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12/31/2015 c1 6Mr. CyborgPineappleIsland II
OK, so I have mostly positive mixed feelings about this fic.

First off, I wasn't too big of a fan of the ending. Both Noah and Coddy felt both OOC and OTT, but as Tom entered the picture, it seemed really good. The sex was a plus. c:

Even though it followed absolutely nothing of what I asked, it was pretty good, especially at the ending.

But as a note, I still hear your voice in your work, especially when the characters are talking. Maybe as a suggestion, you could listen to the way that they speak or even listen to how other people talk and try to emulate that.

But again, loved it!

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