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9/26/2018 c1 4TheDidactsHand
Well i don't see why you should get compensation for writing a crossover between two things you don't even own... This is pretty low tbh. You even took it off so no one could read it lmao. That's shady.
5/30/2018 c1 Guest
well fuck off then cause your stories sucked ass
5/1/2018 c3 2Lord Richard
Oh my god, this story is amazing! I love it. It's very descriptive each chapter, but I really enjoy it. It's always so fun seeing the dc characters awed at thr powers of a saiyan and the Z fighters.

I'm so glad I found this story, it's really fun to read.

Yes, you have to continue this bro. It's been 2 years since you last updated, literally. Come on now, this is too good to stop now haha. Lol
I'll be here when you update your story.
2/14/2018 c1 x2leoj
23k word in like 2 years, i don’t know why these people hope.
11/28/2017 c3 Dbz
Please update this know its been more than a year know why arent you updating the story
11/11/2017 c3 Thor 10
Come on update already
9/21/2017 c3 Guest
Please continue this story it is amazing! It has been almost a year I hope u did not give in and stop writing the story. That would be really sad T..T so if u are reading this... Please come back and continue writing this story 3.
3/5/2017 c3 slime lord
why can't you update, been a very long time now, also have goten train his fucking tail, to get rid of his weakness, when some grab his tail, or bite down on it, like kripto did on last chapter;
2/15/2017 c3 zack402
please update soon and make goten ssj4 please i beg you
2/15/2017 c3 dbz
please update soon cant wait
to read chapter 4
2/15/2017 c3 dbx
please update the story soon
2/8/2017 c2 DNA
Please make gotten ssj4 and give him goku hairstyle and update fast can't wait to read more amazing crossover
2/3/2017 c2 Blinded in a bolthole
Saiyans... specifically of Goku's progeny don't have much of an active libido. But at least his sons are capable of noticing things. I bet you could play most arosing porno movie of all time for Goku and he would either fall asleep or leave on the ground that it was boring. It might only be Goku though. Vegeta doesn't seem to be like that.

Again, don't use ridiculous numbers. I know even Roshi's powerful enough to blow up moon but when you try giving it numbers... it looks overly exaggerated.
2/3/2017 c1 Blinded in a bolthole
Don't use such ridiculous numbers! 0.0one too many zero0.6? If anything can move this fast and has mass of a person shockwave of their movement would tear planets apart!

Also prevy anime nosebleed is Roshi's name.
12/29/2016 c3 Matthew gemm
Please update soon.
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