for Linked in Life and Love6/10 c105 tetraforce theory
I put this story off for years. I think I was initially dissuaded by the idea of it being "another Blake harem". Allow me to say I was proven wrong by a wide margin. I saw it recommended several times in shirt succession about 3 weeks ago and decided to see what the hype was about. I'm pleased to find they were right. I look forward to whatever you have in stake for us!
I put this story off for years. I think I was initially dissuaded by the idea of it being "another Blake harem". Allow me to say I was proven wrong by a wide margin. I saw it recommended several times in shirt succession about 3 weeks ago and decided to see what the hype was about. I'm pleased to find they were right. I look forward to whatever you have in stake for us!
6/8 c95 
3Neil12
As opposed to Volume 4 where Lionheart actually had all of Mistral's Hunters/Huntresses killed.
I like this story. Very well done and very adorable. I look forward to more, especially to see what
kind of Grimm Blake and Yang summon.
3Neil12As opposed to Volume 4 where Lionheart actually had all of Mistral's Hunters/Huntresses killed.
I like this story. Very well done and very adorable. I look forward to more, especially to see what
kind of Grimm Blake and Yang summon.
6/1 c67 7Sergeant Sargent II
im finally rereading this story and it good that i am. id forgotten a lot of these details. i love your version of the rose family and strq.
7Sergeant Sargent IIim finally rereading this story and it good that i am. id forgotten a lot of these details. i love your version of the rose family and strq.
5/25 c105 DeafenedCeiling
Hello again! It's been a minute since a chapter has been released but I happy to know you are well! With that, let's review.
I think the thing that gets lost in this is that Whitley is just a kid. He's smart for his age and he's far from stupid but he echoes what his father says. He always begins with,"Well father said-". Why? Well because his sisters weren't there. They just weren't. They left the household and their father's clutches, he didn't have that choice until now. That's what makes his ignorance forgivable besides the fact he's a kid. He doesn't say things with malice or the velocity like his father does, he just echoes what's been told to him. He doesn't KNOW any better unless he's shown that. If he was really like their dad, he would try to kill Blake on sight on hurl slurs or something. He doesn't do that. He actually listens to Weiss when she corrects him. He's nervous but he does at least listen. I feel like a talk between Winter, Weiss and Whitley would be good for them. They didn't necessarily abandon him, but they weren't there when he really needed them. Not the way he needed them at least.
Another thing I want to talk about is the standoff between Yang and Ruby. It kinda encapsulates how both of them are. Ruby and Yang are the most strong willed and opinionated members of the team so when they but heads it can get...tense. And that scene showed that. Ruby is known as the "airhead" but she's far from stupid. As aloof as she is, she knows people and knows the vines of an environment. If something is off, she'll know. Yang will always question Ruby, that's just what a big sister does, but she will follow. The scene also shows how Ruby will take charge as team leader. If something goes wrong, who takes blame? She does. If death happens, who's responsible? She is. Everything is on her and she knows that. She won't allow that to happen. Not as long as she's still breathing. She even said so herself, "Eh, I'm team leader. If it goes badly, it's my fault anyway." Which is sad in its own way as not only is that a tough burden to bare, Ruby is the youngest. She has to be an adult and isn't allowed to be a kid. Not when it comes to missions anyway. It's amazing how she's usually happy all the time but we've seen how she is when things go bad and when that happens she more quiet than Blake and more cold than Weiss is and it's not close.
Which brings me to the last thing I wanted to talk about in the chapter which is Weiss' comment about Raven. Ruby did NOT take that comment well which shows my assumptions about how Ruby kinda feels about Raven and even Yang knows it. Do I think Ruby hates Raven? No. But that's not her mom. Not to her. Summer is her mom. Her hero. The reason why she even fights in the first place. Not Raven. Raven is Yang's mom. Yang has more of a connection to Raven line Ruby has to Sunmer. Now Yang loves Summer but it's not the same. It isn't. Ruby also never refers to her as "mom" but Yang does. And honestly? It's deserved. Because what has Raven done for Ruby? Nothing really. And that's not to be mean that's just being honest. Raven goes to Yang, talks to Yang, gives Yang things to keep in contact. Never Ruby. That further shows the divide between them. And that divide was partially caused by Raven herself. Had she been there early in their lives, maybe that would make a difference, but she wasn't which is where we find ourselves now. It's a mess. And Ruby won't respond kindly to Raven stepping in or trying to. She'll probably see it as Raven trying to replace Summer and if there's one thing Ruby doesn't play with besides Yang and her dad, it's her mom. She'll crashout over that and it'd be justified. Way worse than Yang. And if Yang forces her into a corner, that'll just make things worse because Ruby will see that as Yang being okay with Raven taking her mom's place. And she won't allow that. Not sure if there's much Raven can do to change that. If she really wants to atone for her actions, then she needs to be able to deal with the consequences of that and that maybe Ruby will have a limited role in her life instead of what she wants. And her having a limited role is best case scenario. Ruby may not want to be there at all and be "her" daughter. Too much at once. If Ruby blows up, which she will, it'd be best to leave her alone. She can be...cold when she's like that. Again, she was sad when her ability wasn't like her mom's like she thought, didn't talk to Yang after she said she wished they weren't sisters, and acts like she's okay when she's not when something is bothering like, like the Raven situation. Should be an interesting chapter. And if Ruby curses? Maaaaaaaaaaan. It's over. So over.
But yeah, happy to see an update. Hopefully next time FF7 doesn't take up too much of your time lol. Be safe.
Hello again! It's been a minute since a chapter has been released but I happy to know you are well! With that, let's review.
I think the thing that gets lost in this is that Whitley is just a kid. He's smart for his age and he's far from stupid but he echoes what his father says. He always begins with,"Well father said-". Why? Well because his sisters weren't there. They just weren't. They left the household and their father's clutches, he didn't have that choice until now. That's what makes his ignorance forgivable besides the fact he's a kid. He doesn't say things with malice or the velocity like his father does, he just echoes what's been told to him. He doesn't KNOW any better unless he's shown that. If he was really like their dad, he would try to kill Blake on sight on hurl slurs or something. He doesn't do that. He actually listens to Weiss when she corrects him. He's nervous but he does at least listen. I feel like a talk between Winter, Weiss and Whitley would be good for them. They didn't necessarily abandon him, but they weren't there when he really needed them. Not the way he needed them at least.
Another thing I want to talk about is the standoff between Yang and Ruby. It kinda encapsulates how both of them are. Ruby and Yang are the most strong willed and opinionated members of the team so when they but heads it can get...tense. And that scene showed that. Ruby is known as the "airhead" but she's far from stupid. As aloof as she is, she knows people and knows the vines of an environment. If something is off, she'll know. Yang will always question Ruby, that's just what a big sister does, but she will follow. The scene also shows how Ruby will take charge as team leader. If something goes wrong, who takes blame? She does. If death happens, who's responsible? She is. Everything is on her and she knows that. She won't allow that to happen. Not as long as she's still breathing. She even said so herself, "Eh, I'm team leader. If it goes badly, it's my fault anyway." Which is sad in its own way as not only is that a tough burden to bare, Ruby is the youngest. She has to be an adult and isn't allowed to be a kid. Not when it comes to missions anyway. It's amazing how she's usually happy all the time but we've seen how she is when things go bad and when that happens she more quiet than Blake and more cold than Weiss is and it's not close.
Which brings me to the last thing I wanted to talk about in the chapter which is Weiss' comment about Raven. Ruby did NOT take that comment well which shows my assumptions about how Ruby kinda feels about Raven and even Yang knows it. Do I think Ruby hates Raven? No. But that's not her mom. Not to her. Summer is her mom. Her hero. The reason why she even fights in the first place. Not Raven. Raven is Yang's mom. Yang has more of a connection to Raven line Ruby has to Sunmer. Now Yang loves Summer but it's not the same. It isn't. Ruby also never refers to her as "mom" but Yang does. And honestly? It's deserved. Because what has Raven done for Ruby? Nothing really. And that's not to be mean that's just being honest. Raven goes to Yang, talks to Yang, gives Yang things to keep in contact. Never Ruby. That further shows the divide between them. And that divide was partially caused by Raven herself. Had she been there early in their lives, maybe that would make a difference, but she wasn't which is where we find ourselves now. It's a mess. And Ruby won't respond kindly to Raven stepping in or trying to. She'll probably see it as Raven trying to replace Summer and if there's one thing Ruby doesn't play with besides Yang and her dad, it's her mom. She'll crashout over that and it'd be justified. Way worse than Yang. And if Yang forces her into a corner, that'll just make things worse because Ruby will see that as Yang being okay with Raven taking her mom's place. And she won't allow that. Not sure if there's much Raven can do to change that. If she really wants to atone for her actions, then she needs to be able to deal with the consequences of that and that maybe Ruby will have a limited role in her life instead of what she wants. And her having a limited role is best case scenario. Ruby may not want to be there at all and be "her" daughter. Too much at once. If Ruby blows up, which she will, it'd be best to leave her alone. She can be...cold when she's like that. Again, she was sad when her ability wasn't like her mom's like she thought, didn't talk to Yang after she said she wished they weren't sisters, and acts like she's okay when she's not when something is bothering like, like the Raven situation. Should be an interesting chapter. And if Ruby curses? Maaaaaaaaaaan. It's over. So over.
But yeah, happy to see an update. Hopefully next time FF7 doesn't take up too much of your time lol. Be safe.
5/23 c105 Jbuhlvc
Another amazing chapter! Beeing enjoying this for years and another awesome chapter is in the books! In so glad you’re continuing to release these.
Another amazing chapter! Beeing enjoying this for years and another awesome chapter is in the books! In so glad you’re continuing to release these.
5/18 c105 2Stasisborne
Glad to see another chapter of this wonderful story!
I also understand your… Lets say…. Problem with a very well made game. Clair Obscur: Expidition 33 has consumed me and I inly just remembered that I received a story update for this particular story.
That, and Glitch Studios has me in a chokehold with Murder Drones and TDAC. And probably Gaslight District once i get around to watching it… I think I have a problem…
ANYWAY! Glad to see another update, and will look forward to the next chapter. No matter when that will be.
Its not a problem… I don’t have a problem… right?
2StasisborneGlad to see another chapter of this wonderful story!
I also understand your… Lets say…. Problem with a very well made game. Clair Obscur: Expidition 33 has consumed me and I inly just remembered that I received a story update for this particular story.
That, and Glitch Studios has me in a chokehold with Murder Drones and TDAC. And probably Gaslight District once i get around to watching it… I think I have a problem…
ANYWAY! Glad to see another update, and will look forward to the next chapter. No matter when that will be.
Its not a problem… I don’t have a problem… right?
5/17 c105 Guest
Have to say, despite the many changes that occurred in this fandom, I'm glad you're still here.
I eagerly await the next chapter :)
Have to say, despite the many changes that occurred in this fandom, I'm glad you're still here.
I eagerly await the next chapter :)
5/13 c105 1W8W
Fun chapter with mine entertainment being Whitley reacting to Beacon madness.
Good argumentation that Blake is princess.
Ruby using super speed to make notes is nifty idea.
Ruby decision is very mature. Festival is only game. Risking lose at it to increase chances of improving on finding their own limitations is very good idea.
people teror to what they will have to face was also funny.
Matter of taste. FF series died for me when they dropped turn based combat. I tried demo of first part of FF7 remake and I hated gameplay.
1W8WFun chapter with mine entertainment being Whitley reacting to Beacon madness.
Good argumentation that Blake is princess.
Ruby using super speed to make notes is nifty idea.
Ruby decision is very mature. Festival is only game. Risking lose at it to increase chances of improving on finding their own limitations is very good idea.
people teror to what they will have to face was also funny.
Matter of taste. FF series died for me when they dropped turn based combat. I tried demo of first part of FF7 remake and I hated gameplay.
5/13 c6 Sakumon16
Good grief, they’re absolutely adorable together. And what’s this about a Mate’s mark?
Good grief, they’re absolutely adorable together. And what’s this about a Mate’s mark?
5/12 c105 Vorthod
glad to have you back. also glad to see the girls deliberately raising the bar on their own tournament. actively hunting for their own weaknesses is a great way to use their time in school. the asides with the teachers were also very enjoyable
glad to have you back. also glad to see the girls deliberately raising the bar on their own tournament. actively hunting for their own weaknesses is a great way to use their time in school. the asides with the teachers were also very enjoyable
5/11 c105 insipidscholar917
I’m always so happy to see another chapter of this posted. I’m loving the interactions with Whitely, it really highlights how far Weiss has come and you can see some glimmers of hope that Whitley could be more than a just a clone of his father. Really well done>
I’m always so happy to see another chapter of this posted. I’m loving the interactions with Whitely, it really highlights how far Weiss has come and you can see some glimmers of hope that Whitley could be more than a just a clone of his father. Really well done>
5/11 c105 Blackmetalzane22
Figures Jacques wouldn't say EXACTLY who Blakes parents were to Whitely, probably cause the greedy asshole didn't even care cause they're Faunus. Sorry Blake, you're a princess. What talk? I guess in that sense Ruby and Yang are ALSO princesses. Poor Ruby, Yang DEFINITELY needs to make that talk between Ruby and Raven happen soon. Whitely, just face it that your dad is a racist asshole.
Yeah...Oobleck's classes ain't easy. So Patch used to be bigger? Interesting. Ruby's trick would be helpful.
Okay, while I get he's sitting in on the class cause he doesn't really have a choice, asking him a question like that is pretty unreasonable. Especially when Whitely has no Huntman or Huntress knowledge at all! Okay, she's expecting too much and being a jerk. Wait what? When and why is Sienna here? I get what she's doing, but she's being pretty unreasonable since even if or when Whitely changes for the better; he wants nothing to do with the Huntsman life. So telling him this stuff, while helpful, is pointless when he wants no part in that aspect of the world he lives in.
At least he's enjoying Ports class.
Looks like the Festival's gonna be happening soon. Weiss tells Whitely that her being a Mate to Blake, along with Ruby and Yang, basically lets them all share their Semblances. Sounds like they're gonna be training with each others powers. ya sure ya wanna go public with that, Ruby? Ruby makes a good point. If Summer's eyes didn't go off Team STRQ would've been dead, and she doesn't want that to happen to them. Going public may be a good idea, just expect some backlash from certain students (Cough) CRDL! (Cough) Ruby what're you planning for Whitely? She needs to get out of that kind of thinking. Leaders DO fail and they learn from their failures to get better. Oh, Nora vs Cryo Knight, this should be interesting, and a good way for Weiss to train her Semblance. And Whitely sees what fightings for Huntsman and Huntresses is like, against each other anyway. He definitely underestimated how they fight. Looks like Ruby's offering Whitely something less crazy. Ha! That was a great fight in V2! He doesn't even know what that cologne is, does he? And Ruby walks away while mentioning she summoned a Nevermore.
Oh Glynda doesn't seem happy. Those guys are always causing trouble. Oh boy what happened? Considering she looked at Weiss and Whitely...I have a feeling that asshole just showed up.
Figures Jacques wouldn't say EXACTLY who Blakes parents were to Whitely, probably cause the greedy asshole didn't even care cause they're Faunus. Sorry Blake, you're a princess. What talk? I guess in that sense Ruby and Yang are ALSO princesses. Poor Ruby, Yang DEFINITELY needs to make that talk between Ruby and Raven happen soon. Whitely, just face it that your dad is a racist asshole.
Yeah...Oobleck's classes ain't easy. So Patch used to be bigger? Interesting. Ruby's trick would be helpful.
Okay, while I get he's sitting in on the class cause he doesn't really have a choice, asking him a question like that is pretty unreasonable. Especially when Whitely has no Huntman or Huntress knowledge at all! Okay, she's expecting too much and being a jerk. Wait what? When and why is Sienna here? I get what she's doing, but she's being pretty unreasonable since even if or when Whitely changes for the better; he wants nothing to do with the Huntsman life. So telling him this stuff, while helpful, is pointless when he wants no part in that aspect of the world he lives in.
At least he's enjoying Ports class.
Looks like the Festival's gonna be happening soon. Weiss tells Whitely that her being a Mate to Blake, along with Ruby and Yang, basically lets them all share their Semblances. Sounds like they're gonna be training with each others powers. ya sure ya wanna go public with that, Ruby? Ruby makes a good point. If Summer's eyes didn't go off Team STRQ would've been dead, and she doesn't want that to happen to them. Going public may be a good idea, just expect some backlash from certain students (Cough) CRDL! (Cough) Ruby what're you planning for Whitely? She needs to get out of that kind of thinking. Leaders DO fail and they learn from their failures to get better. Oh, Nora vs Cryo Knight, this should be interesting, and a good way for Weiss to train her Semblance. And Whitely sees what fightings for Huntsman and Huntresses is like, against each other anyway. He definitely underestimated how they fight. Looks like Ruby's offering Whitely something less crazy. Ha! That was a great fight in V2! He doesn't even know what that cologne is, does he? And Ruby walks away while mentioning she summoned a Nevermore.
Oh Glynda doesn't seem happy. Those guys are always causing trouble. Oh boy what happened? Considering she looked at Weiss and Whitely...I have a feeling that asshole just showed up.
5/10 c105 Pharamine
Oh damn Mr Jackass is in town. Welp, give 'im hell girls!
Sure that mention of FF7 is just here and not you admitting where you've been all this time.
Oh damn Mr Jackass is in town. Welp, give 'im hell girls!
Sure that mention of FF7 is just here and not you admitting where you've been all this time.
5/10 c105 2Grimm slayer Garm
Pheew I was worried that this fic had died. Glad to see thats not the case!
As much of an arse Cardin is, him saying that the girls have more power then they know what to do with is a nice touch. That said please update the next chapter as soon as possible, I can’t wait to see if papa Shnee is going to stir a literal shitstorm.
2Grimm slayer GarmPheew I was worried that this fic had died. Glad to see thats not the case!
As much of an arse Cardin is, him saying that the girls have more power then they know what to do with is a nice touch. That said please update the next chapter as soon as possible, I can’t wait to see if papa Shnee is going to stir a literal shitstorm.