
1/7/2016 c1
57Amulet Misty
Yes I AM procrastinating. But I'm doing so by reading your fic. How now, Tash :D
Haha this gets funnier every time I read it. Kunichika and that smirk smirk at the end. I think just the basic concept of the top squad decorating their room is awesome. Yuiga is still our bae.
And no probs Tash! I'm glad I could contri-boat to this fic. I mean contri-bro. No I mean both. AIGHT I'M OUT. PEACE.

Yes I AM procrastinating. But I'm doing so by reading your fic. How now, Tash :D
Haha this gets funnier every time I read it. Kunichika and that smirk smirk at the end. I think just the basic concept of the top squad decorating their room is awesome. Yuiga is still our bae.
And no probs Tash! I'm glad I could contri-boat to this fic. I mean contri-bro. No I mean both. AIGHT I'M OUT. PEACE.
1/6/2016 c1
120Aviantei
Hey there, Tash! It's been a while since the Skype session, but I'm glad to see you out and about. anyway, the review system is fixed and World Trigger fluff is always a plus, so this was a fun read.
If there's one thing that made me laugh the most, it's the comment about how if Tachikawa can get into university then it shouldn't be a problem. Seriously.
Something I noticed that could be tweaked a bit is the opening paragraph. It's in past tense while the rest of the fic is present. I think I noticed this on one of your T-Sauce entries, too, so it might be something to keep an eye out for.
Oh, and you shouldn't apologize about the title. I thought it was awesome wordplay.
Anyway, just figured I'd drop of a word and see how you're doing. If you get a chance, don't forget to check out [Shibuya Operation - Story Storm] and maybe write something. I'd love to see more of your stuff!
Stay Sauce-some,
-Avi

Hey there, Tash! It's been a while since the Skype session, but I'm glad to see you out and about. anyway, the review system is fixed and World Trigger fluff is always a plus, so this was a fun read.
If there's one thing that made me laugh the most, it's the comment about how if Tachikawa can get into university then it shouldn't be a problem. Seriously.
Something I noticed that could be tweaked a bit is the opening paragraph. It's in past tense while the rest of the fic is present. I think I noticed this on one of your T-Sauce entries, too, so it might be something to keep an eye out for.
Oh, and you shouldn't apologize about the title. I thought it was awesome wordplay.
Anyway, just figured I'd drop of a word and see how you're doing. If you get a chance, don't forget to check out [Shibuya Operation - Story Storm] and maybe write something. I'd love to see more of your stuff!
Stay Sauce-some,
-Avi