for Nakiri's Desire12/30/2015 c1 Jin
Please Make More I Am So Eager To Read More From You
Please Make More I Am So Eager To Read More From You
12/30/2015 c3 Zenon001
Keep up the good work, and the lemon scene was pretty well maid.
Keep up the good work, and the lemon scene was pretty well maid.
12/29/2015 c3 
8l Hypocrisy l
Just caught up and I think you did a wonderful job! I loved how you tied in Soma's scar, and made it so it's actually Erina the one who gave it to him. Also yes, it is very hard to write certain scenes so I applaud you for doing your best. I think the lemon scene was written quite smoothly for your first and that was a good subtle entry into the perverted lol. Can't wait to see more. Great job Lion! Also the ErinaxSomaxAlice pairing is just way too hot. Love this.
8l Hypocrisy lJust caught up and I think you did a wonderful job! I loved how you tied in Soma's scar, and made it so it's actually Erina the one who gave it to him. Also yes, it is very hard to write certain scenes so I applaud you for doing your best. I think the lemon scene was written quite smoothly for your first and that was a good subtle entry into the perverted lol. Can't wait to see more. Great job Lion! Also the ErinaxSomaxAlice pairing is just way too hot. Love this.
12/29/2015 c3 Guest
please don't all of a sudden not update this it is one of the best stories I've read for this series
please don't all of a sudden not update this it is one of the best stories I've read for this series
12/29/2015 c1 l Hypocrisy l
What a nice start to the story! And their making snowman's together. Hhahaa. Loved it. Will be reading chapters 2 and 3 shortly.
What a nice start to the story! And their making snowman's together. Hhahaa. Loved it. Will be reading chapters 2 and 3 shortly.
12/29/2015 c3 Jin
This Is awesome to read
This Is awesome to read
12/29/2015 c3 ChaosOmega8
Oooh dis gonna be guuud. Things are getting nice and spicy and this setting kinda reminds me of Seiken Tsukai no World Break(don't ask it just reminds me).
I really wanna see the reactions of others when Erina and Alice (if possible) clings to Souma from both sides while trying to get rid of the other. Just imagining it makes me laugh.
Good luck with the next chapter.
Oooh dis gonna be guuud. Things are getting nice and spicy and this setting kinda reminds me of Seiken Tsukai no World Break(don't ask it just reminds me).
I really wanna see the reactions of others when Erina and Alice (if possible) clings to Souma from both sides while trying to get rid of the other. Just imagining it makes me laugh.
Good luck with the next chapter.
12/29/2015 c2 Apocalups Dragon
Please try to give us the chapter fastest as is posible is so interesting
Please try to give us the chapter fastest as is posible is so interesting
12/29/2015 c1 Guest
Great Story Dude Please Update Soon.
Great Story Dude Please Update Soon.
12/29/2015 c2 Elchabon
Very good history.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
I already love the erina x souma x alice.
Very good history.
I am looking forward to the next chapter.
I already love the erina x souma x alice.
12/28/2015 c2 Dread
Nice Work! This is was almost perfect I haven't read anything this good since Envoy was still around! Keep up the good work, would love to see more.
Nice Work! This is was almost perfect I haven't read anything this good since Envoy was still around! Keep up the good work, would love to see more.