for Sealkeeper: He Who Binds4/6 c14 Baumbarth
This story is very edgy and the entire setup for the story is unbelievable. Supposedly Naruto is important to many people, but noone actually tries to follow up on him. So far I've found myself thinking how unrealistic that behaviour is every chapter.
This story is very edgy and the entire setup for the story is unbelievable. Supposedly Naruto is important to many people, but noone actually tries to follow up on him. So far I've found myself thinking how unrealistic that behaviour is every chapter.
2/9 c1 GeaMBS01
:lukeanimelover
Right at the top of the AN at the start of chap 1 the autor adresses the much more mature mc.
:lukeanimelover
Right at the top of the AN at the start of chap 1 the autor adresses the much more mature mc.
1/27 c1 lukeanimelover
Bruh. I-… no, no, i promised the guy who reccomended this that id see this to atleast chapter 10. Lets just hope it wont be as torturous as the first chapter was.
Bruh. I-… no, no, i promised the guy who reccomended this that id see this to atleast chapter 10. Lets just hope it wont be as torturous as the first chapter was.
12/22/2024 c26 Broken wings 333
You know the third hokage isn't exactly blameless in this
You know the third hokage isn't exactly blameless in this
12/17/2024 c117 Jouran
I know this is quite long-winded and you probably won't read it, but for the sake of all the ice... What were you thinking when you put Mai and Tsume together? The chick took advantage of her status from the beginning. To the point that every time he feels conflict, instead of talking to Naruto... He goes to her and ends up doing the same, he is Tsukuyomi's right hand, but he prefers to get into bed with Tsume and forget All, If you just wanted me to betray Naruto, you just had to put it on, not make him react like an idiot and hand Mai over on a silver platter.
I know this is quite long-winded and you probably won't read it, but for the sake of all the ice... What were you thinking when you put Mai and Tsume together? The chick took advantage of her status from the beginning. To the point that every time he feels conflict, instead of talking to Naruto... He goes to her and ends up doing the same, he is Tsukuyomi's right hand, but he prefers to get into bed with Tsume and forget All, If you just wanted me to betray Naruto, you just had to put it on, not make him react like an idiot and hand Mai over on a silver platter.
12/14/2024 c45 Guest
Sorry, I just cannot continue reading this story. This version of Naruto is impossible to root for or sympathize with - he is unnecessarily barbaric, and it doesn't seem like there is any hope for him to redeem himself. Even with all his suffering taken into account, his dispositions are unacceptable. I don't even understand how the Third Hokage even allows all this to happen under his nose - Naruto declaring war on the Yamanakas and effectively killing Inoichi for no good reason is unforgivable.
Sorry, I just cannot continue reading this story. This version of Naruto is impossible to root for or sympathize with - he is unnecessarily barbaric, and it doesn't seem like there is any hope for him to redeem himself. Even with all his suffering taken into account, his dispositions are unacceptable. I don't even understand how the Third Hokage even allows all this to happen under his nose - Naruto declaring war on the Yamanakas and effectively killing Inoichi for no good reason is unforgivable.