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27Rae Smith Cobleigh
This was a surprisingly well-plotted, plausible P&P AU with well-written prose, good characterization, and many compelling OCs. I definitely enjoyed the journey. Thank you for sharing this with us, and I'm sorry to hear that people have plagiarized your work. I hope you continue having fun writing and building compelling worlds!
27Rae Smith CobleighThis was a surprisingly well-plotted, plausible P&P AU with well-written prose, good characterization, and many compelling OCs. I definitely enjoyed the journey. Thank you for sharing this with us, and I'm sorry to hear that people have plagiarized your work. I hope you continue having fun writing and building compelling worlds!
4/4 c8 horses4504
"I would leave you with no doubt that you are enough to make an old soldier curse the fate that brought him into your life six months too late." WHEWWWW that line gets me every time I read this!
"I would leave you with no doubt that you are enough to make an old soldier curse the fate that brought him into your life six months too late." WHEWWWW that line gets me every time I read this!
1/20 c16 an amazing read
哇哇哇哇Babsy太会写了，这个评论我一定要用中文，英文严重限制了我表达我的敬意和喜爱。
我没想到短短一周后我就找到了一个新的Mr. Darcy打破我心中的最拘谨的Mr Darcy的记录，这么隐忍这么克制的gentleman…哈哈哈哈哈我合理猜测Mr. Darcy每次看到那么可爱那么直率的Elizabeth但又不敢轻举妄动时，一定有一万只蚂蚁在身上爬的痛苦。
我们的Elizabeth真是爱情导师兼共情大师，她对情感的敏锐洞察力能够抚慰一切创伤后喧嚣的灵魂。与此同时，她依然是那个机敏、无礼、大胆、坚强的女孩，恨时直言不讳，爱时义无反顾。我感觉开场有点小脾气的Elizabeth真的特别可爱，在勇敢和临危不惧的外表下，还有一个充满自尊、惹毛了会骂人的小女孩。
Charlotte在原著中就是一个很值得深挖的魅力角色，看到有作品把她加到主角团我超级惊喜。这次她超乎寻常的清醒和坚韧不仅迷死了我也迷走了Richard，我为她圆满的结局发出心满意足的叹息。
Babsy有一个很新颖的角度。故事没有绝对的恶，每个不讨喜的角色转眼间又有了值得理解甚至同情的苦衷。在荒谬的爱的催化下，邪正的转化实在是太快。在灰色地带行走的Geoff和他奇怪的底线（干这行你人真的还怪好的嘞），以及谁又能想到他心中有一块如此温柔的爱情净土呢？还有他一本正经的“以爱之名”的绑架（虽然后面澄清了但是我还是看一次笑一次），就是这一刻我发现我彻底喜欢上了这个角色。Rosings的母女虽然是这场绑架的源头，但鉴于本书Lady Catherine没什么大病，那点老毛病使她最终落得一个孤苦伶仃的处境也是够惨的了。高傲的贵族见证自己的失落和衰败，没有什么痛苦比这更刻骨铭心。
Babsy笔下的爱情在我读过的同人作品里绝对出类拔萃。这个故事里有太多的爱情，虽然没有一对能比Elizabeth&Darcy更圆满，但都是真心诚意，各有各的壮丽。悄悄提一嘴背德文学，我觉得这个设定极有性张力，即使是在最冷静的角色Charlotte身上也能擦出爱情的火花。
哇哇哇哇Babsy太会写了，这个评论我一定要用中文，英文严重限制了我表达我的敬意和喜爱。
我没想到短短一周后我就找到了一个新的Mr. Darcy打破我心中的最拘谨的Mr Darcy的记录，这么隐忍这么克制的gentleman…哈哈哈哈哈我合理猜测Mr. Darcy每次看到那么可爱那么直率的Elizabeth但又不敢轻举妄动时，一定有一万只蚂蚁在身上爬的痛苦。
我们的Elizabeth真是爱情导师兼共情大师，她对情感的敏锐洞察力能够抚慰一切创伤后喧嚣的灵魂。与此同时，她依然是那个机敏、无礼、大胆、坚强的女孩，恨时直言不讳，爱时义无反顾。我感觉开场有点小脾气的Elizabeth真的特别可爱，在勇敢和临危不惧的外表下，还有一个充满自尊、惹毛了会骂人的小女孩。
Charlotte在原著中就是一个很值得深挖的魅力角色，看到有作品把她加到主角团我超级惊喜。这次她超乎寻常的清醒和坚韧不仅迷死了我也迷走了Richard，我为她圆满的结局发出心满意足的叹息。
Babsy有一个很新颖的角度。故事没有绝对的恶，每个不讨喜的角色转眼间又有了值得理解甚至同情的苦衷。在荒谬的爱的催化下，邪正的转化实在是太快。在灰色地带行走的Geoff和他奇怪的底线（干这行你人真的还怪好的嘞），以及谁又能想到他心中有一块如此温柔的爱情净土呢？还有他一本正经的“以爱之名”的绑架（虽然后面澄清了但是我还是看一次笑一次），就是这一刻我发现我彻底喜欢上了这个角色。Rosings的母女虽然是这场绑架的源头，但鉴于本书Lady Catherine没什么大病，那点老毛病使她最终落得一个孤苦伶仃的处境也是够惨的了。高傲的贵族见证自己的失落和衰败，没有什么痛苦比这更刻骨铭心。
Babsy笔下的爱情在我读过的同人作品里绝对出类拔萃。这个故事里有太多的爱情，虽然没有一对能比Elizabeth&Darcy更圆满，但都是真心诚意，各有各的壮丽。悄悄提一嘴背德文学，我觉得这个设定极有性张力，即使是在最冷静的角色Charlotte身上也能擦出爱情的火花。
1/1 c1 Colleen S
Oh boy! What was Mr Collins, Anne, And Lady Catherine up to? Gambling? And possibly Molly's father!?
Oh boy! What was Mr Collins, Anne, And Lady Catherine up to? Gambling? And possibly Molly's father!?
11/27/2024 c17 Denie1943
Thanks so much for this unique and touching story. I truly regret that you labored dilligently on the kidnapping and escape but there was almost no mention when William brought Lizzy to his fabulous estate and showed what their new life would be. Next thing we know in pops two children with no mention of the wedding night. Did you tire of the story as you got near the end? A few more chapters would have made this my all time favorite. Thanks for sharing. Stay well!
Thanks so much for this unique and touching story. I truly regret that you labored dilligently on the kidnapping and escape but there was almost no mention when William brought Lizzy to his fabulous estate and showed what their new life would be. Next thing we know in pops two children with no mention of the wedding night. Did you tire of the story as you got near the end? A few more chapters would have made this my all time favorite. Thanks for sharing. Stay well!
11/8/2024 c16 Colleen S
Lovely chapter!
Lovely chapter!
10/30/2024 c17 Guest
Thank you for this story. I only read completed stories so I wasn’t able to comment chapter by chapter. I through enjoyed it!
Thank you for this story. I only read completed stories so I wasn’t able to comment chapter by chapter. I through enjoyed it!
9/28/2024 c10 Picwick
This is an utter delight..something to relish and treasure. Thank you, dear author, for this treat!
This is an utter delight..something to relish and treasure. Thank you, dear author, for this treat!
4/12/2024 c8 Guest
This story is more about the budding romance between Charlotte and Col Fitzwilliam
This story is more about the budding romance between Charlotte and Col Fitzwilliam
4/12/2024 c4 Guest
A stupid writer who goes easy on the kidnappers,all of them,and then cries foul
A stupid writer who goes easy on the kidnappers,all of them,and then cries foul
4/12/2024 c3 Guest
Elizabeth is entitled,all that reading makes her think she's too smart. She can remain with her kidnappers. Too bad Darcy got mixed in this. While Col Fitzwilliam is romancing Charlotte not much will come off this crap story
Elizabeth is entitled,all that reading makes her think she's too smart. She can remain with her kidnappers. Too bad Darcy got mixed in this. While Col Fitzwilliam is romancing Charlotte not much will come off this crap story
4/12/2024 c1 Guest
Colonel Fitzwilliam is a retard.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is a retard.
4/12/2024 c16 Guest
Charlotte is an unlikable character
Charlotte is an unlikable character
4/7/2024 c16 Michelle H
What a fantastic story. I love your writing, I mean your WRITING. The turns of phrase, the inner dialogue, the dialogue, not just the plot or the story arc. Really lovely reading experience. This was a very very well written story. Great characters. But of course the romance between ODC, and until the ending Colonel Fitzwilliam's one-side (or was it?) love story. I was so happy he and Charlotte have a happily-ever-after.
What a fantastic story. I love your writing, I mean your WRITING. The turns of phrase, the inner dialogue, the dialogue, not just the plot or the story arc. Really lovely reading experience. This was a very very well written story. Great characters. But of course the romance between ODC, and until the ending Colonel Fitzwilliam's one-side (or was it?) love story. I was so happy he and Charlotte have a happily-ever-after.