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1/29/2016 c5 MidnightReader31
Cute and nice little story
1/10/2016 c5 22Isazu
it was a horrible scene and no wonder why she was so scare of everything but Austin was amazing he actually listen to what she needed and his story made a lot of sense with the way he behave with Ally. Like I wrote before this was a very quiet story still with a heavy set and I love it for it because the characters really develop in a short amount of time, yes they are going to have a rough road in front of them but they are going to be there for each other.
1/10/2016 c4 Isazu
she was almost raped! well is not like you don't know that but I was wondering what had happened. I like that she feels more comfortable with him I understood why she needed to get a way but the fact that she went to the bar knowing he worked there means something. Also the way he describe her with such love and admiration in every action she takes even if it against him. The scene she describe is really horrible and loosing her brother, her twin, must be horrible. , the therapist is annoying come on dude a little sympathy take the time to hear. Loving the story
1/10/2016 c3 Isazu
wow Brett was his brother and he died in the house right? well I understand why she is still there is the only connection with her family. And the way that you open the chapter that question was really powerful is really a very strong story, sorry I don't know how to describe it correctly. The last scene also wow, she is really broken but I wonder what happened to Austin his is always thinking that is not about him but what happened to him
1/10/2016 c2 Isazu
Wow I understood that she was going to stood him up the moment he got to the restaurant and I love how even in the quiet way of this story one could see how excited he was about going out with her. The scene at the house was sad but it does explain something about what he keeps mention about what happened to her and Brett
1/9/2016 c5 Guest2
Nice story! :)
1/9/2016 c5 10Dont-Stop-Believin
Aww that was really cute! Great job loved it
1/9/2016 c5 29Bumblebee93
That ending was perfectly done. I loved this piece!
1/9/2016 c5 12significant-alliance
That was so beautiful. I really enjoyed this little story. Congrats! You'll never cease to amaze me!
1/8/2016 c4 29Bumblebee93
I'm definitely leaning towards a home invasion/almost rape type deal right now, but I'm probably wrong. I'm excited to see what happens.
1/8/2016 c4 Guest
Aww... Such a good chapter and it gave some more insight into what happened. I love the little twist you added in there by having her say "I'm sorry" at the end of every chapter.
1/8/2016 c3 Guest2
He's her brother! Still a lot of loose ends, but I can't wait to learn about them! :)
1/8/2016 c3 A
God you're writing turns me into a sobbing mess. This is so intriguing and heartbreakingly beautiful I need answers too much angst (but I secretly love it)
1/8/2016 c3 Bumblebee93
Now I'm wondering if it's a house invasion gone wrong or something. I honestly have no idea, but I'm proud to say I figured Brett was her brother! :D
1/6/2016 c2 10Dont-Stop-Believin
Aww so sad! Another Great job please update soon!
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