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12/8/2015 c4 4TheFriendlyNobody
Hehe, another Jaune-less fix huh? Even then this is a pretty cool story so far. Wonder what other things that would be different since Jaune is in the mix...or is he?
Anyways, awesomew work. Can wait to see what else you have in mind.
12/7/2015 c4 1Warrof

12/7/2015 c4 1insanemaelstorm
Great chapter as always. I liked the team name. Lol poor pyrrha. I liked how naruto dealt with Cardin. Yes velvel is kinda similar to hinata in terms of personality and behaviour. I didn't know that nine truth seeking balls was all naruto could create in life. I thought that he can create another one if one gets destroyed with nine being the maximum at a time( that is only nine balls can exist at one time but if one gets destroyed than he can create another one). I also like that grins are impervious to truth seeking balls( it makes sense as they are part of nature and are most likely made up of natural energy). I also liked the dialogues and character personalities. Can't wait for more
12/7/2015 c4 xirons
good chapter
12/7/2015 c3 Zentari2238
Damn, looks like Jaune died on the bus.
12/7/2015 c4 Euphonia
So you've given an explanation why Grimm can destroy the Gudoudama. But I haven't seen a reason for why the Truth Seeking Dagger is behaving like a normal sharp edged weapon. I mean, piercing Cardin's skin and causing him to bleed instead of turning him to dust on contact? Perhaps I missed an explanation somewhere?
12/7/2015 c4 10ultima-owner
nice aim with the throw
12/7/2015 c4 1Thorfaxdragonkin
Poor naruto everything he knew is gone and its just sinking in
12/7/2015 c2 1PanickingNoob
Well that could have been way worse. And kind of funny how Weiss and Naruto talk alike XD I guess she does has a mind of a grumbling old man then considering Naruto's age XD
12/7/2015 c1 PanickingNoob
Interesting start there XD and Yang really unlucky to think Naruto would pay for her
12/7/2015 c3 1insanemaelstorm
Awesome chapter. I liked the fight scenes. I also liked the character interaction. I liked pur portrayal of pyrrha. Wonder what happened to Juane. Can't wait for more
12/7/2015 c2 insanemaelstorm
Nice. So naruto had met the full rwby team. I liked the character interaction. Poor yang.
12/7/2015 c1 insanemaelstorm
Nice chapter. So an immortal, op naruto in rwby universe. I like how naruto is portraying his semblance. I am also liking how well you are blending the naruto verse with the ruby verse. I also like your portrayal of a wise naruto.
12/7/2015 c2 19redlox2
This is a very interesting so far! So no Jaune? Can't say I am overly sad about that...
12/7/2015 c3 30Dragoon Galaxy
A Naruto/Pyrrha pairing sounds good and I'm loving the way Naruto riles Yang up
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