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7/28/2017 c1 38StarlingChild4
I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who wanted a little something more in Sam and Rosie's romance. :) This was sweet and bittersweet at the same time. 3
5/23/2017 c1 2k+Hawki
-“…should be sleeping to,”

Should be “too.”

-“…that he is outside the shire…”

Should be “Shire.”

-“…the first time he court me.”

Think that should be “courted.”

-There’s some other iffy capitalization stuff, but that covers the meat of it. So, this is…well, can’t really identify the form. Granted, I’m not really one to analyse poetry. But, decent job.
12/14/2015 c1 21Psycho Tangerine
'Passed' should be 'past'. Poor Rosie had no idea how Sam was doing. Nice.

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