for Fumbles & Fairytales7/27/2016 c3 Guest
Aw... I feel so bad for Arthur. This is such a sad story TBH.
Aw... I feel so bad for Arthur. This is such a sad story TBH.
4/7/2016 c3 Algy Pond
Your hospice stories are the best hetalia fanfictions I've read in a long time, maybe ever! You are extremely talented and I actually cried several times while reading The King and I! Please keep writing because your skill is awe inspiring to me!
Your hospice stories are the best hetalia fanfictions I've read in a long time, maybe ever! You are extremely talented and I actually cried several times while reading The King and I! Please keep writing because your skill is awe inspiring to me!
3/13/2016 c3 
26QuirkyRevelations
Geez, I've missed your work :) Unfortunately, school is keeping me UBER busy this semester so fanfiction is sort of taking a backseat, both reading it and writing it. However, I do intend to keep up with your work :)
I don't know how you do it, but you are always somehow able to create these sensations and feelings within the characters that the readers can feel as well. For a moment, I felt the same scorching heat as Alfred did and the disorientation that Arthur was experiencing. Honestly, I don't know much about schizophrenia, but everything that Arthur is feeling and thinking is so life-like that it's incredible. As usual, keep up the excellent work :D
26QuirkyRevelationsGeez, I've missed your work :) Unfortunately, school is keeping me UBER busy this semester so fanfiction is sort of taking a backseat, both reading it and writing it. However, I do intend to keep up with your work :)
I don't know how you do it, but you are always somehow able to create these sensations and feelings within the characters that the readers can feel as well. For a moment, I felt the same scorching heat as Alfred did and the disorientation that Arthur was experiencing. Honestly, I don't know much about schizophrenia, but everything that Arthur is feeling and thinking is so life-like that it's incredible. As usual, keep up the excellent work :D
3/9/2016 c3 61ravengal
Wow. Poor Arthur. He's under so much stress. Constantly. I can't imagine what it's like living with that much fear and paranoia for ten years.
It was very well-described! I could feel his pain through the words on the page.
Oh and something I forgot to mention about chapter one. Being British myself, I can say that 'bullocks' is not the word we tend to swear with. Replace the 'u' with an 'o' and you'll have the correct word.
They actually have two completely different meanings and we're not talking about 'castrated male bovine animals' when we swear. XD Look the other one up and you'll see what I mean.
There were a couple of mistakes here and there, but, on the whole, it was an enjoyable read and I'm eager to see more.
ravengal out x
61ravengalWow. Poor Arthur. He's under so much stress. Constantly. I can't imagine what it's like living with that much fear and paranoia for ten years.
It was very well-described! I could feel his pain through the words on the page.
Oh and something I forgot to mention about chapter one. Being British myself, I can say that 'bullocks' is not the word we tend to swear with. Replace the 'u' with an 'o' and you'll have the correct word.
They actually have two completely different meanings and we're not talking about 'castrated male bovine animals' when we swear. XD Look the other one up and you'll see what I mean.
There were a couple of mistakes here and there, but, on the whole, it was an enjoyable read and I'm eager to see more.
ravengal out x
3/5/2016 c3 11Kirani56
Oh man...reading that was so very...confusing. No wonder Arthur's so frustrated. It's a really interesting type of reader-insert that really gives a good perspective! I love it! :D
Keep up the awesome writing :)
11Kirani56Oh man...reading that was so very...confusing. No wonder Arthur's so frustrated. It's a really interesting type of reader-insert that really gives a good perspective! I love it! :D
Keep up the awesome writing :)
3/5/2016 c3 11LudwigTheViolin
Davie? It's Davie! Thank you for updating! This story has really changed my perspective on mental illnesses. You're really talented!
11LudwigTheViolinDavie? It's Davie! Thank you for updating! This story has really changed my perspective on mental illnesses. You're really talented!
3/5/2016 c3 4TheAverageSpiderMan
I almost cried of happiness when I got the notification that this had been updated, but by the end of it I was almost crying for another reason. I love this! and I cant wait for the next chapter!
4TheAverageSpiderManI almost cried of happiness when I got the notification that this had been updated, but by the end of it I was almost crying for another reason. I love this! and I cant wait for the next chapter!
3/5/2016 c3 56LeFay Strent
I squealed when I saw this was updated. I have been WAITING for this! I've read quite a few of your stories now, and I've got to say, you have a way with making your writing emotionally impactful. It's amazing, and I can't see how this plays out. Well, I mean I've know snippets of what will happen because I've read the Prussia centric fic of yours that's set in this universe, but seeing it from their perspective is exciting!
56LeFay StrentI squealed when I saw this was updated. I have been WAITING for this! I've read quite a few of your stories now, and I've got to say, you have a way with making your writing emotionally impactful. It's amazing, and I can't see how this plays out. Well, I mean I've know snippets of what will happen because I've read the Prussia centric fic of yours that's set in this universe, but seeing it from their perspective is exciting!
3/5/2016 c3 9Sora Resi
Poor baby :(
The whole chapter was brilliant, but arthur's part was especially amazing. You're a good writer :)
9Sora ResiPoor baby :(
The whole chapter was brilliant, but arthur's part was especially amazing. You're a good writer :)
3/2/2016 c2 Chloe
Hi, I've read and love all your stories. I'm a nursing student that works at a.. sort of ward for slightly mentally disabled adults with psychiatric problems. Schizophrenia is definitely not uncommon and it has always interested me.
Sorry this is getting so long; what I really wanted to say is that it makes me so happy that you write these stories so accurately (there are so many stories out there that make me cringe) and I always wonder if you work in a medical field as well. I would love to see a chapter from Arthur's perspective, if that is possible. I think it could be very interesting.
Keep up the good work, I hope you'll update soon :)
Hi, I've read and love all your stories. I'm a nursing student that works at a.. sort of ward for slightly mentally disabled adults with psychiatric problems. Schizophrenia is definitely not uncommon and it has always interested me.
Sorry this is getting so long; what I really wanted to say is that it makes me so happy that you write these stories so accurately (there are so many stories out there that make me cringe) and I always wonder if you work in a medical field as well. I would love to see a chapter from Arthur's perspective, if that is possible. I think it could be very interesting.
Keep up the good work, I hope you'll update soon :)