for Dimension Dragon Tamer2/3/2016 c3 Guest
The way I see it, you can do a scene where the fusion Dragon has it's effect magically transformed
The way I see it, you can do a scene where the fusion Dragon has it's effect magically transformed
1/31/2016 c4 CityLover96
I want to see Lulu, Rin, Celina and Zuzu kiss Yuya, say maybe Yuya will have 4 girlfriends.
I want to see Lulu, Rin, Celina and Zuzu kiss Yuya, say maybe Yuya will have 4 girlfriends.
1/31/2016 c1 CityLover96
I didn't want those Performapal cards ripped up, unless they were fake, I'm okay with it.
I didn't want those Performapal cards ripped up, unless they were fake, I'm okay with it.
2/2/2016 c5 
5Citylover96
I never asked any questions, but I have a feeling in the show, Yuya will have the 4 dimension dragons for real. Just so you know Yuya and Zuzu are childhood friends.
5Citylover96I never asked any questions, but I have a feeling in the show, Yuya will have the 4 dimension dragons for real. Just so you know Yuya and Zuzu are childhood friends.
2/2/2016 c5 9Diabolic Tracer
So... not trying to sound harsh or anything, but I think that you should put more time in writing the chapters because there are lots of mistakes that just kill the mood when reading :/
It just feels like you have a deadline of a few hours in which you have to write the whole chapter, but the truth is that no one here has (must have) a deadline.
Another thing, using only bold while writing the duels makes it a bit confusing and hard to understand what is going on.
With this done I would like to ask, is this Yuya similar to Manga Yuya and will we see Odd-Eyes Phantom Dragon? 'cause really, Phantom Dragon and co are way cooler than Pendulum Dragon xD
9Diabolic TracerSo... not trying to sound harsh or anything, but I think that you should put more time in writing the chapters because there are lots of mistakes that just kill the mood when reading :/
It just feels like you have a deadline of a few hours in which you have to write the whole chapter, but the truth is that no one here has (must have) a deadline.
Another thing, using only bold while writing the duels makes it a bit confusing and hard to understand what is going on.
With this done I would like to ask, is this Yuya similar to Manga Yuya and will we see Odd-Eyes Phantom Dragon? 'cause really, Phantom Dragon and co are way cooler than Pendulum Dragon xD
1/30/2016 c1 CityLover96
I know who the 3 Duelists Yuya, Sora and Shay will fight, It's Kit Blade, Dipper O'rion and Julia Krystal. I can't wait to see Zuzu cheer Yuya, Sora and Shay on, I want Yuya, Sora and Shay to win.
I know who the 3 Duelists Yuya, Sora and Shay will fight, It's Kit Blade, Dipper O'rion and Julia Krystal. I can't wait to see Zuzu cheer Yuya, Sora and Shay on, I want Yuya, Sora and Shay to win.
1/30/2016 c4 jackson
Nice one man. you are good at this so next chapter can you tell us how yuya meet shay and sora please.
Nice one man. you are good at this so next chapter can you tell us how yuya meet shay and sora please.
1/4/2016 c3 jackson
awsome man but I don't think that effect was starv venom fusion dragon's effect but nice job.
awsome man but I don't think that effect was starv venom fusion dragon's effect but nice job.
1/3/2016 c2 Guest
I like this a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I like this a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/3/2016 c2 jackson
This chapter is good even if fhere is no duels and yuya's synchro master is yusei isn't it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
This chapter is good even if fhere is no duels and yuya's synchro master is yusei isn't it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/31/2015 c1 shadow
nice story mate. I look forward to the next chapter.
nice story mate. I look forward to the next chapter.
12/30/2015 c1 jackson
This story is awsome dude. I can't wait for the next chapter.
This story is awsome dude. I can't wait for the next chapter.