for Enduring the Flames of War3/5 c38 Morgriff
This chapter seems like it kinda loses noble 6. why wouldn't she have also been in the "dream world"? why wouldn't she get "upgrades"? i mean she was on the forerunner ship same as the other spartans? and what even happened to her? it doesn't seem like she went with blue team?
This chapter seems like it kinda loses noble 6. why wouldn't she have also been in the "dream world"? why wouldn't she get "upgrades"? i mean she was on the forerunner ship same as the other spartans? and what even happened to her? it doesn't seem like she went with blue team?
3/2 c51 Guest
I really hope Mana gets a physical body, if for no other reason than for "Uncle Johnson" (or is it "Uncle Sergeant Johnson"?) to teach her how to shoot. Yes I know she's a supercomputer that knows every possible concept about guns and can probably target more accurately than any human but I don't care.
Anyways, great story, love where it's going, can't wait to see a Gravemind-corrupted Catalyst.
I really hope Mana gets a physical body, if for no other reason than for "Uncle Johnson" (or is it "Uncle Sergeant Johnson"?) to teach her how to shoot. Yes I know she's a supercomputer that knows every possible concept about guns and can probably target more accurately than any human but I don't care.
Anyways, great story, love where it's going, can't wait to see a Gravemind-corrupted Catalyst.
2/28 c48 Mericore
Only 2 spartans to destory six sovereign-class reapers? Where are the other spartans?
Only 2 spartans to destory six sovereign-class reapers? Where are the other spartans?
2/17 c1 Guest
Hope alls well homie. Been following this story for years now and I come back to it every once in a while since you went on break just to relive the magic, you’ve got a real solid thing going on here. Cant wait for the next update.
Hope alls well homie. Been following this story for years now and I come back to it every once in a while since you went on break just to relive the magic, you’ve got a real solid thing going on here. Cant wait for the next update.
2/13 c33 Mericore
Master chief x Sheppard romance. The fuck why? I must say that i dont like cross-stories where Sheppard is the moral leader of everyone (except ME), acting like a counselor for others and their problems (keep that in ME). Why do it with Chief? He now follows her orders like she's his superior, disobeying UNSC orders. You want to Chief to listen to Shepard's orders? Have UNSC send Cheif (Blue team) as a military attache, or how is it called, posted under commander Sheppard). Just because author wants Chief and Sheppard to clap cheeks means that Chief will disboey UNSC orders if it means angering Shepard!? Keep their romance in freetime (off-duty) don't push that to missions just so Sheppard can stay THE LEADER. But the plot of the story is great, keep that up.
Ps. Again sorry for my English
Master chief x Sheppard romance. The fuck why? I must say that i dont like cross-stories where Sheppard is the moral leader of everyone (except ME), acting like a counselor for others and their problems (keep that in ME). Why do it with Chief? He now follows her orders like she's his superior, disobeying UNSC orders. You want to Chief to listen to Shepard's orders? Have UNSC send Cheif (Blue team) as a military attache, or how is it called, posted under commander Sheppard). Just because author wants Chief and Sheppard to clap cheeks means that Chief will disboey UNSC orders if it means angering Shepard!? Keep their romance in freetime (off-duty) don't push that to missions just so Sheppard can stay THE LEADER. But the plot of the story is great, keep that up.
Ps. Again sorry for my English
2/12 c32 Mericore
This story is great, but the some parts are in the backdound and would be good to have some clarification of them. For example in this chapter UNSC has contracted Quarians (ALIENS)! to CHECK on UNSC SHIPS! Sorry, but the FUCK WHY!? They just came out of a GENOCIDAL war and instead of rebuilding and keeping other species away from their tech (intel), mainly ships, they just contract the best engineers in the galaxy (not counting Huragoks since they aren't in the story) to check the wrecks of UNSC ships. The amount of knowledge the Quarians can get from this and possibly other citadel species (STG work mainly) would be unacceptable, especially this early after the war. My criticism would be milder if the UNSC year was 2556 or after, but it's 2553! Kf i remember Halo lore correctly at this UNSC navy is decimated with only few hunded ships undergoing repairs and refits. The Autumn class was commissioned in 2554!
And what about various insurectionist movements? New Colonial Alliance? You didn't write anything about them, so we don't know what situation UEG space is in. For example you could adress it with the reformation of UEG to give equal representation for all colonies and if I remember, during the war insurrection leaders wanted to negotiate with Covenant for their survival in exchange for coordinates of UEG worlds. If this got out it would piss of the general population and insurrection would cease to be a major problem.
Ps: Sorry for my english.
This story is great, but the some parts are in the backdound and would be good to have some clarification of them. For example in this chapter UNSC has contracted Quarians (ALIENS)! to CHECK on UNSC SHIPS! Sorry, but the FUCK WHY!? They just came out of a GENOCIDAL war and instead of rebuilding and keeping other species away from their tech (intel), mainly ships, they just contract the best engineers in the galaxy (not counting Huragoks since they aren't in the story) to check the wrecks of UNSC ships. The amount of knowledge the Quarians can get from this and possibly other citadel species (STG work mainly) would be unacceptable, especially this early after the war. My criticism would be milder if the UNSC year was 2556 or after, but it's 2553! Kf i remember Halo lore correctly at this UNSC navy is decimated with only few hunded ships undergoing repairs and refits. The Autumn class was commissioned in 2554!
And what about various insurectionist movements? New Colonial Alliance? You didn't write anything about them, so we don't know what situation UEG space is in. For example you could adress it with the reformation of UEG to give equal representation for all colonies and if I remember, during the war insurrection leaders wanted to negotiate with Covenant for their survival in exchange for coordinates of UEG worlds. If this got out it would piss of the general population and insurrection would cease to be a major problem.
Ps: Sorry for my english.
11/29/2024 c51 Good little jit
I'm commander Shepard, and this is my favourite story on
In the past 8.5 days I've chewed through both this text and MD12's other Halo crossover, When Destiny Burns. That fact that I read 1.36 million words in such a short period of time is a testament MD12's control of his craft. I'm very interested in how this story will progress, and I'm certain that it will be worth the wait.
I'm commander Shepard, and this is my favourite story on
In the past 8.5 days I've chewed through both this text and MD12's other Halo crossover, When Destiny Burns. That fact that I read 1.36 million words in such a short period of time is a testament MD12's control of his craft. I'm very interested in how this story will progress, and I'm certain that it will be worth the wait.
11/14/2024 c51 Faintstream30
You are an amazing writer and reading this story (despite its overall depressing plot) has been a true light in my life. Also, funny thing is I finished reading this story initially on chapter 49 I think, and then after I got notified you added a chapter it had been such a long time that I felt I was required to read the entire story over again, and I have just gotten to the (current) end. So it took me from AUG 31 to NOV 14 to read this whole story. Good for you, I praise my self on my fast reading abilities and I still took months.
You are an amazing writer and reading this story (despite its overall depressing plot) has been a true light in my life. Also, funny thing is I finished reading this story initially on chapter 49 I think, and then after I got notified you added a chapter it had been such a long time that I felt I was required to read the entire story over again, and I have just gotten to the (current) end. So it took me from AUG 31 to NOV 14 to read this whole story. Good for you, I praise my self on my fast reading abilities and I still took months.
9/26/2024 c51 allison61509
Oh man I really don't think shepard and crew are ready for what they are about to face! Excellent chapter loving the story still, and I can't wait for the next one!
Oh man I really don't think shepard and crew are ready for what they are about to face! Excellent chapter loving the story still, and I can't wait for the next one!
9/18/2024 c51 
4Crazzytony
This has been one fantastic read and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm 110% positive that their about to meet the Flood and Cortana, Chief, and Johnson are about to have a very very bad day.
So hope to see the Asari have unleashed the flood upon themselves by doing something stupid.
4CrazzytonyThis has been one fantastic read and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm 110% positive that their about to meet the Flood and Cortana, Chief, and Johnson are about to have a very very bad day.
So hope to see the Asari have unleashed the flood upon themselves by doing something stupid.