep up the awesome work! Try listening to sound healing frequencies to help relieve stress or heal your body. It helps
Awesome chapter! I like how you gave us a little insight to Flint’s actions regarding Violet. I’m wondering, which twin will be used for Voldemort’s ritual if you use the ritual in the book?
Keep up the awesome work! Try listening to sound healing frequencies to help relieve stress or heal your body. It helps
12/10/2024 c35 Guest
WELL WORTH THE WAIT! Awesome chapter! I’m hoping more people will throw a fit over how unfair everything is for Violet.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Rest up, don’t force yourself to write; I recommend reiki videos to help with stress
WELL WORTH THE WAIT! Awesome chapter! I’m hoping more people will throw a fit over how unfair everything is for Violet.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Rest up, don’t force yourself to write; I recommend reiki videos to help with stress
12/6/2024 c35 death390
So good first, you have progressed as a writer as a whole year 4 has had been quite a lot better than the early years. The bad, you still have a major issue with telling rather than showing. With the better year 4 so far I'll bump the reading up to a 6/10 from the 5 i thought it was with my first review. No one gets 10 as it's literally perfect, and 7 has a minimum rereadability threshold which the first 3 years currently prevent. 6 is the minimum threshold for following and seeing if the story gets better and or has a decent ending.
Your story has great bones, and with the first 3 years fixed up could be a solid 7 Currently.
So good first, you have progressed as a writer as a whole year 4 has had been quite a lot better than the early years. The bad, you still have a major issue with telling rather than showing. With the better year 4 so far I'll bump the reading up to a 6/10 from the 5 i thought it was with my first review. No one gets 10 as it's literally perfect, and 7 has a minimum rereadability threshold which the first 3 years currently prevent. 6 is the minimum threshold for following and seeing if the story gets better and or has a decent ending.
Your story has great bones, and with the first 3 years fixed up could be a solid 7 Currently.