for The Crimson Speedster9/8 c21 Guest
Could you do a fan fiction series on law and order from the original law in order from 1990 to the one today. Like a person from our world s friendly find themselves in the world of Law and order. Could you do a book series on that? It'll be interesting to see and read.
Could you do a fan fiction series on law and order from the original law in order from 1990 to the one today. Like a person from our world s friendly find themselves in the world of Law and order. Could you do a book series on that? It'll be interesting to see and read.
9/2 c21 niideadequenombremecoloco
Amazing chapter. Loved to see that Naruto is back with The Nine!
I also love that you are taking your time with the harem, considering it is not a normal thing here
Amazing chapter. Loved to see that Naruto is back with The Nine!
I also love that you are taking your time with the harem, considering it is not a normal thing here
9/2 c21 fallendemon248
Very good chapter and love that you set up black lightning for the future, can't wait for more multiverse adventures
Very good chapter and love that you set up black lightning for the future, can't wait for more multiverse adventures
8/31 c21 Guest
glad things are going well for Naruto's expansion efforts
glad things are going well for Naruto's expansion efforts
8/31 c21 
13Power of Magic
Here's hoping that Naruto and Jiraiya will get more info about the Nine, along with who the main leaders are and who's working for/with them. I wonder if Black Lightning will join the Justice League and if Anissa already has her powers at this point. Glad that Naruto and the others went to visit Kara and that they were able to help her and Superman against some of Superman's villains, now they need to stop what is obviously a clone of Supergirl
13Power of MagicHere's hoping that Naruto and Jiraiya will get more info about the Nine, along with who the main leaders are and who's working for/with them. I wonder if Black Lightning will join the Justice League and if Anissa already has her powers at this point. Glad that Naruto and the others went to visit Kara and that they were able to help her and Superman against some of Superman's villains, now they need to stop what is obviously a clone of Supergirl
8/30 c21 Samuel Santillan
I loved it, good chapter.
It was very good, I especially loved that the team met Kara and her sister and that they also began a journey through the multiverse.
Thanks for uploading a new chapter.
I loved it, good chapter.
It was very good, I especially loved that the team met Kara and her sister and that they also began a journey through the multiverse.
Thanks for uploading a new chapter.
8/6 c20 Savageverse
Ok you have a major issue besides it being too long, you need to break up the giant walls of text into multiple paragraphs and you can't start a sentence with and
Ok you have a major issue besides it being too long, you need to break up the giant walls of text into multiple paragraphs and you can't start a sentence with and