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2/3/2016 c3 Guest
The way I see it, you can do a scene where the fusion Dragon has it's effect magically transformed
1/31/2016 c4 CityLover96
I want to see Lulu, Rin, Celina and Zuzu kiss Yuya, say maybe Yuya will have 4 girlfriends.
1/31/2016 c1 CityLover96
I didn't want those Performapal cards ripped up, unless they were fake, I'm okay with it.
2/2/2016 c5 4Citylover96
I never asked any questions, but I have a feeling in the show, Yuya will have the 4 dimension dragons for real. Just so you know Yuya and Zuzu are childhood friends.
2/2/2016 c5 8Diabolic Tracer
So... not trying to sound harsh or anything, but I think that you should put more time in writing the chapters because there are lots of mistakes that just kill the mood when reading :/
It just feels like you have a deadline of a few hours in which you have to write the whole chapter, but the truth is that no one here has (must have) a deadline.
Another thing, using only bold while writing the duels makes it a bit confusing and hard to understand what is going on.
With this done I would like to ask, is this Yuya similar to Manga Yuya and will we see Odd-Eyes Phantom Dragon? 'cause really, Phantom Dragon and co are way cooler than Pendulum Dragon xD
1/30/2016 c1 CityLover96
I know who the 3 Duelists Yuya, Sora and Shay will fight, It's Kit Blade, Dipper O'rion and Julia Krystal. I can't wait to see Zuzu cheer Yuya, Sora and Shay on, I want Yuya, Sora and Shay to win.
1/30/2016 c4 jackson
Nice one man. you are good at this so next chapter can you tell us how yuya meet shay and sora please.
2/1/2016 c1 31Star-Eyes Pendulum Dragon
well done. you just fucked up big time
1/4/2016 c3 jackson
awsome man but I don't think that effect was starv venom fusion dragon's effect but nice job.
1/3/2016 c2 Guest
I like this a lot! Can't wait for the next chapter!
1/3/2016 c2 jackson
This chapter is good even if fhere is no duels and yuya's synchro master is yusei isn't it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
1/3/2016 c2 4Leafeon12
I'm loving this story good so far keep it up! :D
12/31/2015 c1 shadow
nice story mate. I look forward to the next chapter.
12/30/2015 c1 jackson
This story is awsome dude. I can't wait for the next chapter.
12/30/2015 c1 3Style1234
That's very awesome story. Well written and I like how you're building character of Yuya.
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