for Blood Vampire5/8/2016 c3 Residenthobo
Idunno really.
I mean, the good hunter is a person who slaughters gods and nightmares, consuming their blood and taking their power for his or her own, calling prey all who live in the darkness and shadows.
Saizou, well, he doesn't really compare…
Though I guess that Cayde might be from early game.
Like I said, i don't really know. I'm not all that happy about the fight, but since your story is intriguing and well written you've got yourself another favourite from me.
Idunno really.
I mean, the good hunter is a person who slaughters gods and nightmares, consuming their blood and taking their power for his or her own, calling prey all who live in the darkness and shadows.
Saizou, well, he doesn't really compare…
Though I guess that Cayde might be from early game.
Like I said, i don't really know. I'm not all that happy about the fight, but since your story is intriguing and well written you've got yourself another favourite from me.
3/30/2016 c3 
5Flight Nest
hmm i aggre to make cayde a great one maybe look luke the moon presence or other greatone
5Flight Nesthmm i aggre to make cayde a great one maybe look luke the moon presence or other greatone
3/29/2016 c2 Abrams 1559
I hope cause becomes a great old one. Then he would actually be a monster and easily a s class monster. Since great ones are basically gods even if you destroy their body their mind still is alive and will reform since we see the same old ones multiple times.
I hope cause becomes a great old one. Then he would actually be a monster and easily a s class monster. Since great ones are basically gods even if you destroy their body their mind still is alive and will reform since we see the same old ones multiple times.
3/8/2016 c1 2Shigure-ame
Irish reviewer here. First about 80% of the population/country hasnt spoken irish in over 150 years, because the British made it illegal to do so. (Much like the Japanese occupation of Korea but more permanent) A Dubliner especially wouldnt have fluent Irish as Dublin was the centre of British occupation. It is still taught in schools but only at a basic level like any foriegn language.
Second, Dia Duit or dhuit (if lenited, it varies throughout the country) is a much more common greeting. Meaning Hello / good morning.
Third Siul doesnt mean go/going it is used in some Irish colloquialisms as such but it means walk. Going out together would be glossed as walking out together in Irish. What you want is ag dul. Ta me ag dul... I am going... altenatively Cad a tharla... what is happening/happened...might also work
2Shigure-ameIrish reviewer here. First about 80% of the population/country hasnt spoken irish in over 150 years, because the British made it illegal to do so. (Much like the Japanese occupation of Korea but more permanent) A Dubliner especially wouldnt have fluent Irish as Dublin was the centre of British occupation. It is still taught in schools but only at a basic level like any foriegn language.
Second, Dia Duit or dhuit (if lenited, it varies throughout the country) is a much more common greeting. Meaning Hello / good morning.
Third Siul doesnt mean go/going it is used in some Irish colloquialisms as such but it means walk. Going out together would be glossed as walking out together in Irish. What you want is ag dul. Ta me ag dul... I am going... altenatively Cad a tharla... what is happening/happened...might also work
2/28/2016 c3 Nidle
Getting better at bringing out the details! Keep it up! Also, quick question, what level is Cayde at the moment? Will he be able to level up and get stronger from the blood echoes he'll (hopefully) receive from the monsters he slays?
Getting better at bringing out the details! Keep it up! Also, quick question, what level is Cayde at the moment? Will he be able to level up and get stronger from the blood echoes he'll (hopefully) receive from the monsters he slays?
2/27/2016 c3 Guest
i find it odd that Cayde would shake in fear to someone like inner moka. the man has faced cosmic entities, died multiple times , and somehow he froze in fear to a hot busty vampire and when he felt the energy coming from inner moka to feel like the vilebloods called it fool so i'm guessing he has some hatred towards them but how much and wouldn't he's hatred towards them outweigh the fear he felt when he saw inner moka
i find it odd that Cayde would shake in fear to someone like inner moka. the man has faced cosmic entities, died multiple times , and somehow he froze in fear to a hot busty vampire and when he felt the energy coming from inner moka to feel like the vilebloods called it fool so i'm guessing he has some hatred towards them but how much and wouldn't he's hatred towards them outweigh the fear he felt when he saw inner moka
2/29/2016 c3 1drake202
A really great fight well written and full of detail though inner Moka knowing about the Hunter's was a suprise maybe we'll learn more how these monsters knew about the Yarnham Hunter's but as for your reasons why the Hunter struggled against the Orc well I agree and disagree with your reasons I agree that the Hunter had to overcome monsters and Hunters that out classed him in both speed, strength, powers, and skill but he overcame them all through sheer tenacity and from his losses thr Hunter became stronger and more skillful so he should have been able to beat the orc pretty handily after fighting all the monsters and former Hunter's that would make the Orc seem like nothing but still this was the Hunter's first fight against these kind of monsters so now he'll know what to expect and plan accordingly anyways still a great written chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one
1drake202A really great fight well written and full of detail though inner Moka knowing about the Hunter's was a suprise maybe we'll learn more how these monsters knew about the Yarnham Hunter's but as for your reasons why the Hunter struggled against the Orc well I agree and disagree with your reasons I agree that the Hunter had to overcome monsters and Hunters that out classed him in both speed, strength, powers, and skill but he overcame them all through sheer tenacity and from his losses thr Hunter became stronger and more skillful so he should have been able to beat the orc pretty handily after fighting all the monsters and former Hunter's that would make the Orc seem like nothing but still this was the Hunter's first fight against these kind of monsters so now he'll know what to expect and plan accordingly anyways still a great written chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one
2/27/2016 c3 Guest
So how much does Cayde hate the vilebloods
So how much does Cayde hate the vilebloods
2/28/2016 c3 3Nidle
I'm writing another review since I'm not sure if my other one went through. Amazing job with the fight scene! You're getting better and bringing in the details and overall atmosphere of the story, so keep it up! Also, quick question: Will Cayde be able to level up? And what level is he at the moment, since it seems like he's barely used any of his blood echoes to level up.
3NidleI'm writing another review since I'm not sure if my other one went through. Amazing job with the fight scene! You're getting better and bringing in the details and overall atmosphere of the story, so keep it up! Also, quick question: Will Cayde be able to level up? And what level is he at the moment, since it seems like he's barely used any of his blood echoes to level up.
2/27/2016 c3 Atthetop
Good detailed fight, and again well written, you got a good thing going here keep up the good work. PS love The Hunter's accent. PPS love that Bloodborne and RxV exist in the same world.
Good detailed fight, and again well written, you got a good thing going here keep up the good work. PS love The Hunter's accent. PPS love that Bloodborne and RxV exist in the same world.
2/27/2016 c3 4ElektrikRage
I don't think I can agree with your reasoning in why Cayde was struggling against Saizou. Yharnam never struck me as the place where you can go far by being reluctant; you either half ass it and keep dying repeatedly or give it your all and succeed eventually.
Truthfully, I think that Cayde's reluctance is simply a handwave to show off Inner Moka, which is a trait I often see in Rosario Vampire crossovers. Characters that by all means should be able to beat down Saizou handily without Inner Moka's help, somehow needing her help anyways just so that she can make an appearance.
Also, as a retrospective on the last few chapters, shouldn't Moka be mutating horrifically because of the cosmic horror shenanigans going on with the Hunter's blood? My apologies for the nitpicky rants, but I feel that these things have to be said, or mentioned.
4ElektrikRageI don't think I can agree with your reasoning in why Cayde was struggling against Saizou. Yharnam never struck me as the place where you can go far by being reluctant; you either half ass it and keep dying repeatedly or give it your all and succeed eventually.
Truthfully, I think that Cayde's reluctance is simply a handwave to show off Inner Moka, which is a trait I often see in Rosario Vampire crossovers. Characters that by all means should be able to beat down Saizou handily without Inner Moka's help, somehow needing her help anyways just so that she can make an appearance.
Also, as a retrospective on the last few chapters, shouldn't Moka be mutating horrifically because of the cosmic horror shenanigans going on with the Hunter's blood? My apologies for the nitpicky rants, but I feel that these things have to be said, or mentioned.
2/27/2016 c3 Lovnag
Well, I'm kind of unsure about how that went. I mean, if Cayde knows about Vileblood and has met Annalise, he for sure fought enemies much worse that Saizou.
Well, I'm kind of unsure about how that went. I mean, if Cayde knows about Vileblood and has met Annalise, he for sure fought enemies much worse that Saizou.
2/26/2016 c2 Atthetop
Interesting Bloodborne crossover story, even giving The Hunter a Bristish accent, also Bloodborne existing in RxV world (or did i read that wrong?) interesting, VERY curious to see what happens keep up the good work.
Interesting Bloodborne crossover story, even giving The Hunter a Bristish accent, also Bloodborne existing in RxV world (or did i read that wrong?) interesting, VERY curious to see what happens keep up the good work.
2/19/2016 c2 Wraith's Heart
Better chapter. Catches more grit than the last, though some of the mono- and dialogue seems a bit disjointed and downright odd to me; like that part where Cayde thinks of the ...irony(?) of the school's "kill all humans on the grounds" policy and somehow ends up mentally commenting on the fact that he doesn't qualify as human. I had to read that over a bit trying to understand it. On an offside, will there be anything on side effects of Moka drinking Cayde's blood (Great Ones so trump vampires. Especially anime vampires)?
Better chapter. Catches more grit than the last, though some of the mono- and dialogue seems a bit disjointed and downright odd to me; like that part where Cayde thinks of the ...irony(?) of the school's "kill all humans on the grounds" policy and somehow ends up mentally commenting on the fact that he doesn't qualify as human. I had to read that over a bit trying to understand it. On an offside, will there be anything on side effects of Moka drinking Cayde's blood (Great Ones so trump vampires. Especially anime vampires)?