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4/2 c3 frdbrlw1
Sigh this again, nukes in space are ineffective. without an atmosphere they have a way higher dispersal rate which means minimal damage against armored ships. The only way nukes would work very well is if they did what the SGC does in stargate create a shaped charge to funnel the entire payload in one direction.
The biggest reason this is implausible is nukes do jack diddle to shields, there is a reason you never see them used in star trek. The same with kinetic weapons.
Kirk acting completely out of character: no attempt to communicate and charging into line of fire without a care in the world for possible casualties.
6/1/2019 c3 2sg07
This story has some potential but I could not truly follow it as the scenes jumped from Galatica to Star Trek to Cylons without any warning. To think that Kirk would allow nukes to hit his ship and lose 3 crew members is insane. He would be court marshaled at worst and lose his command at best for that level of incompetence. Also, Kirk didn't even try communicating? That is not his style. He has rules to go by and at least has to try follow Starfleet regulations. According to Cannon of both old and new Kirk has a PhD from Starfleet Academy and is above the genius level. Also, Star Trek shields are far superior and would have allowed them to do very well. The concussive force of nukes would have been felt but no real damage and it was also true in the TOS series. I hope you can fix the transitions to each scenes as it is frustrating and choppy reading. Also, Kirk is shown as a war monger just attacking any ole thing.
10/30/2016 c14 orionastro
very good new chapter , impressive battle , the shipyards of the federation must enter Total war production , churning out constitution Class ,and Ambassador Class warships , and the Colonials also must build more Battlestars , Gunstars , Cruisers , Battleships , to defeat the damned Cylons and the damned klingons . Cant hardly wait for the next chapters
10/30/2016 c14 bankai777
Now that was a bloody battle.
10/3/2016 c13 Guest
would be interesting to have the romulans in this as allies for the federation
8/15/2016 c3 DullReign82
You're missing breaks for this chapter so it kind of gets confusing. That was a nice to have power for Kirk and the Enterprise.
8/15/2016 c2 DullReign82
The chapters of little short for me, but I'm liking the action.
8/15/2016 c1 DullReign82
Wow Dramatic first chapter, I like the waring pov's.
8/15/2016 c13 50briwd
Good update. Seems this Starfleet has had to militarize itself whether it liked it or not...
8/15/2016 c13 orionastro
very good new chapter , i hope the romulans end up allying themselves with the federation and also the Tholians , to crush the damned Klingons and the damned Cylons once and for all
8/4/2016 c3 9NorJC
I have to agree with the other reviewers. The chapters are too short and the stunt that Kirk pulled with the nuclear missiles was criminal negligence on the part of a ship's captain to purposefully allow his ship to be harmed. Spock could have and should have removed him from command for such gross dereliction of duty. In the original series (in Patterns of Force) the planet where John Gill had screwed up their society launched nukes at the Enterprise and even though they were primitive and not likely to harm the ship, Kirk took out the missiles with phasers. That would be the safe, prudent thing to do rather than have the ship suffer damage. So having Kirk act so rashly, even for the reboot Kirk, just makes it difficult to continue with this story.
7/29/2016 c12 10Just a Crazy-Man
Yay Battlestar Prometheus arrives!
7/29/2016 c11 Just a Crazy-Man
Lov
7/23/2016 c12 bankai777
Have General Connors meet Sarek.
6/4/2016 c4 Guest
So...come aboard my ship and I'll just tell you all show you the whole ship including weapon capability you know cause you know you are human too. How is that realistic at all. This James T. Kirk must be a teenage fool letting complete strangers full disclosure of his ship & that stupid stunt with the warheads that killed 3 apparently disposable crewmen. What an idiot. Mutiny would be next.
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