for Sexual Frustrations of a Suicune10/17/2018 c10 
15Chaos Breaker Dragon
sf of a suicune is a good fic, its well written and there are some good lemon scenes, but my problems are with the characters, its never explained why seth and jordan bully deelia, and the scene of drake punching her in the stomach was totally unnecessary in my sincere opinion, i think that this pic should have focused more on both deelia and drake more then deelia and her girlfriends, amber was shown to be quite manipulative and this bothered me, deelia forgave her brothers way to fast, and the wedding and the ending was pretty ok.
15Chaos Breaker Dragonsf of a suicune is a good fic, its well written and there are some good lemon scenes, but my problems are with the characters, its never explained why seth and jordan bully deelia, and the scene of drake punching her in the stomach was totally unnecessary in my sincere opinion, i think that this pic should have focused more on both deelia and drake more then deelia and her girlfriends, amber was shown to be quite manipulative and this bothered me, deelia forgave her brothers way to fast, and the wedding and the ending was pretty ok.
10/17/2018 c1 4KomaspireXTea
So, i never flamed on this syte, but this is embarassing, i find all kinds of smut stories to be ESPECIALLY TRASHY . . .but this . . . this is more; this is litterally fifty shades of gray but with FUCKING ANIMALS, and no; anthro does NOT justify you perving over FUCKING TIGERS BEING RAPED BY HORSES, THATS NOT A FUCKING OPTION.
Im not a complete furry witch hunter, im not, but i know when something is just . . . how do i say it . . . "Made For Kink Only"; There is no passion in this shitty smut story, the finale is cliché, and the only "Interesting" character, that being the uncle of jesus-kun; gets no exposition, lugia gets no exposition and WORST OF ALL, WE NEVER KNOW WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED TO THE REST OF THE CHARACTERS!
Yea the sequel is a thing but that gets his own review, it also doesn't explain shit.
In the end, i feel like this shit doesn't deserve praise, as its just a bisexual hentai collection; if thats what you like then go ahead, but remember that you're supporting someone that writes about tigers having kids with kirito as a horse.
4KomaspireXTeaSo, i never flamed on this syte, but this is embarassing, i find all kinds of smut stories to be ESPECIALLY TRASHY . . .but this . . . this is more; this is litterally fifty shades of gray but with FUCKING ANIMALS, and no; anthro does NOT justify you perving over FUCKING TIGERS BEING RAPED BY HORSES, THATS NOT A FUCKING OPTION.
Im not a complete furry witch hunter, im not, but i know when something is just . . . how do i say it . . . "Made For Kink Only"; There is no passion in this shitty smut story, the finale is cliché, and the only "Interesting" character, that being the uncle of jesus-kun; gets no exposition, lugia gets no exposition and WORST OF ALL, WE NEVER KNOW WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED TO THE REST OF THE CHARACTERS!
Yea the sequel is a thing but that gets his own review, it also doesn't explain shit.
In the end, i feel like this shit doesn't deserve praise, as its just a bisexual hentai collection; if thats what you like then go ahead, but remember that you're supporting someone that writes about tigers having kids with kirito as a horse.
7/30/2016 c5 1Brony of Ponies
Man oh man. It's been while ince i've found a well written plot like this! The only quarrels I have are that the huge paragraphs are easy to get lost in and I often found myself reading back a few times, and a few minor pelling errors and missing words. But other wise this is an aazing story with an immersive plot!
1Brony of PoniesMan oh man. It's been while ince i've found a well written plot like this! The only quarrels I have are that the huge paragraphs are easy to get lost in and I often found myself reading back a few times, and a few minor pelling errors and missing words. But other wise this is an aazing story with an immersive plot!
12/25/2015 c2 4yveshku
The rape scene is something I didn't expect though. Especially from Lia. I sort of the that might have been from Rai. But yes, I do understand that there are people out there who would have wanted that.
And going into another pokemon's mind surprised me a bit as well.
4yveshkuThe rape scene is something I didn't expect though. Especially from Lia. I sort of the that might have been from Rai. But yes, I do understand that there are people out there who would have wanted that.
And going into another pokemon's mind surprised me a bit as well.
12/25/2015 c1 yveshku
Wasn't Dusk Zoroark the father of Josh in Sexual Interests of a Shaymin?
The connection made me think for a few seconds. I like that you made me have to think about these things.
Wasn't Dusk Zoroark the father of Josh in Sexual Interests of a Shaymin?
The connection made me think for a few seconds. I like that you made me have to think about these things.
12/25/2015 c10 yveshku
I certainly loved reading this. The anthro part didn't bother me, I'm fine with that. I also noticed how Dusk Zoroark was mentioned in this. I will be glad when the second story comes out. And for the record, I work from my phone. It's nice that you were able to work from your 3ds. I love the story and all of it. It's wonderful Zyxa.
I certainly loved reading this. The anthro part didn't bother me, I'm fine with that. I also noticed how Dusk Zoroark was mentioned in this. I will be glad when the second story comes out. And for the record, I work from my phone. It's nice that you were able to work from your 3ds. I love the story and all of it. It's wonderful Zyxa.
12/21/2015 c10 10Lunaris.Shade
Is it right to say i cried during tbe last chap? I mean, reading about someone starting a new life with the one they love, its just so heartwarming. Thank you for putting this in the world...
10Lunaris.ShadeIs it right to say i cried during tbe last chap? I mean, reading about someone starting a new life with the one they love, its just so heartwarming. Thank you for putting this in the world...
12/21/2015 c7 Lunaris.Shade
I agree with Raiden, WHAT THE ACTUAL FUUUUCK? People say im fucked up in the head, that i should be in a psych ward. This was both disturbing AND arousing. Congratulations. Youve mindfucked me.
I agree with Raiden, WHAT THE ACTUAL FUUUUCK? People say im fucked up in the head, that i should be in a psych ward. This was both disturbing AND arousing. Congratulations. Youve mindfucked me.
12/20/2015 c5 Lunaris.Shade
OK, not the reaction i was expecting from Dee. I figured she would kill one or both of them lik i would have, but a threesome is just .
OK, not the reaction i was expecting from Dee. I figured she would kill one or both of them lik i would have, but a threesome is just .
12/20/2015 c4 Lunaris.Shade
YAY! LESBIAN GANGBANG PARTY! The only thing missing from THAT pancake party is some spicy italian sausage! LOL
YAY! LESBIAN GANGBANG PARTY! The only thing missing from THAT pancake party is some spicy italian sausage! LOL
12/20/2015 c3 Lunaris.Shade
... i guess u beat me to it. You officially got tired of waiting, so you did the L4D (LEMONS FOR DAYS not Left 4 Dead) request yourself. mad, what makes you think id be mad? Its definitely better than what i couldve done anyway. Keep it up!
... i guess u beat me to it. You officially got tired of waiting, so you did the L4D (LEMONS FOR DAYS not Left 4 Dead) request yourself. mad, what makes you think id be mad? Its definitely better than what i couldve done anyway. Keep it up!
12/20/2015 c2 Lunaris.Shade
Im kinda at a crossroads for the bi thing. Im not gonna tell why on the global comment section, but its kind of a touchy subject for me... Great work as always, and like normal, if the characters fucked, im there!
Im kinda at a crossroads for the bi thing. Im not gonna tell why on the global comment section, but its kind of a touchy subject for me... Great work as always, and like normal, if the characters fucked, im there!
12/20/2015 c1 Lunaris.Shade
Another great addition to . Why i cant have ideas as fresh or origial as this, i have no clue. Anyway, i !
Another great addition to . Why i cant have ideas as fresh or origial as this, i have no clue. Anyway, i !