4/9/2023 c6 12angelv62004
I talked to my cousins and there parents the promise me it won't happen again. which is why for now on the won't be using my tablet anymore.
I've already deleted the story they mabe.
It always makes me mad when they do something like this, especially when it evolves them taking people's things and going threw there stuff without permission.
I talked to my cousins and there parents the promise me it won't happen again. which is why for now on the won't be using my tablet anymore.
I've already deleted the story they mabe.
It always makes me mad when they do something like this, especially when it evolves them taking people's things and going threw there stuff without permission.
4/9/2023 c14 angelv62004
I'm so sorry man I didn't make the Crimson Speedster my version it was my cousins when I let them borrow my tablet to read stories sometimes. They do something like this all the time without my permission
I'm so sorry man I didn't make the Crimson Speedster my version it was my cousins when I let them borrow my tablet to read stories sometimes. They do something like this all the time without my permission
4/1/2023 c15 Badger12
We are getting closer to legends part which I’m really interested in. Great chapter and I can’t wait for more
We are getting closer to legends part which I’m really interested in. Great chapter and I can’t wait for more
3/31/2023 c15 Guest
Great chapter can't wait for the next one also like how you added the implied lemon as well
Great chapter can't wait for the next one also like how you added the implied lemon as well
4/1/2023 c15 3Raidentensho
very nice. though, for his Speed Force armor I was expecting him to make it with the Vibranium, or make a secondary layer from his Gear symbol(like the Black Panther suit). having it charged with his energies making it a bit easier to both use the kinetic energy to keep running longer, and take the high speed impacts a bit easier. looking forward to the end of the arc, and the aftermath of his multiverse travels he will tell about. also wondering if Naruto will pop the question with both a ring, and a new suit in one for Linda using the Vibranium for better protection. this will be epic. until then, later!
very nice. though, for his Speed Force armor I was expecting him to make it with the Vibranium, or make a secondary layer from his Gear symbol(like the Black Panther suit). having it charged with his energies making it a bit easier to both use the kinetic energy to keep running longer, and take the high speed impacts a bit easier. looking forward to the end of the arc, and the aftermath of his multiverse travels he will tell about. also wondering if Naruto will pop the question with both a ring, and a new suit in one for Linda using the Vibranium for better protection. this will be epic. until then, later!
4/1/2023 c15 niideadequenombremecoloco
The chapter was amazing.
How the team tried to prepare for Zoom, but he ended up outmaneuvering them, but truth be said I was expecting Naruto to come back at that moment, so it came as a surprise to see him return against Grodd, on a side note it gave me goosebumps and I jumped of my chair when it happened, talk about exaggerated reaction and waiting for the moment.
The reunion was amazing, I tried to write how it felt to me but I couldn’t think of a way of describing it, but just so you know it exceeded all my expectations.
Also, I really want to see Naruto's reunion with Team Arrow. I don’t really remember if Laurel is dead or not at this point, so he could end up changing some big things.
Keep up the incredible work and until the next update.
PD. I’m 99% sure that Naruto will propose to Linda, after all that time apart from each other and how loving they’re reunion was.
The chapter was amazing.
How the team tried to prepare for Zoom, but he ended up outmaneuvering them, but truth be said I was expecting Naruto to come back at that moment, so it came as a surprise to see him return against Grodd, on a side note it gave me goosebumps and I jumped of my chair when it happened, talk about exaggerated reaction and waiting for the moment.
The reunion was amazing, I tried to write how it felt to me but I couldn’t think of a way of describing it, but just so you know it exceeded all my expectations.
Also, I really want to see Naruto's reunion with Team Arrow. I don’t really remember if Laurel is dead or not at this point, so he could end up changing some big things.
Keep up the incredible work and until the next update.
PD. I’m 99% sure that Naruto will propose to Linda, after all that time apart from each other and how loving they’re reunion was.