for New World10/15/2016 c10 chaosrin
lasers huh, its a bit boring, honesty thought they're going to do some mental willpower battle before show her epic demigod mind/memory or whatever.
lasers huh, its a bit boring, honesty thought they're going to do some mental willpower battle before show her epic demigod mind/memory or whatever.
10/15/2016 c10 SarahTaylorTam
Oh the lady is about to be schooled ) another great chapter keep up the good work
Oh the lady is about to be schooled ) another great chapter keep up the good work
10/15/2016 c10 
22foggraven
Arghh! How can you leave it there?! I really, really hope you get around to uploading the next chapter soon. You got me with that cliffhanger real good. Talk about a tease.
22foggravenArghh! How can you leave it there?! I really, really hope you get around to uploading the next chapter soon. You got me with that cliffhanger real good. Talk about a tease.
10/15/2016 c10 yesboss21
Oh, we got a badass overhear!, damn this chapter was epic but kinda, no wait, it is a short chapter
Oh, we got a badass overhear!, damn this chapter was epic but kinda, no wait, it is a short chapter
10/11/2016 c9 Guest
Really looking forward to the next chapter of the story
Really looking forward to the next chapter of the story
10/10/2016 c9 Joe
Love it can't wait for the next chapter.
Love it can't wait for the next chapter.
10/3/2016 c9 1kapuis
I like the the chapter 8 and especially the 9. Fae's attitude with the elf is funny and I like the surprise of the elfs and their indignation. The meeting with Celeborn and Galadriel is good and I look forward to see more interaction between Galadriel and Fae.
I wonder if Elrond and his children will go in Lothlorien for see Celebrian.
I look really forward to see the next chapter.
1kapuisI like the the chapter 8 and especially the 9. Fae's attitude with the elf is funny and I like the surprise of the elfs and their indignation. The meeting with Celeborn and Galadriel is good and I look forward to see more interaction between Galadriel and Fae.
I wonder if Elrond and his children will go in Lothlorien for see Celebrian.
I look really forward to see the next chapter.