Reviews: Lucy, the Forbidden Demon RinxLucy

7/3/2019 c1 Anonymous
Ummm...

5/5/2019 c1 adenm0
number's

6/18/2018 c1 Nick
Why was there so much random stuff like sources and numbers and stuff?It made it hard to read

12/30/2017 c1

4DawsonRose03
This is not a fan fiction. Is it coded? Do we have to decode it? Its just confusing!
I can't read this. It sounded really cool though.

11/19/2017 c1 Nightshade's account
wtf?

10/7/2017 c1 catilatelia
This is confusing.i like the idea but it's kinda hard to read

7/6/2017 c1

5N Umbra
What the hell! So much HTML code! Could you find a way to not show it. I love the story though, it's great! I hope you update!

4/13/2017 c1 BURNERACC
Eh?

4/9/2017 c1 Whoopies
I really like your writing. I just have one question... Is there a way to make only your writing show? I have a bunch of other stuff on my screen as well.

1/29/2017 c1

5apocalyptic harmony
this chapter has gone weird btw, really hard to read like this

1/15/2017 c1 caramellattae
da heck is this

12/6/2016 c1

2Wendy Riddle
Why it's many things like that "0px;color:#555555" ? The summary is very good I love this idee but it's not easy to read this fiction with the "0px" and other things like that.

11/27/2016 c1

5PhantomTuna99
please, reupload this, or redo this story, I love the summary so please?

10/18/2016 c1

4DeletedAccount013
Definitely need to re-upload this without the web code...

10/14/2016 c1 secretlydatingnatsu
you need to fix this shit! I fucking hard to read it!

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