for Goodbye6/24/2018 c1 Ileatrekkie
Your writing is very good, very emotional. That said, am I the only one who felt this was out of character? This is the same girl that unrepentantly shot him four times, which I believed to be more harsh than Coulson killing him, as at the time he was trying to help her, and possibly could’ve been redeemed at that point. But, in my eyes, any good still left in him died when agent 33 was killed. I may get flack for this, but my reaction at Ward’s death was, it’s about time.
Your writing is very good, very emotional. That said, am I the only one who felt this was out of character? This is the same girl that unrepentantly shot him four times, which I believed to be more harsh than Coulson killing him, as at the time he was trying to help her, and possibly could’ve been redeemed at that point. But, in my eyes, any good still left in him died when agent 33 was killed. I may get flack for this, but my reaction at Ward’s death was, it’s about time.
5/25/2016 c1 
10Christmas 95
That was beautiful! :') I hated how everyone just acted like it was perfectly normal the way Coulson killed him. I couldn't believe how Saisy had reacted, but I'm thinking it was just an act. That she still cared about him. Thank you so much of this perfect send off for Ward. I know I am going to miss him.
10Christmas 95That was beautiful! :') I hated how everyone just acted like it was perfectly normal the way Coulson killed him. I couldn't believe how Saisy had reacted, but I'm thinking it was just an act. That she still cared about him. Thank you so much of this perfect send off for Ward. I know I am going to miss him.
3/17/2016 c1 45Dante 101
Sad in a beautifully heartbreaking way. I saw Grant's death and I have to say that it was cold, brutal and cruel. If they're going to kill off the guy, kill him off like this.
45Dante 101Sad in a beautifully heartbreaking way. I saw Grant's death and I have to say that it was cold, brutal and cruel. If they're going to kill off the guy, kill him off like this.
1/7/2016 c1 2bealwaysinlove
Thank you for writing this. You are doing a much better job than the so-called writers of this show. I didn't think I would grow to despise it and live in Fanfic world before the end of the second season. I'm sorry to rant. Your writing is beautiful and heartfelt, though, and I enjoyed it immensely.
2bealwaysinloveThank you for writing this. You are doing a much better job than the so-called writers of this show. I didn't think I would grow to despise it and live in Fanfic world before the end of the second season. I'm sorry to rant. Your writing is beautiful and heartfelt, though, and I enjoyed it immensely.
1/1/2016 c1 8mariaTcaskett
Wow, this is so beautiful, your writing is amazing! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
8mariaTcaskettWow, this is so beautiful, your writing is amazing! Thank you for sharing it with us :)
12/28/2015 c1 Guest
This was beautiful. I can not stop crying. Thank you.
This was beautiful. I can not stop crying. Thank you.
12/28/2015 c1 AwesomeGirl
No no no. I cried reading this. Beautifully heartbreaking
:( if they had to kill him I wish it had gone down like this.
No no no. I cried reading this. Beautifully heartbreaking
:( if they had to kill him I wish it had gone down like this.
12/28/2015 c1 1Fanthing1123
Perfect ! And it made me cry xxx this is how it should have been xxx awsome ! Thank you
1Fanthing1123Perfect ! And it made me cry xxx this is how it should have been xxx awsome ! Thank you