12/7/2015 c1 21Aeristine
Oh my gosh this was so beautiful, it brought a tear to my eye. Fanfics don't make me cry. Your the 7th author who's ever managed to do so.
Great job...I can't wait to see more from you.
Oh my gosh this was so beautiful, it brought a tear to my eye. Fanfics don't make me cry. Your the 7th author who's ever managed to do so.
Great job...I can't wait to see more from you.
12/2/2015 c1 3adbhut
Wow! ! I loved the idea. I was hoping Kelly was alive somehow but this ending was good too. She got to meet bladebreakers (atleast Kai in person)
I liked how they all got prepared for christmas. The decorations using bey parts was really creative and the part where Tyson and Ray cut up the tree using their beyblades was really cool!
This story was so good! I would've loved to read more of your stories but I respect your decision to leave. I hope you overcome the writer's block and get back your inspiration.
Wow! ! I loved the idea. I was hoping Kelly was alive somehow but this ending was good too. She got to meet bladebreakers (atleast Kai in person)
I liked how they all got prepared for christmas. The decorations using bey parts was really creative and the part where Tyson and Ray cut up the tree using their beyblades was really cool!
This story was so good! I would've loved to read more of your stories but I respect your decision to leave. I hope you overcome the writer's block and get back your inspiration.
12/1/2015 c1 5MercyReg
Beautiful story. Golden heart enclosed in freezing ice, that's what describes your story.
Beautiful story. Golden heart enclosed in freezing ice, that's what describes your story.
12/1/2015 c1 33Indigo Jupiter
awww...it was beautiful :) i love it :)
even though the content was sad, but you managed to end it well in a way that kelly was now with her parents :')
Kai as a santa, adorable and rest of them as elves...sweet :D
man with purple hair? i bet you anything it was boris...( that bastard if it was) _
awww...it was beautiful :) i love it :)
even though the content was sad, but you managed to end it well in a way that kelly was now with her parents :')
Kai as a santa, adorable and rest of them as elves...sweet :D
man with purple hair? i bet you anything it was boris...( that bastard if it was) _