
11/8/2016 c1 akxx
I just read this again and recommended it a group page on facebook. It's so underrated and beautiful. Hope all is well lovely. akxx
I just read this again and recommended it a group page on facebook. It's so underrated and beautiful. Hope all is well lovely. akxx
7/24/2016 c1 AKxx
Fml. I meant 'I can definitely see why this story WON first place'. Forgive me, I just woke up aha.
Fml. I meant 'I can definitely see why this story WON first place'. Forgive me, I just woke up aha.
7/24/2016 c1 AKxx
I can definitely see why this story one first-place. The pairing is entirely unusual - except in one vampire fic I read a few years ago - and done so well. I initially thought that the disorderly sequence would be rather jarring to read, but it flowed perfectly. I resisted the urge to read in chronological order and followed the advice at the start of the fic. There aren't many errors, and I really appreciate that in a fic. Unlike mine haha. This is definitely one of the softer versions of Blaise I've read, but I quite enjoyed it. He wasn't necessarily 'fluffy', but he was sweet at times? It was really quite lovely to read. I was almost expecting a tragic ending- I could even feel my emotions starting to bubble up as I neared the end, waiting on the death of (I expected) Padma. Thankfully, I didn't cry and neither died.
I rarely go onto my readers' profiles and check out their stories - 'cause I get asked to do it all the time, and my following list is at two hundred of unread stories. But I'm glad I did glance at your profile, because I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'll definitely be sussing out some of your other fics when I've cleared my plate a bit (I need to finish His Persephone- I'm stuck halfway through and it's killing me!). AKxx
I can definitely see why this story one first-place. The pairing is entirely unusual - except in one vampire fic I read a few years ago - and done so well. I initially thought that the disorderly sequence would be rather jarring to read, but it flowed perfectly. I resisted the urge to read in chronological order and followed the advice at the start of the fic. There aren't many errors, and I really appreciate that in a fic. Unlike mine haha. This is definitely one of the softer versions of Blaise I've read, but I quite enjoyed it. He wasn't necessarily 'fluffy', but he was sweet at times? It was really quite lovely to read. I was almost expecting a tragic ending- I could even feel my emotions starting to bubble up as I neared the end, waiting on the death of (I expected) Padma. Thankfully, I didn't cry and neither died.
I rarely go onto my readers' profiles and check out their stories - 'cause I get asked to do it all the time, and my following list is at two hundred of unread stories. But I'm glad I did glance at your profile, because I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'll definitely be sussing out some of your other fics when I've cleared my plate a bit (I need to finish His Persephone- I'm stuck halfway through and it's killing me!). AKxx
5/29/2016 c1
6percy-potter-pond
I really liked this story! An interesting structure and it was a lovely plot - one that I've never thought of before.

I really liked this story! An interesting structure and it was a lovely plot - one that I've never thought of before.
5/13/2016 c1 hello-it's-me
this was a well written story. not much plot, but lots of fluffiness. 3 also, very a different pairing than the usual. liked it a lot. have a nice day. :)
this was a well written story. not much plot, but lots of fluffiness. 3 also, very a different pairing than the usual. liked it a lot. have a nice day. :)
2/26/2016 c1
89babyvfan
I think you did a good job. So far I don't see that may errors, but there's nothing wrong with re-reading. I have to give you props, dude. I never would have thought of Blaise being with Paravitti but you made it work. And it was so cute

I think you did a good job. So far I don't see that may errors, but there's nothing wrong with re-reading. I have to give you props, dude. I never would have thought of Blaise being with Paravitti but you made it work. And it was so cute
2/18/2016 c1
28cecelle
This was a story that goes the way that Snape would have wished his had gone, doesn't it? Falling in with a wrong crowd, losing the girl you love, being sure you can get her back, asking her forgiveness... I am glad that Parvati and Blaise did get that second chance. I can't blame him for objecting to being "Blaisey" though, LOL! My favorite line was "If I die before I kill Fenrir Greyback, will you kill him for me?" I love her strength and resolve hiding behind the "It Girl" facade.

This was a story that goes the way that Snape would have wished his had gone, doesn't it? Falling in with a wrong crowd, losing the girl you love, being sure you can get her back, asking her forgiveness... I am glad that Parvati and Blaise did get that second chance. I can't blame him for objecting to being "Blaisey" though, LOL! My favorite line was "If I die before I kill Fenrir Greyback, will you kill him for me?" I love her strength and resolve hiding behind the "It Girl" facade.
1/5/2016 c1
472Angel N Darkness
At first this story was confusing to me with the way that the numbers jumped around but I did eventually get used to it before the end of the story... Lol... I do like how you wrote the pairing and I loved seeing special events in their lives... Blaise in the end was very sweet.

At first this story was confusing to me with the way that the numbers jumped around but I did eventually get used to it before the end of the story... Lol... I do like how you wrote the pairing and I loved seeing special events in their lives... Blaise in the end was very sweet.