for Nakiri's Desire1/8/2016 c2 Guest
I'm really hoping you decide to make this a sorina story and the suspense is killing me xc
I'm really hoping you decide to make this a sorina story and the suspense is killing me xc
1/8/2016 c7 
8l Hypocrisy l
Chapter 7 will be more my thing huh? Hahaah. Well I def did like it. Im also loving that Erina seems to be the only one semi immune to Soma's smexyness. It makes me want to see her with him more hahah. Oh man the chapter was funny as well. Looks like she still believes hes not her special person lol
8l Hypocrisy lChapter 7 will be more my thing huh? Hahaah. Well I def did like it. Im also loving that Erina seems to be the only one semi immune to Soma's smexyness. It makes me want to see her with him more hahah. Oh man the chapter was funny as well. Looks like she still believes hes not her special person lol
1/8/2016 c7 KitamiAru
I'll give you a good job for your hard work. And this chapter have no mistakes.
I'll give you a good job for your hard work. And this chapter have no mistakes.
1/6/2016 c2 6Renu
Sweet baby Jesus thank you ( I rarely use this statement so it's quite the compliment ). But seriously I was looking and waiting for a story like this to appear. If no one wrote this type of story I would have taken matters into my own hands though it probably would pale in comparison to this story. Update soon yeah
6RenuSweet baby Jesus thank you ( I rarely use this statement so it's quite the compliment ). But seriously I was looking and waiting for a story like this to appear. If no one wrote this type of story I would have taken matters into my own hands though it probably would pale in comparison to this story. Update soon yeah
1/4/2016 c6 treeofsakuras
Great chapter, really like the soumaxalice moments.
Can't wait to see what will happen when Erina recognize him
Great chapter, really like the soumaxalice moments.
Can't wait to see what will happen when Erina recognize him
1/4/2016 c6 KitamiAru
No, no you don't need to take it down. Just correct your little errors and voila!
Anyway, you're getting better and do update soon~~ I'm dying with curiosity here..
No, no you don't need to take it down. Just correct your little errors and voila!
Anyway, you're getting better and do update soon~~ I'm dying with curiosity here..
1/4/2016 c6 8l Hypocrisy l
Hahah. Just finished catching up! Man this is one raunchy unexpected story! Alice and megumi go at it! Soma makes ikumi all flustered! Erina watches with some jealousy up top. Alice and soma have a date. I think the story is progressing wonderfully! Keep up the great work! ;p
8l Hypocrisy lHahah. Just finished catching up! Man this is one raunchy unexpected story! Alice and megumi go at it! Soma makes ikumi all flustered! Erina watches with some jealousy up top. Alice and soma have a date. I think the story is progressing wonderfully! Keep up the great work! ;p
1/4/2016 c6 33Imperial-samaB
Not bad Souma has quite a bit of bite its an amusing change. lets see what happens from now on.
33Imperial-samaBNot bad Souma has quite a bit of bite its an amusing change. lets see what happens from now on.
1/4/2016 c5 2Arrow3ss
Is the standard classroom setting part of AU note you had on your summary? 'Cause I remember Tootsuki having a school setting similar to Universities and Colleges (I'm not entirely sure since it's been awhile since I've touched materials anything remotely related to manga and anime so I might be mixing things up but I vaguely remember this about Tootsuki).
2Arrow3ssIs the standard classroom setting part of AU note you had on your summary? 'Cause I remember Tootsuki having a school setting similar to Universities and Colleges (I'm not entirely sure since it's been awhile since I've touched materials anything remotely related to manga and anime so I might be mixing things up but I vaguely remember this about Tootsuki).
1/3/2016 c5 3La Jesus Quack
After reading this even with some mistakes in it, I can't imagine how I haven't read it. It has good flow to it, you did good with transitions too when it came to cooking so that it doesn't affect the story negatively. So far I love it. It's also funny with how you used simple comments that reminds the two girls.
But if you could, I think you should look through it after you finish if you don't already or get a beta possibly, to check for simple errors like mispelling and etc. You don't have to though, I still love it either way.
3La Jesus QuackAfter reading this even with some mistakes in it, I can't imagine how I haven't read it. It has good flow to it, you did good with transitions too when it came to cooking so that it doesn't affect the story negatively. So far I love it. It's also funny with how you used simple comments that reminds the two girls.
But if you could, I think you should look through it after you finish if you don't already or get a beta possibly, to check for simple errors like mispelling and etc. You don't have to though, I still love it either way.