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34Raine Lionheart
This story was very cute. You are a better writer than you might think. Keep writing, find someone to help you translate to English, and have fun creating! :D
34Raine LionheartThis story was very cute. You are a better writer than you might think. Keep writing, find someone to help you translate to English, and have fun creating! :D
11/26/2016 c1 1Masquerade man1234
A very nice short story, hope more stories like this for Steven and gem ships.
1Masquerade man1234A very nice short story, hope more stories like this for Steven and gem ships.
9/16/2016 c1 21White Fire the Dragon
I was just looking up S.U. christmas stories because I wanted to. Despite the grammer mistakes, this was pretty good.
21White Fire the DragonI was just looking up S.U. christmas stories because I wanted to. Despite the grammer mistakes, this was pretty good.
9/1/2016 c1 Nottheonionking
Pretty good for English not being your first language. There were a few mistakes, but it was clean for the most part. Great work!
Pretty good for English not being your first language. There were a few mistakes, but it was clean for the most part. Great work!
8/18/2016 c1 3Lady of the Sky
Cute. It's always nice to see Peridot trying her best, and the humans of Beach City interacting in a story.
3Lady of the SkyCute. It's always nice to see Peridot trying her best, and the humans of Beach City interacting in a story.
8/15/2016 c1 Guest
Make part 2 please !
Make part 2 please !
3/6/2016 c1 Guest
You did a good job. I liked yoyr writing.
You did a good job. I liked yoyr writing.
2/9/2016 c1 Nameless shadow
There aren't enough of these out there... Those 2 make a great match...
There aren't enough of these out there... Those 2 make a great match...
1/17/2016 c1 6WerewolfMazuko117
Execelent story dude, no te desanimes, en ingles o español es una buen historia, deberias publicarle en español tambien, larga vida al stevidot
6WerewolfMazuko117Execelent story dude, no te desanimes, en ingles o español es una buen historia, deberias publicarle en español tambien, larga vida al stevidot
1/12/2016 c1 2Orange Dash
Wow, I can imagine Pearl's face right now... That was so sweet! It was so lovely!
2Orange DashWow, I can imagine Pearl's face right now... That was so sweet! It was so lovely!
1/10/2016 c1 1CinderFur04
It was a wonderful story! I appreciate that you used google translate so that other people could read it.
1CinderFur04It was a wonderful story! I appreciate that you used google translate so that other people could read it.
1/9/2016 c1 Samy
This was a wonderful read, I'd love to see you continue it
This was a wonderful read, I'd love to see you continue it