
11/8/2022 c47 Guest
Really enjoying this story. Thanks for writing it
Really enjoying this story. Thanks for writing it
11/6/2022 c47 Stephen
Great story loving it
Great story loving it
11/3/2022 c47 EffervescentNova
Cool chapter.
I find any Chief romance weird
Also you captured the Korogan humour well. I always found them funny in the games.
Cool chapter.
I find any Chief romance weird
Also you captured the Korogan humour well. I always found them funny in the games.
11/3/2022 c44 DevilGoblin99
Well, this is awkward. Guess you’ll get a first hand crash course on how to be a father, Chief.
Well, this is awkward. Guess you’ll get a first hand crash course on how to be a father, Chief.
11/2/2022 c47 Guest
How come Garrus’ mother is alive in this timeline, I thought she was dead in the canon storyline?
How come Garrus’ mother is alive in this timeline, I thought she was dead in the canon storyline?
11/2/2022 c47 Greyfox2
This was a wonderfully written chapter, it's nice to see the alliance of nations getting a solid win! Had a proper giggle at the idea of Chief and Three going up to a reaper, tailpiping them with a nuke then running away. So, that bit with the Master builder a future plot bunny or a writing out from the plot? Good work either way and thanks!
This was a wonderfully written chapter, it's nice to see the alliance of nations getting a solid win! Had a proper giggle at the idea of Chief and Three going up to a reaper, tailpiping them with a nuke then running away. So, that bit with the Master builder a future plot bunny or a writing out from the plot? Good work either way and thanks!
10/31/2022 c47
1TheDarkChronist
Fuck, Chief got some action on the serious, war-centered fic than in the update of the harem-centered one, hahaha. Then again, that one is also a serious, war-centered fic, and this one has got plenty of lighthearted, fun moments. Ah, I love your writing, man.
Still hoping you're doing better from covid! Keep this little pieces of heaven coming, they make my month!

Fuck, Chief got some action on the serious, war-centered fic than in the update of the harem-centered one, hahaha. Then again, that one is also a serious, war-centered fic, and this one has got plenty of lighthearted, fun moments. Ah, I love your writing, man.
Still hoping you're doing better from covid! Keep this little pieces of heaven coming, they make my month!
10/31/2022 c32
2Phant0mZ0ne
While I'm not quite caught up yet, I have to commend you for blending the Halo and Mass Effect universes so brilliantly. Forerunners, Protheans, Flood, the UNSC and the Systems Alliance, the "cross-franchise" meeting and interactions, the broader world-building plots with the AIs, Kilo 5, etc. I'm kinda hoping there's another massive cross-species battle towards the end. Keep up the fantastic work!

While I'm not quite caught up yet, I have to commend you for blending the Halo and Mass Effect universes so brilliantly. Forerunners, Protheans, Flood, the UNSC and the Systems Alliance, the "cross-franchise" meeting and interactions, the broader world-building plots with the AIs, Kilo 5, etc. I'm kinda hoping there's another massive cross-species battle towards the end. Keep up the fantastic work!