for Semper Fidelis7/13/2016 c26 bridget237
Ahhh excellent story! That was awesome, I really enjoy Edwards's and Miri's relationship because she does not take his shit at all and that's a really empowering cool thing to include. Thank you so much can't wait to read the next installment!
Ahhh excellent story! That was awesome, I really enjoy Edwards's and Miri's relationship because she does not take his shit at all and that's a really empowering cool thing to include. Thank you so much can't wait to read the next installment!
7/7/2016 c25 Debbie Hicks
26.
Chapter 26.
Miri's HANGE THEN Suddenly as all of ALIEN rattlesnakes bitte n my own mother with venom making her much younger then wITH BOTH SUDDENLY cracked wITH MY OWN BUT BLAZING BLACKED OUT THEN THE phoenix COVEN TOOK US With best friends to Italy were not yet born but suddenly screaming then too late was CHANGED But more than morphine with Both injected and allof the sudden the CHANGE was genetic bioengineering and all of the sudden the very as all of more than as all mating from their own but the senior Volturi guard found me deceased but it was already too late found guilty of Murder and the ALIEN CHANGE Came then suddenly as all of children Birthed but bitten aged to adulthood far too overextremely way too much then it came with our gifts emerged and te very as all of the more than as all of matings resumed then too late no more Chidren then drained of Blood the bitten as all of places suddenly had drained them the senior Volturi elite guard had found us more most powerfully then you broke as all rules who turned you I was afraid but Felix take them from familiesthey are servants drained of blood then I screamed then too late WAS gifted With the kids aged in time/space forgotten who we are the eer found time-split of us But the parents three not too lucky with other childrenthen then we wre into Alaska they aged te Voltuti guard found us useful but TORN Without BLOOD! Then Came blood were more ALICE BITTEN AS All of PLACES ARE CHANGING! Oh my GOD! Titime-sp0lit tHEN IT CAME Them GONE TAKEN The last halves fEW TEN ALL OF THE SUDDEN TE children aGED Wreemore than as all of ten suddenly BLACKED OUTSIDE Freed of Bodies vanished with the blo\oodies bodies as all of te corpses ICAN'T SUCK IT OUT IT'S TAINTED! Too late became Aas a Creature of the night who suffered as all of the very moe than as all of tem suddenly te hpst blood began to ALTER ME With them but it really happened too late the sun just awakened my brand-new life my afterlife ten shattering as All of the damaged skin Venus made me the most more beautiful woman her vpice echoing then open my new eys in wonder then suddenly freaked out what we became was a hissing really feral but leathal she turned me a deadly newborn by her curse of her magic was a screaming was Immortal so they Alice what they done to her with them her secret's out she's a hybrid te guard return a newborn we not allow t you to live then too late RIP! Then wITH WITNESSES With each four three Packs too late executed by the senor Volturi elite guard suddenly burst us/them into pieces blazed but suddenly EXPLODING Then nolonger humans but Vampire slayers and hunters Took away y own humanity from us and them freed of the bodies thenbledoffically then with them ALICE! You are too late she's dead killed murdered with them omy god then POPED Freely wITH US/T FIVE SCREAMING But BLAZING! Then Too late with out of the womb chidren came within the flames freed by the gods/goddess as all of them destroyed then time Split too late fred each both then each boh you will not see tem or hear tem ten too late terminated the parental rights thenblacked outside of the bodies then taken from here each both of them suddenly vanished screaming of Venom ten in due time unable to bear children of my attack the seer noticed how hard but ice cold she's deceased thenmyself was dead so they blasted from the hooked up bpdies suddenly flatlined then decree us dead on arrival in coffins vanished to Volterra, Italy tey found us/them dead g hooked then killed us as all releaed more guards ten it came too late tearing thenkilled more guards as all of tem but Gallions of each more than them but EXPLODING! Then s Voltur members ten it came with a nuking light they created their own assasins the Grey Wolves Destroyed te as all of themselves teir children ten suddenly came too late Shattering then in due time wwre more than from as all of them more of sucessfuflly matijgs exploing with as all of them shatteringlost te ablityy to mate at all then never aged or died but it went a ;loudest noises more Volturi members the bodies were wax with lead as all toxic poisons with chemos as all more far more powerful but too late hair fallen but e had nwest hair growth with bangs thenburst freely as all of wth pets then aging bodies never moved at all Vanishing theninto their lab in peace but into death the three recoveved then told tem lost their children with four never had kids again allowing their own to marry had kids they too followed us/them in death but stopped agig burst freely ten they wre adults in teenage bodies had out of the womb kids then too late blacked outside then came with us/them but came with more a good sized but more lae arger then crunhing then fred te very as all of as all of bodies vanished they did have more normal children with three inmiddle age suddenly gotten infected again we took them they aged for mates for shifters tey late became infertile ourselves were breeders were hybrids as all of them burst outside had out of the womb children the very last ones created a super raceof Augments fighting to survive on a hostile planet was Dawn Read Spier's idea t then BLACKED OUTSIDE! But came bodies from Around the world Masters more mutated hildren all born from with looks of the ceceaaed are the reincarnates of as all of had both traits trapped teeth and fangs are not normal created a super race of humans could live beyond 1000 or more they ae as all of tem poisoned unable to reproduce at all but parents sick and they vanished are reincarnated more than as all of them exploding then with the very lastest ones then too late fred wre no more than as all of humans only supernaturals followd with us brst free with as all of lost our bodies then were more than as all of themfrom vanishing corpses then now Earth is a warring world caused by changes hey you who buzzed our hair sorry it's war oh man powwrful then Bawl! ugh please excuse me babysitting v duty then then as time went on ourselves never reaced the ages then suddenly wre more than gazilliond flung outside vanishing then came Bodies then freed by s all of gods and goddeses transformed us/gazillions into slayers with hunters were into lab but killed but no longer alive became immortal like the Highlander.
26.
Chapter 26.
Miri's HANGE THEN Suddenly as all of ALIEN rattlesnakes bitte n my own mother with venom making her much younger then wITH BOTH SUDDENLY cracked wITH MY OWN BUT BLAZING BLACKED OUT THEN THE phoenix COVEN TOOK US With best friends to Italy were not yet born but suddenly screaming then too late was CHANGED But more than morphine with Both injected and allof the sudden the CHANGE was genetic bioengineering and all of the sudden the very as all of more than as all mating from their own but the senior Volturi guard found me deceased but it was already too late found guilty of Murder and the ALIEN CHANGE Came then suddenly as all of children Birthed but bitten aged to adulthood far too overextremely way too much then it came with our gifts emerged and te very as all of the more than as all of matings resumed then too late no more Chidren then drained of Blood the bitten as all of places suddenly had drained them the senior Volturi elite guard had found us more most powerfully then you broke as all rules who turned you I was afraid but Felix take them from familiesthey are servants drained of blood then I screamed then too late WAS gifted With the kids aged in time/space forgotten who we are the eer found time-split of us But the parents three not too lucky with other childrenthen then we wre into Alaska they aged te Voltuti guard found us useful but TORN Without BLOOD! Then Came blood were more ALICE BITTEN AS All of PLACES ARE CHANGING! Oh my GOD! Titime-sp0lit tHEN IT CAME Them GONE TAKEN The last halves fEW TEN ALL OF THE SUDDEN TE children aGED Wreemore than as all of ten suddenly BLACKED OUTSIDE Freed of Bodies vanished with the blo\oodies bodies as all of te corpses ICAN'T SUCK IT OUT IT'S TAINTED! Too late became Aas a Creature of the night who suffered as all of the very moe than as all of tem suddenly te hpst blood began to ALTER ME With them but it really happened too late the sun just awakened my brand-new life my afterlife ten shattering as All of the damaged skin Venus made me the most more beautiful woman her vpice echoing then open my new eys in wonder then suddenly freaked out what we became was a hissing really feral but leathal she turned me a deadly newborn by her curse of her magic was a screaming was Immortal so they Alice what they done to her with them her secret's out she's a hybrid te guard return a newborn we not allow t you to live then too late RIP! Then wITH WITNESSES With each four three Packs too late executed by the senor Volturi elite guard suddenly burst us/them into pieces blazed but suddenly EXPLODING Then nolonger humans but Vampire slayers and hunters Took away y own humanity from us and them freed of the bodies thenbledoffically then with them ALICE! You are too late she's dead killed murdered with them omy god then POPED Freely wITH US/T FIVE SCREAMING But BLAZING! Then Too late with out of the womb chidren came within the flames freed by the gods/goddess as all of them destroyed then time Split too late fred each both then each boh you will not see tem or hear tem ten too late terminated the parental rights thenblacked outside of the bodies then taken from here each both of them suddenly vanished screaming of Venom ten in due time unable to bear children of my attack the seer noticed how hard but ice cold she's deceased thenmyself was dead so they blasted from the hooked up bpdies suddenly flatlined then decree us dead on arrival in coffins vanished to Volterra, Italy tey found us/them dead g hooked then killed us as all releaed more guards ten it came too late tearing thenkilled more guards as all of tem but Gallions of each more than them but EXPLODING! Then s Voltur members ten it came with a nuking light they created their own assasins the Grey Wolves Destroyed te as all of themselves teir children ten suddenly came too late Shattering then in due time wwre more than from as all of them more of sucessfuflly matijgs exploing with as all of them shatteringlost te ablityy to mate at all then never aged or died but it went a ;loudest noises more Volturi members the bodies were wax with lead as all toxic poisons with chemos as all more far more powerful but too late hair fallen but e had nwest hair growth with bangs thenburst freely as all of wth pets then aging bodies never moved at all Vanishing theninto their lab in peace but into death the three recoveved then told tem lost their children with four never had kids again allowing their own to marry had kids they too followed us/them in death but stopped agig burst freely ten they wre adults in teenage bodies had out of the womb kids then too late blacked outside then came with us/them but came with more a good sized but more lae arger then crunhing then fred te very as all of as all of bodies vanished they did have more normal children with three inmiddle age suddenly gotten infected again we took them they aged for mates for shifters tey late became infertile ourselves were breeders were hybrids as all of them burst outside had out of the womb children the very last ones created a super raceof Augments fighting to survive on a hostile planet was Dawn Read Spier's idea t then BLACKED OUTSIDE! But came bodies from Around the world Masters more mutated hildren all born from with looks of the ceceaaed are the reincarnates of as all of had both traits trapped teeth and fangs are not normal created a super race of humans could live beyond 1000 or more they ae as all of tem poisoned unable to reproduce at all but parents sick and they vanished are reincarnated more than as all of them exploding then with the very lastest ones then too late fred wre no more than as all of humans only supernaturals followd with us brst free with as all of lost our bodies then were more than as all of themfrom vanishing corpses then now Earth is a warring world caused by changes hey you who buzzed our hair sorry it's war oh man powwrful then Bawl! ugh please excuse me babysitting v duty then then as time went on ourselves never reaced the ages then suddenly wre more than gazilliond flung outside vanishing then came Bodies then freed by s all of gods and goddeses transformed us/gazillions into slayers with hunters were into lab but killed but no longer alive became immortal like the Highlander.
7/1/2016 c22 Debbie Hicks
23.
Chapter Bella's Hybrid birth
that Alice had a Vision of my sister Draining her own mother then too late Alice I am a hybrid Oiur parents still into high school and college gotten drained of as all of bood I am not normali am a Hybrid a Half-blood my sister I must get her now that sped fast as a Vampire ten gotten her ten shewas in the body of a 6 year old little girl then BITTEN ME! FIRE cOMSUMED US wITH With te Culens and each siblings then suddenly VENOM spread as it Raged ALICE bELLA BIT HER SISTER THEN sHE'S aGING THEN executed us/Them with nessed but with each bot but with mates and hybrids and suddenly Time-Split was ATTACKED Onto e as all of the r each as tribazillions and screaming wITH HR bitten! alice bOTH Are CHANGING With tHEMIT Ws already Too Late TOrn AS aLL OF vEN make it s top burning stop! I sREAMED wITH HER aGING FASTER THAN BNORMAL TEN SUDDENLY blasted freely then suddenly a Light of us both was born with tem suddenly began Screamig the after saide affect spreading to our unification of hearts then suddenly warping out of Control officially ten it really did happened finally h just officially Stopped beating for REal bUT FOR good neaver beat again officially then CRACKED From bodies tHEN PUNISHED US SISTERS Were Forbidden but blasting Freely then reported Msters both sisters are Bitten from alien Rattlesnakes as all from Around the World ended their lives blacked ouyside my brther smelt teir scent not normal drained of blood are not Alive bring them each bo five races then it really happened my eyes Wa ent open with my sister's she had aged to look abou 17 yeas old so myselfshunted butStopped aaging burst freely from as all of the Machines ten it gave out a noise Vanishing then suddenly my skin was so manga styled but planetary granite hard as stone shattering as Crystalized had Borg white skin we Swan Sisters had Bright Red eyes of newborns so tey my troat hurt so mine we are born with teeth and piercing Canines are fangs our senses wre alert but more awakened Alice what happened they were attacked but they are Gone due to a Crisis you can't go home by the law of the United D Federation of Planets you are no longer both but Vampire slayers are Vampires Alice gasped of our heritage Carlisle then too late Exploding freely of each Mortal and Earthly bodies Vanishing now a Sailor Guardian and Msk funeral held by a Serum BLASTED Freely Vanishing both with others suddenly reappeared into death but in Coffins then it realy happened Deceased of as all of had Dontated our seeds and their seeds who followed by brain-organ failure officially wre more with as all of tem deceased now preparing burial and sudden the Serum overrode then Deactivation but EXPLODING! as a truest Cremation of death ten Organs and brains freed into dying Italians suddenly too lateexploing as all of tem the Children of Darkness and Shattering ten it came too late gained looks from us and as all Supernatutal and The Vulcans then tey Wxed te bones and suddenly te bones so mutated bt tey declared us/as all f them we were different onto as all of more than as all of States as all of very tribazillions as all of gazillions or as all of but mazillion of anmals pioisoned then Crsshing from bodis ten it came too late lost as all pf bodies then taken from us with kids and siblings and all of te sudden gotten Yellow eyes overdosed on blood but still eat food then too late came too soon burst freely then came as all both blood types faded away now Immortal we never died of the host made us/them stronger three times greater than normal then became athleticallt fit and went cracki g firey noise Vanished now no more death then it really happened we were fine but recovered ha ealinf faster still unable to die we were a species Then too ,late cut from human the bodies as all of them shattering broken the heads off then too late shatteringmade newly-Immortal officially full time it sang out newest age 132 and 121 with them came too latemerged but crashing into us burst freely made Immortal cursted with Bitter Immortality ancient beauty and eternal life everlasting youth superspeed and superstrength and enhanced senses and eyesight and strongest hearing shattering with a poopeing noise and whopping crop of as both planetary languages as all of then exploding from b asleep bodies after death taken but suddenly brought in here then Murdering them but suddenly cremated that Alice's Screec was far too strongest Ouch!Le-Matya hold it turkey myelf was strong now unable squeezing really too far powerful suddenly a change Crashed was k ocked out by the True Vulcan Nerve pinch tHEN SHE [PREFORMED A Vulcan Mind Meld but you can'tgo from here you are forever seventeen years old but you stopped aging Bella You ae unharmed mess with us James you'r Sushi prepare for war we are Vampire slayers and hunters ONWARDS! That's him herself held a Ward in front her own face focusing deeply ten Rin jin re rypu pryu retsu kai bai chi chi shi bai zen zai her chanting was ancient but very old began to advance her training my self set my gun yell Sis MARS BURNING MANDALA! With my own BLACKED OUT With them but burdt freely Taken the bodies to Italy Master we bring te Accused who were bitten illegally my brother j killed ythem officially freed of bodies are Deceased but Miri and Bella with mutant best friends are Hybrids halflings monsters in a form are with a soul Excuted tre Nomads in their anger and grief and rage they are Brought here by my brought we Volturi find you guilty of murdering as all of Vulcan Execute them then too late with thrre nomads murdered then too late blazing from here then popped it were destroyed but phaser blasting officially fully time teme too late killed brout as all of the Grey Wolves aboard then too late tey were Volturi members now as all of them shattering from here Exploding their Childrenfreely ten shattering ten it came too late dead for real dumped as all of them were cremated ten suddenly history changed but was altered for good but te bod nes waxd lifeless but aging far too overdosing as all of it but it really happened Buried in Volterra, Italy far way too extremely as more than as all sank kills with Didime Screaming free Ghosts a lot of tem but too late Howling but a Screeching lke Le-Matyas oh my god you just spoken Vulcan then in due time as all of very far way as all of more Shredding then too late poped from life to death cracking out more ghosts I was with Powers so she with them granted Immortality me and my Dumb Demigod mouth we are From the great Olympic gods and goddesses half-blood tat we are Creat a camp for us known as Camp Talos so they but began to acend into immortality then blasted freely then it was as all bodies Vanished Royce King go to Volterra, Italy I am the daughter of Hades I sy ummon ye as all hellhounds that She's giftd me Nercomancy mine is Mental shield so us tat was it gift carried on after crossing over to the afterlife blacking outside ten snapped were ten Taken but los te ablity to mate at all then it already too late but it was all over deceased fully time but families friends and loved ones never got over the deaths of lost chidren ourselves wre hots still killing Vampires slaying officially for good were hunting their race to Extinction but bursting freely ten blasting outside with help and supporting us then Snapped ten it caused a cange inus/them but lost te ablity to die at all but became Eternal people that brought in ten destrying te as all of of temgained gurards ten brought forth children then te world Changed fuly time ten ourselves neveraged but stopped changing fully time burst freely from bodie Vanishing had them Fully Murdered Popped then into official lead and wx with as all poisons then Bella was sterile so me with them blasted without bodies as all of with them shredding but from as all of tem but shattering te machines more Blood drained but into as all bottles now it's gone forever snapping heads off then cracked oureverselves never died or gone od became sick went elderly became everlasting Ancient in teenage bodies then te bodies as all of them covered in lava but blissed but Hera Cursed us to be young Again too late with powers but myself coud speak to the deceased but they emerged from the bodies with our own but Vanishing as all of them Blised but Cursed then gone ten killed then cursed as all of Volturi members with brand nwest members suddenly EXPLODING! were Volturi now but had human blood fedbut suddenly fading far too late then Shattering as all Volturi heirs and Guards more powerful guards from as all of the looks wwrre Ancient-looking but lost the ablity to mate at all but reported they were us/them wre more stronger fred of bodies dumping then came too late we never be killed or slain became cursed by her so they are undead I used something weirder Shadow travel they wre gods and goddeses in human forms tey knew who we really are but became Immortal beings watching the newest children as all of them blasted freely joining us/them blacked outside ten became Shadowhunters then crashing freely ten too late gone now no more kids.
23.
Chapter Bella's Hybrid birth
that Alice had a Vision of my sister Draining her own mother then too late Alice I am a hybrid Oiur parents still into high school and college gotten drained of as all of bood I am not normali am a Hybrid a Half-blood my sister I must get her now that sped fast as a Vampire ten gotten her ten shewas in the body of a 6 year old little girl then BITTEN ME! FIRE cOMSUMED US wITH With te Culens and each siblings then suddenly VENOM spread as it Raged ALICE bELLA BIT HER SISTER THEN sHE'S aGING THEN executed us/Them with nessed but with each bot but with mates and hybrids and suddenly Time-Split was ATTACKED Onto e as all of the r each as tribazillions and screaming wITH HR bitten! alice bOTH Are CHANGING With tHEMIT Ws already Too Late TOrn AS aLL OF vEN make it s top burning stop! I sREAMED wITH HER aGING FASTER THAN BNORMAL TEN SUDDENLY blasted freely then suddenly a Light of us both was born with tem suddenly began Screamig the after saide affect spreading to our unification of hearts then suddenly warping out of Control officially ten it really did happened finally h just officially Stopped beating for REal bUT FOR good neaver beat again officially then CRACKED From bodies tHEN PUNISHED US SISTERS Were Forbidden but blasting Freely then reported Msters both sisters are Bitten from alien Rattlesnakes as all from Around the World ended their lives blacked ouyside my brther smelt teir scent not normal drained of blood are not Alive bring them each bo five races then it really happened my eyes Wa ent open with my sister's she had aged to look abou 17 yeas old so myselfshunted butStopped aaging burst freely from as all of the Machines ten it gave out a noise Vanishing then suddenly my skin was so manga styled but planetary granite hard as stone shattering as Crystalized had Borg white skin we Swan Sisters had Bright Red eyes of newborns so tey my troat hurt so mine we are born with teeth and piercing Canines are fangs our senses wre alert but more awakened Alice what happened they were attacked but they are Gone due to a Crisis you can't go home by the law of the United D Federation of Planets you are no longer both but Vampire slayers are Vampires Alice gasped of our heritage Carlisle then too late Exploding freely of each Mortal and Earthly bodies Vanishing now a Sailor Guardian and Msk funeral held by a Serum BLASTED Freely Vanishing both with others suddenly reappeared into death but in Coffins then it realy happened Deceased of as all of had Dontated our seeds and their seeds who followed by brain-organ failure officially wre more with as all of tem deceased now preparing burial and sudden the Serum overrode then Deactivation but EXPLODING! as a truest Cremation of death ten Organs and brains freed into dying Italians suddenly too lateexploing as all of tem the Children of Darkness and Shattering ten it came too late gained looks from us and as all Supernatutal and The Vulcans then tey Wxed te bones and suddenly te bones so mutated bt tey declared us/as all f them we were different onto as all of more than as all of States as all of very tribazillions as all of gazillions or as all of but mazillion of anmals pioisoned then Crsshing from bodis ten it came too late lost as all pf bodies then taken from us with kids and siblings and all of te sudden gotten Yellow eyes overdosed on blood but still eat food then too late came too soon burst freely then came as all both blood types faded away now Immortal we never died of the host made us/them stronger three times greater than normal then became athleticallt fit and went cracki g firey noise Vanished now no more death then it really happened we were fine but recovered ha ealinf faster still unable to die we were a species Then too ,late cut from human the bodies as all of them shattering broken the heads off then too late shatteringmade newly-Immortal officially full time it sang out newest age 132 and 121 with them came too latemerged but crashing into us burst freely made Immortal cursted with Bitter Immortality ancient beauty and eternal life everlasting youth superspeed and superstrength and enhanced senses and eyesight and strongest hearing shattering with a poopeing noise and whopping crop of as both planetary languages as all of then exploding from b asleep bodies after death taken but suddenly brought in here then Murdering them but suddenly cremated that Alice's Screec was far too strongest Ouch!Le-Matya hold it turkey myelf was strong now unable squeezing really too far powerful suddenly a change Crashed was k ocked out by the True Vulcan Nerve pinch tHEN SHE [PREFORMED A Vulcan Mind Meld but you can'tgo from here you are forever seventeen years old but you stopped aging Bella You ae unharmed mess with us James you'r Sushi prepare for war we are Vampire slayers and hunters ONWARDS! That's him herself held a Ward in front her own face focusing deeply ten Rin jin re rypu pryu retsu kai bai chi chi shi bai zen zai her chanting was ancient but very old began to advance her training my self set my gun yell Sis MARS BURNING MANDALA! With my own BLACKED OUT With them but burdt freely Taken the bodies to Italy Master we bring te Accused who were bitten illegally my brother j killed ythem officially freed of bodies are Deceased but Miri and Bella with mutant best friends are Hybrids halflings monsters in a form are with a soul Excuted tre Nomads in their anger and grief and rage they are Brought here by my brought we Volturi find you guilty of murdering as all of Vulcan Execute them then too late with thrre nomads murdered then too late blazing from here then popped it were destroyed but phaser blasting officially fully time teme too late killed brout as all of the Grey Wolves aboard then too late tey were Volturi members now as all of them shattering from here Exploding their Childrenfreely ten shattering ten it came too late dead for real dumped as all of them were cremated ten suddenly history changed but was altered for good but te bod nes waxd lifeless but aging far too overdosing as all of it but it really happened Buried in Volterra, Italy far way too extremely as more than as all sank kills with Didime Screaming free Ghosts a lot of tem but too late Howling but a Screeching lke Le-Matyas oh my god you just spoken Vulcan then in due time as all of very far way as all of more Shredding then too late poped from life to death cracking out more ghosts I was with Powers so she with them granted Immortality me and my Dumb Demigod mouth we are From the great Olympic gods and goddesses half-blood tat we are Creat a camp for us known as Camp Talos so they but began to acend into immortality then blasted freely then it was as all bodies Vanished Royce King go to Volterra, Italy I am the daughter of Hades I sy ummon ye as all hellhounds that She's giftd me Nercomancy mine is Mental shield so us tat was it gift carried on after crossing over to the afterlife blacking outside ten snapped were ten Taken but los te ablity to mate at all then it already too late but it was all over deceased fully time but families friends and loved ones never got over the deaths of lost chidren ourselves wre hots still killing Vampires slaying officially for good were hunting their race to Extinction but bursting freely ten blasting outside with help and supporting us then Snapped ten it caused a cange inus/them but lost te ablity to die at all but became Eternal people that brought in ten destrying te as all of of temgained gurards ten brought forth children then te world Changed fuly time ten ourselves neveraged but stopped changing fully time burst freely from bodie Vanishing had them Fully Murdered Popped then into official lead and wx with as all poisons then Bella was sterile so me with them blasted without bodies as all of with them shredding but from as all of tem but shattering te machines more Blood drained but into as all bottles now it's gone forever snapping heads off then cracked oureverselves never died or gone od became sick went elderly became everlasting Ancient in teenage bodies then te bodies as all of them covered in lava but blissed but Hera Cursed us to be young Again too late with powers but myself coud speak to the deceased but they emerged from the bodies with our own but Vanishing as all of them Blised but Cursed then gone ten killed then cursed as all of Volturi members with brand nwest members suddenly EXPLODING! were Volturi now but had human blood fedbut suddenly fading far too late then Shattering as all Volturi heirs and Guards more powerful guards from as all of the looks wwrre Ancient-looking but lost the ablity to mate at all but reported they were us/them wre more stronger fred of bodies dumping then came too late we never be killed or slain became cursed by her so they are undead I used something weirder Shadow travel they wre gods and goddeses in human forms tey knew who we really are but became Immortal beings watching the newest children as all of them blasted freely joining us/them blacked outside ten became Shadowhunters then crashing freely ten too late gone now no more kids.
6/30/2016 c7 Guest
Good so far but... Edward is very OOC in the way he speaks he swears too much though for someone who is a gentlemen of his era and his 104 years of age. You have to remember he is only physically a teenager and not one mentally or emotionally, he is an adult. Miri is a bit immature, definitely a teen or young adult with her attitude but still is enjoyable. I take it you made Jake a year older. Perhaps this may be for easier future drama as per canon he supposed to be two years younger than Bella. Despite these things I am enjoying your story keep it up.
Good so far but... Edward is very OOC in the way he speaks he swears too much though for someone who is a gentlemen of his era and his 104 years of age. You have to remember he is only physically a teenager and not one mentally or emotionally, he is an adult. Miri is a bit immature, definitely a teen or young adult with her attitude but still is enjoyable. I take it you made Jake a year older. Perhaps this may be for easier future drama as per canon he supposed to be two years younger than Bella. Despite these things I am enjoying your story keep it up.
6/7/2016 c14 Guest
I liked it
I liked it
6/7/2016 c1 Guest
Her name is Bella
Her name is Bella
5/25/2016 c17 Debbie Hicks
18.
Chapter Mri's Alien Change then OW! A COYOTE SLICED ME ONTPO MY LEG AND I AM GOING TO DRINK Then Swallowing from each of them Alice Make her Stop ten too late I was Sliced by Paul Lahote and a Real Coya ote then was really thirsty but he reported Mrii 's not human from as all of Silvery lines and these very far way as all of them myself was really hungry again then bitten Edward again drainig hm by POPING a Vein Then my screams was heard officially from who you there wo turned her into a monster sliced and attacked Felix end her wih them NAPPPPD! With Best Friends as all of it came POPPPED! IT'S BURNING MAKE IT STOP You broken our laws Time-Rip them apart then too late killed of my heiritage then CRASHING! Jane she's dead with them Time-Split them then too late taken as all of human blood very as all of it came too late ALICE She is poisonedShe's not human at all finished her transformation ritual then I Sceamed of the Change so they blasting freely from the husk of the bodies then taken from us memories and humanity then taken away from here reported with each more Aro about this human marked sliced and bitten she is not human at all is a hybrid what a mutant yes SireShe is not alive deceased in the womb is frozen as a teenager aged but finally stopped Aging dispose the very as all of corpses send the ashes to families friends and loved ones with more mutant sliced marked and drained and bitten children are Dhampires are unable to see human families again punish them then too late bodies were dis[posed killed by Volturi forcs as all of them torn wre more than as all of them suddenly blasting Guards bitten as all of them suddenly lost each quart of truest human blood wwre Toxc violently exploded cganed more than as all EXPLODING! Then Alice had a vision of my heiritage she dontated her seeds to scence they done this to her who brought as all of hybrid children wrre not humans children she was drained while in te womb she is a hybrid so tey then blasting outside wre more than as allmy step-siblings fllowed so their own siblings then too late the each both vanished popping from ife to death killed as all of them but suddenly it was too late brought in here more than as all of guards ten suddenly it was too late destroyed as all of bodies came too soon EXPLODING! By violence then came too late more than as all with as all of out of te womb children and siblings step sibling shattering as Volturi members popped they did weird sciene and decree us/them deceased but extinct us/them came too late all of them freed of as all bites were poisonous as all of it ten thrown to the seas officially were more than as all of tem then no longer alive at all shrunken but thinner but more skinniest Alice what is wrong with her she/'s sick of official blood loss we br g the each both Miri is b not normal aged to adulthood they are angry of her heiritage she's both of a Vampire hunter father and a human moter drained gained half-siblings from each both brought here of their dual history then BLASTING OUTSIDE! Offically but for good and suddenly too late popped as all of them never had kids the siblings in mprinted but had more than as all of tem came crashing with us down but no longer mortals then suddenly came took late taken from us our souls stripped away shattering ten it really happened exploding more from organs more guards it's one throw them that was it no more children the humans had normal children in sorrow but from infection they too joined us/them then popped forth blacked out then it was too late freed of bodies as all of them very trigazillions blasted outside ten brough as all of tem killed more than as all of them shattered te gods aged me to eighteen yeaes old but was fixed at Seventeen just seventeen then popped from the as all of trimazillions as all of bazillions or as all of them came too late vanished from asd all lnds and America as well but killed for blood as all of guaeds all shattered from as all f bites was death caused immortality tey were as all disposed now toolate unable to have kids ten shattering causing a change into us/allies reappeared with four as all of them ppped forth while asleep then aging process stopped but deactivated but tey as all vanished but murdered as all of them but more than as all of tem cracked but blissed us/as he remains with powers too late emerged came too late with as all of bodies splashing more an as all of tem suddenly shattering Cursing us/them to be a species of all were all Immortal beings crashing from here then were as all of them shattering as Shadowhunters te Volturi heard of Shadowhunters were assassins but never age at all Alice she's a Shadowhunter a species of half human and half Angel reprogramed to slay Vampires is bound to God is immortal you granted her a mark that bound Shadowhunters to their mates can't be killed oh my god it's a ancient Vampire mating bite I am a What Halfling you have planet power ow you bit me we are Mated for Life husband then Alice fainted oh my god they know who you really you are yes beware the bite will make you primal but Wild go in heat will be stronger three times of your strength greater than a human being it's a curse then blacked out then popped then lost as all of it the bodies to the Volturi came more than as all of their guards shattered that was it murded as all of supernatural beings ten too late cracked but never rest unable to mate at all Alice what is she is mated to a Vampire yes over here boys oh man Earth's changed but really far futuristic oh my god can't be killed or slain who fainted Alice altered her age to look older gasp we are cursed but popped forth but were as all the last ones came with as all of them shattering a species could mate with Vampires yoo late they as all of tem exploding a breed of supernatural being from here now it's different holy smokes there goes the bomb more Vampires oh my god you Punk ulp Gleeeeeeeeep he paled was white as a sheet was horrified of his muscular body in a shirt with a jacket watch it shrimp CLONK! Ow we had only eight kids oh ew a girl it was my half-sibling a little boy gross a girl yuk belecch well boys can be boys he hated girls Gross! wanna see a beetle I am more smarter so they Alice did a worst B-Science fiction movie scream Ouch! My poor pointed ears ugh she kissed me Darla liked boys was a giggling child oh man he was kissed now it was too late te very as all of it popped as ghosts were teir species's name began haunting wwre restless scared the crap of Vampires were afraid of them came too late shattering more ten caused a brand-nwest evolution were undead people unable to sleep at all but hunted energy the Voturi heard as all of it they too were afraid of their looks was hideous fled screaming in horror wild crimson eyes in terror Masters there is a change in plans it's demons taking the lands from here we ai them as witnesses we executed each three of them but with Irina died here but executed but te four orphaned followed them with guardians their witnesses bring them too late killed ten wre more than as all of murdered as all of them came too late the bodies cremated ten blazig into ashes here we are at war.
18.
Chapter Mri's Alien Change then OW! A COYOTE SLICED ME ONTPO MY LEG AND I AM GOING TO DRINK Then Swallowing from each of them Alice Make her Stop ten too late I was Sliced by Paul Lahote and a Real Coya ote then was really thirsty but he reported Mrii 's not human from as all of Silvery lines and these very far way as all of them myself was really hungry again then bitten Edward again drainig hm by POPING a Vein Then my screams was heard officially from who you there wo turned her into a monster sliced and attacked Felix end her wih them NAPPPPD! With Best Friends as all of it came POPPPED! IT'S BURNING MAKE IT STOP You broken our laws Time-Rip them apart then too late killed of my heiritage then CRASHING! Jane she's dead with them Time-Split them then too late taken as all of human blood very as all of it came too late ALICE She is poisonedShe's not human at all finished her transformation ritual then I Sceamed of the Change so they blasting freely from the husk of the bodies then taken from us memories and humanity then taken away from here reported with each more Aro about this human marked sliced and bitten she is not human at all is a hybrid what a mutant yes SireShe is not alive deceased in the womb is frozen as a teenager aged but finally stopped Aging dispose the very as all of corpses send the ashes to families friends and loved ones with more mutant sliced marked and drained and bitten children are Dhampires are unable to see human families again punish them then too late bodies were dis[posed killed by Volturi forcs as all of them torn wre more than as all of them suddenly blasting Guards bitten as all of them suddenly lost each quart of truest human blood wwre Toxc violently exploded cganed more than as all EXPLODING! Then Alice had a vision of my heiritage she dontated her seeds to scence they done this to her who brought as all of hybrid children wrre not humans children she was drained while in te womb she is a hybrid so tey then blasting outside wre more than as allmy step-siblings fllowed so their own siblings then too late the each both vanished popping from ife to death killed as all of them but suddenly it was too late brought in here more than as all of guards ten suddenly it was too late destroyed as all of bodies came too soon EXPLODING! By violence then came too late more than as all with as all of out of te womb children and siblings step sibling shattering as Volturi members popped they did weird sciene and decree us/them deceased but extinct us/them came too late all of them freed of as all bites were poisonous as all of it ten thrown to the seas officially were more than as all of tem then no longer alive at all shrunken but thinner but more skinniest Alice what is wrong with her she/'s sick of official blood loss we br g the each both Miri is b not normal aged to adulthood they are angry of her heiritage she's both of a Vampire hunter father and a human moter drained gained half-siblings from each both brought here of their dual history then BLASTING OUTSIDE! Offically but for good and suddenly too late popped as all of them never had kids the siblings in mprinted but had more than as all of tem came crashing with us down but no longer mortals then suddenly came took late taken from us our souls stripped away shattering ten it really happened exploding more from organs more guards it's one throw them that was it no more children the humans had normal children in sorrow but from infection they too joined us/them then popped forth blacked out then it was too late freed of bodies as all of them very trigazillions blasted outside ten brough as all of tem killed more than as all of them shattered te gods aged me to eighteen yeaes old but was fixed at Seventeen just seventeen then popped from the as all of trimazillions as all of bazillions or as all of them came too late vanished from asd all lnds and America as well but killed for blood as all of guaeds all shattered from as all f bites was death caused immortality tey were as all disposed now toolate unable to have kids ten shattering causing a change into us/allies reappeared with four as all of them ppped forth while asleep then aging process stopped but deactivated but tey as all vanished but murdered as all of them but more than as all of tem cracked but blissed us/as he remains with powers too late emerged came too late with as all of bodies splashing more an as all of tem suddenly shattering Cursing us/them to be a species of all were all Immortal beings crashing from here then were as all of them shattering as Shadowhunters te Volturi heard of Shadowhunters were assassins but never age at all Alice she's a Shadowhunter a species of half human and half Angel reprogramed to slay Vampires is bound to God is immortal you granted her a mark that bound Shadowhunters to their mates can't be killed oh my god it's a ancient Vampire mating bite I am a What Halfling you have planet power ow you bit me we are Mated for Life husband then Alice fainted oh my god they know who you really you are yes beware the bite will make you primal but Wild go in heat will be stronger three times of your strength greater than a human being it's a curse then blacked out then popped then lost as all of it the bodies to the Volturi came more than as all of their guards shattered that was it murded as all of supernatural beings ten too late cracked but never rest unable to mate at all Alice what is she is mated to a Vampire yes over here boys oh man Earth's changed but really far futuristic oh my god can't be killed or slain who fainted Alice altered her age to look older gasp we are cursed but popped forth but were as all the last ones came with as all of them shattering a species could mate with Vampires yoo late they as all of tem exploding a breed of supernatural being from here now it's different holy smokes there goes the bomb more Vampires oh my god you Punk ulp Gleeeeeeeeep he paled was white as a sheet was horrified of his muscular body in a shirt with a jacket watch it shrimp CLONK! Ow we had only eight kids oh ew a girl it was my half-sibling a little boy gross a girl yuk belecch well boys can be boys he hated girls Gross! wanna see a beetle I am more smarter so they Alice did a worst B-Science fiction movie scream Ouch! My poor pointed ears ugh she kissed me Darla liked boys was a giggling child oh man he was kissed now it was too late te very as all of it popped as ghosts were teir species's name began haunting wwre restless scared the crap of Vampires were afraid of them came too late shattering more ten caused a brand-nwest evolution were undead people unable to sleep at all but hunted energy the Voturi heard as all of it they too were afraid of their looks was hideous fled screaming in horror wild crimson eyes in terror Masters there is a change in plans it's demons taking the lands from here we ai them as witnesses we executed each three of them but with Irina died here but executed but te four orphaned followed them with guardians their witnesses bring them too late killed ten wre more than as all of murdered as all of them came too late the bodies cremated ten blazig into ashes here we are at war.
5/22/2016 c16 
9Book-Nerd 4 lyfe
Really like your characters. They seem a lot more real. Miri isn't falling all over Edward and Edward isn't a huge prude. Can't wait for more!
9Book-Nerd 4 lyfeReally like your characters. They seem a lot more real. Miri isn't falling all over Edward and Edward isn't a huge prude. Can't wait for more!
5/17/2016 c14 Debbie Hicks
15.
Chapter 15.
Imazadi
Edward yes I am what mated it's for life fell asleep I prayed to Eywa lull us to a dreamless slumber if as Na'vi mated couples then myself reached for te door Dad he and I mated I gave up body mind and soul I am his imzadi I am a Trekker I converted you as a Trekker care to watch Star Trek movies what it means Cherished dear soul in Betazoid I got books try this Bloodwine for a glorious war and myself was with Black eyes looked like Deanna Troi of Betazed huI there Peach recall us yes it's Paul he has woman trouble it's Rachel imprinted and I Need help Peach it's this eldest sister she a twin I imprinted on her bound to me holy smokes it's Bloodwine I am his imzadi it means beloved in Betazoid I know Galatic languages I am different ten Emmett with instead of food I poured great idea tere is a baseball ganme but Alice has a vision you I have prophectc dreams I got a bad Feeling it's a bad omen I see three nomads James a fiery but skilled lethal tracker Victoria can escape superspeed Laurent no gift you are what gifted it's out you are really special how's te blood stored for winter I can't eat but I never sleep of te host it hails from the planet Chulak age a 134 of the host blasted alien blood mixed but I am really thirsty I got a bad Negaverse feeling Dad pack weapons I am in fact a different breed of fighter nown as a Vampire slayer it is a person born with Vampire skills and traitsable to fight Vampires mess with me you three you'r Sushi the news reached Italy myself was different had a alien heartbeat and a scent was extraterrestrial I was not human nor Vampire it transformed me a Vampire slayer with skills and combat training and I was highly superior and more than civilzed was prepared for battle and was with alien blood they spread rumors my own mother flirted with aliens born you guessed it pointed ears had slanted eyebrows spoke Vulcan dialects of the planet I was Telepathic could sense feeling and emotions of others was a Touch-Telepath dressed to look like T'Pau I was a Syrannite was peaceful with Surak had such dark eyes looked young was a Adult Vulcan female in reverse hold on I showered Then then my voice echoed Batter UP! Then I ws fit as Ox stronger three times of my greater strength Crap o my god she is Vulcan oh my god some sperm mixed up she's a hybrid oh my god she's smarter than normal then came too late with a headline VULCANS DESCEND ON EARTH BRACE YOURSELVES : INVASION! then it really happened it had come Vulcans enterd Earth.
15.
Chapter 15.
Imazadi
Edward yes I am what mated it's for life fell asleep I prayed to Eywa lull us to a dreamless slumber if as Na'vi mated couples then myself reached for te door Dad he and I mated I gave up body mind and soul I am his imzadi I am a Trekker I converted you as a Trekker care to watch Star Trek movies what it means Cherished dear soul in Betazoid I got books try this Bloodwine for a glorious war and myself was with Black eyes looked like Deanna Troi of Betazed huI there Peach recall us yes it's Paul he has woman trouble it's Rachel imprinted and I Need help Peach it's this eldest sister she a twin I imprinted on her bound to me holy smokes it's Bloodwine I am his imzadi it means beloved in Betazoid I know Galatic languages I am different ten Emmett with instead of food I poured great idea tere is a baseball ganme but Alice has a vision you I have prophectc dreams I got a bad Feeling it's a bad omen I see three nomads James a fiery but skilled lethal tracker Victoria can escape superspeed Laurent no gift you are what gifted it's out you are really special how's te blood stored for winter I can't eat but I never sleep of te host it hails from the planet Chulak age a 134 of the host blasted alien blood mixed but I am really thirsty I got a bad Negaverse feeling Dad pack weapons I am in fact a different breed of fighter nown as a Vampire slayer it is a person born with Vampire skills and traitsable to fight Vampires mess with me you three you'r Sushi the news reached Italy myself was different had a alien heartbeat and a scent was extraterrestrial I was not human nor Vampire it transformed me a Vampire slayer with skills and combat training and I was highly superior and more than civilzed was prepared for battle and was with alien blood they spread rumors my own mother flirted with aliens born you guessed it pointed ears had slanted eyebrows spoke Vulcan dialects of the planet I was Telepathic could sense feeling and emotions of others was a Touch-Telepath dressed to look like T'Pau I was a Syrannite was peaceful with Surak had such dark eyes looked young was a Adult Vulcan female in reverse hold on I showered Then then my voice echoed Batter UP! Then I ws fit as Ox stronger three times of my greater strength Crap o my god she is Vulcan oh my god some sperm mixed up she's a hybrid oh my god she's smarter than normal then came too late with a headline VULCANS DESCEND ON EARTH BRACE YOURSELVES : INVASION! then it really happened it had come Vulcans enterd Earth.
3/29/2016 c3 Guest
I like it!
I like it!
3/29/2016 c2 Guest
Miri is really cool!
Miri is really cool!
3/29/2016 c1 Guest
Awesome!
Awesome!
3/19/2016 c9 Iamnothappy
WOW! Your story sucks so much! I honestly feel dumb after reading it. It's a shame that with your story has become a little more worse!
Anyway stop this dumb f-ing story and start practicing your writing skills because honey they stink!
WOW! Your story sucks so much! I honestly feel dumb after reading it. It's a shame that with your story has become a little more worse!
Anyway stop this dumb f-ing story and start practicing your writing skills because honey they stink!