for Team FRST1/7/2016 c1 
7k wolf omega
I can see that this story has potential. Here's a tip; Put the top(Authors note, Disclaimer) In Bold, or insert a line between it and the story.
Mark: I really like this. And the fact everyone is assigned dorms before initiation.
Well, if Mark likes it, it must be good. I have to get back to work on his trailer, so i must take my leave.
Keep up the good work, and have a HOOOWWWLLING good day!
7k wolf omegaI can see that this story has potential. Here's a tip; Put the top(Authors note, Disclaimer) In Bold, or insert a line between it and the story.
Mark: I really like this. And the fact everyone is assigned dorms before initiation.
Well, if Mark likes it, it must be good. I have to get back to work on his trailer, so i must take my leave.
Keep up the good work, and have a HOOOWWWLLING good day!
12/6/2015 c1 2Sage of Six Ichigos
I'll take care of that. And the reason that things moved fast with her is because that's how it happened between me and the girl she is made after. Things moved really quick between us and next ring I know, I'm kissing her. Also, thanks for the tip about the scabbard
2Sage of Six IchigosI'll take care of that. And the reason that things moved fast with her is because that's how it happened between me and the girl she is made after. Things moved really quick between us and next ring I know, I'm kissing her. Also, thanks for the tip about the scabbard
12/6/2015 c1 Kaoknight
Not a bad start, some things happened a bit fast and some other things could use more detail but this is only chapter 1.
And I think it's scabbard not scarab.
Not a bad start, some things happened a bit fast and some other things could use more detail but this is only chapter 1.
And I think it's scabbard not scarab.