for The Usual Argument7/16/2021 c1 Nelura
Huh, wasn’t expecting Lucy and Erza. Not bad. I thought it was going to end up as Jucy. Oh well.
Huh, wasn’t expecting Lucy and Erza. Not bad. I thought it was going to end up as Jucy. Oh well.
11/20/2020 c1 Guest
I don't like the plot but your writing style is really good.
I don't like the plot but your writing style is really good.
10/17/2019 c1 Guest
Doommarine oh look another review from an angry 10 year old. You must be so proud of yourself. Deactivate your account pussy.
Doommarine oh look another review from an angry 10 year old. You must be so proud of yourself. Deactivate your account pussy.
5/24/2018 c1 Guest
Good story. I love Erlu
Good story. I love Erlu
11/5/2017 c1 Guest
lucy is lesbian?
lucy is lesbian?
4/14/2017 c1 Gothic Rain
Haha, I love this! ;)
Haha, I love this! ;)
3/16/2017 c1 
2DoomMarine55
Oh look another shit fangirl that bashes Natsu to make their favorite character look good. Natsu would never raise his hand to Lucy, that bitch is the one who psychically abuses him along with that she-witch Erza.
2DoomMarine55Oh look another shit fangirl that bashes Natsu to make their favorite character look good. Natsu would never raise his hand to Lucy, that bitch is the one who psychically abuses him along with that she-witch Erza.
6/25/2016 c1 natsubeatsrock
While I'm not all that big a fan of Erlu, this was really funny. I kinda want to see more of this comedic side of Juvia, both in canon and in stories.
While I'm not all that big a fan of Erlu, this was really funny. I kinda want to see more of this comedic side of Juvia, both in canon and in stories.
1/18/2016 c1 Guest
loved it!
loved it!
1/4/2016 c1 30BlessYourStar21
I enjoyed your story, though I find Juvia way OOC. I guess you don't like her character, but I don't like the way you potray her. Though, that's just me. Other than that, keep up the good work. You write flawlessly.
30BlessYourStar21I enjoyed your story, though I find Juvia way OOC. I guess you don't like her character, but I don't like the way you potray her. Though, that's just me. Other than that, keep up the good work. You write flawlessly.
1/4/2016 c1 19ghost ficker rin
hahahahahahahaha You made a perfectly canon Natsu! as clueless as ever. Seriously, I thought I was the only one who pictured Lucy and Erza as a Couple, really, even here there aren't many fanfics about these two so I'm glad you're caught up to fairy tail cause it means more Lucy Erza for me!
As for Juvia's yandereness, I wouldn't picture her as a yandere, she's just a crazy stalcker not a violent one, I like her tough.
19ghost ficker rinhahahahahahahaha You made a perfectly canon Natsu! as clueless as ever. Seriously, I thought I was the only one who pictured Lucy and Erza as a Couple, really, even here there aren't many fanfics about these two so I'm glad you're caught up to fairy tail cause it means more Lucy Erza for me!
As for Juvia's yandereness, I wouldn't picture her as a yandere, she's just a crazy stalcker not a violent one, I like her tough.
1/3/2016 c1 Guest
What bad interpretation of the characters and theit relationships, mainly bc juvia and lucy are GOOD friends. Trash.
What bad interpretation of the characters and theit relationships, mainly bc juvia and lucy are GOOD friends. Trash.