for The End Is Only the Beginning5/17/2020 c3 
1have.a.lovely.day
I really like this story! I know it's been a while, but if you ever feel like continuing... well that would be appreciated.
1have.a.lovely.dayI really like this story! I know it's been a while, but if you ever feel like continuing... well that would be appreciated.
2/5/2019 c3 SunGoddess
I give this a 9.5/10, mostly because it kept me interested in the story although there was one moment where I got lost. I love how you portrayed the characters with their own personalities and backstories, especially Jessica (Jesse). Kudos 3
I give this a 9.5/10, mostly because it kept me interested in the story although there was one moment where I got lost. I love how you portrayed the characters with their own personalities and backstories, especially Jessica (Jesse). Kudos 3
1/4/2018 c3 Guest
You need to write more af this
You need to write more af this
1/4/2018 c3 Guest
Please make another chapter!
Please make another chapter!
12/12/2017 c3 NotCorlito
Hey I really like your story so far! It’s been a year but hopefully you’ll continue writing!
Hey I really like your story so far! It’s been a year but hopefully you’ll continue writing!
11/27/2017 c3 Guest
Well damn this is good. Both story wise and writing. I'm not one to rush people, we all write at our own pace, but I really REALLY hope you update soon. It just has so much potential and I know for a fact it'll become one of my favourites.
Also, (SEASON 2 SPOILER) I love how you made Jesse's favourite colour blue, and later on in the game it turns out it actually is. I just find this funny for no good reason XD
Well damn this is good. Both story wise and writing. I'm not one to rush people, we all write at our own pace, but I really REALLY hope you update soon. It just has so much potential and I know for a fact it'll become one of my favourites.
Also, (SEASON 2 SPOILER) I love how you made Jesse's favourite colour blue, and later on in the game it turns out it actually is. I just find this funny for no good reason XD
3/17/2017 c3 Guest
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE WRITE MORE!
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE WRITE MORE!
3/16/2017 c3 Guest
PLEASE WRITE MORE THIS IS AMAZING
PLEASE WRITE MORE THIS IS AMAZING