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2/28/2016 c1 4the lowkey author
This is brilliant. I loved Arthur's reaction when he saw America, it hurt so much I couldn't bare it. Can't wait for the next chapter ;)
2/4/2016 c2 11Kirani56
Wow.
The old thoughts of the movie "A Beautiful Mind" are really returning to me. It's sad to know that a lot of people have their lives changed because of that. You did an awesome job with this! That research paid off :)
Update soon!
1/31/2016 c2 26QuirkyRevelations
Ah, what a reunion. I had a feeling something like this would play out. Good ol' Alfred for being his usual cheerful self and being the hero X3
Honestly, your remarkable work always has me pumped up and this story is definitely no different. I can't wait to see where you go with this and how USUK will develop. I'm also eager to see more flashbacks of Alfred and Arthur's past. Keep up the excellent work :D
1/31/2016 c1 pennilee
Another interesting fiction from you. You really like writing about psychiatric hospitals, huh? :) Thanks for this new one, subscribed.
1/30/2016 c2 56LeFay Strent
That ending made me want to both cry and hug them. Geezum, this is something else. There was...a certain suspense building from the beginning of the chapter, for when Alfred would meet Arthur, and I was anxious with Alfred, to see the extent of how Arthur's affected. But then Alfred coming in and thinking he can just cheer Arthur up and things will be better, I had to cover my face at that part. No Alfred...it doesn't work like that. But that was pretty fascinating, seeing Alfred's perspective before, during, and after meeting Arthur. It's interesting, since Alfred probably doesn't have much experience at all with mental illnesses, or so I'm assuming from his behavior towards this. Or maybe he was just completely fixated on the fact that this is Arthur they're talking about, and he just can't picture it, because this kind of thing doesn't happen to people we really know. A bit of both I would guess. But still, so fascinating to see Alfred's reaction for when the reality of it set in, but still see his determined personality push through it in the end. I like how he holds onto the fact that "Arthur was, after all, still Arthur." It's something very characteristic of him, even though others are like, "He's not the same anymore, Alfred." Hell, even Arthur seems to see himself as completely different, though that's not surprising. I do wonder about his life though, about the build up to this, what he was doing before, the same questions Al probably has I suppose. Oh! But it's so cool to see snippets of their high school time together woven in this story. It gives a concrete feel to their previous bond. Anywho, this is really great, so I hope to see more.
1/30/2016 c1 LeFay Strent
This is pretty neat. I likey.
1/28/2016 c1 Guest
Ahh~ I'm a hardcore FrUk shipper, but I've been waiting for the latest instalment of your hospital series~!
1/28/2016 c2 Rae Void
That was really cute, I love the story so far and hope you make another chapter, awesome work!
1/27/2016 c2 2 Lazy 2 Log In
AAAAAHHHHH!

(Also, it's sad that you need that note at the start -.-)
1/28/2016 c2 20CodeVassie
I don't know how you do it, but your writing makes me laugh and clutch my heart from feels at the same time. It's perfect. Thank you and I cannot wait for more!
1/28/2016 c2 4RandomReader01
I was bracing myself when you warned about Arthur's condition. I was hoping for the worse. I still am, 'cause I know you will eventually let Arthur show his even quirkier side. What you wrote in this chap is only a small part from a bigger picture (which I believe so...O.o )

But still, I'm glad Alfred didn't resolve to running away immediately(which is CERTAINLY not going to happen in a UsUk fic XD). And the process of his eventual decision to visit...it's just...Idk why but I feel so touched QwQ. It's true when they say about people visiting a psych patient, even if it's for a friend, they just won't go back as recent as possible. Being determined to catch up with their relationship, even if fully realizing how Arthur is, it's really brave and (insert heroic term) of Alfred. I would like to wish him keep up for better for worse, but you know what?

Of course he will! XD

P.S. haha didn't mean to turn this so lengthy but anyway, great chapter! Can't wait for the coming ones CX
1/27/2016 c2 ManifestDoom
Alfred could probably recall the name if he thought about it, but he couldn't think straight right now. He only cared about one thing. "Wherever Arthur Kirkland is."

THAT WAS MY FAVORITE PART AAAAAAAAAAAAA
1/27/2016 c2 9Sora Resi
Brilliant :) Thanks for the update!
1/27/2016 c2 5olivia71295
Another great chapter. And is it just me, or did you out in a Great Gatsby reference? So far, seeing things from Arthur and Alfred's point of view had been interesting. I'm glad you cleared up the whole accent disappearing issue. Thanks for the update.
1/27/2016 c2 4TheAverageSpiderMan
0.0 I'm so glad I followed this story! ahh I cant wait.
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