for Shimmer Of Friendship10/23/2017 c1 FrostHunter
You know this ironically makes a little more sense than actual if this story continues I would princess luna to be reformed and lighting dust become one of the first shadowbolts that aren't evil also if you want do some more au you could have more reasonable starlight glimmer become sunset's rival starlight could also view sunset as worthy opponent as result they could more of friendly rivalry this would also keep sunset at her best.
You know this ironically makes a little more sense than actual if this story continues I would princess luna to be reformed and lighting dust become one of the first shadowbolts that aren't evil also if you want do some more au you could have more reasonable starlight glimmer become sunset's rival starlight could also view sunset as worthy opponent as result they could more of friendly rivalry this would also keep sunset at her best.
9/13/2016 c1 GiantSpidr
while I agree with you on the fluttershy being lazy and all that other stuff, she is actually loyal. remember first episode? but yeah that's all I have to disagree with you on. the others I get. she isn't the best one (what's your favorite? mines fluttershy)
while I agree with you on the fluttershy being lazy and all that other stuff, she is actually loyal. remember first episode? but yeah that's all I have to disagree with you on. the others I get. she isn't the best one (what's your favorite? mines fluttershy)
8/31/2016 c1 
117TerraZeal
You're right, random Guest too ashamed to post on their own account because their stories are probably so bad they don't want anyone seeing them. The pony who abandons her friends for her own fame, pranks the sweetest pony in the world, sabotages childrens' cookie sales, refuses to do her job unless insulted, and who thinks awesome, cool, and radical are all different is totally the best pony. How could I not realize this before? Wow, thank you for your amazing review and insight! You truly changed my mind!
Seriously? This is why I used to turn off Guest reviews...but then I realized just how funny flames are. So please, keep telling me why Rainbow Dash is the best pony. I will giggle every time. Tell me I write bad, too, but at least post on your account so I can judge whether you're a good writer. If you are, then I would love some help in improving my writing, or at least some tips, so feel free to PM me if you have tips beyond "raindow bash is teh awsum u stupid".
117TerraZealYou're right, random Guest too ashamed to post on their own account because their stories are probably so bad they don't want anyone seeing them. The pony who abandons her friends for her own fame, pranks the sweetest pony in the world, sabotages childrens' cookie sales, refuses to do her job unless insulted, and who thinks awesome, cool, and radical are all different is totally the best pony. How could I not realize this before? Wow, thank you for your amazing review and insight! You truly changed my mind!
Seriously? This is why I used to turn off Guest reviews...but then I realized just how funny flames are. So please, keep telling me why Rainbow Dash is the best pony. I will giggle every time. Tell me I write bad, too, but at least post on your account so I can judge whether you're a good writer. If you are, then I would love some help in improving my writing, or at least some tips, so feel free to PM me if you have tips beyond "raindow bash is teh awsum u stupid".
8/5/2016 c1 Guest
Rainbow dash is best pony. She is loyal. Fuck you. You don't know shit.
Rainbow dash is best pony. She is loyal. Fuck you. You don't know shit.
2/1/2016 c1 goddragonking
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)
1/30/2016 c1 Mischief's queen
I love and can't wait for you to update and I am looking forward to see how you write doctor whooves into the story especially in the movies. And also to seeing if Dinky will make any more apperences.
I love and can't wait for you to update and I am looking forward to see how you write doctor whooves into the story especially in the movies. And also to seeing if Dinky will make any more apperences.