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1/14/2016 c1 1Chris H-M
Wow, so many questions I guess I will have to read to on to find out the answers. Nice chapter m8.
1/10/2016 c1 10IDRF
I like this story so far. The writing style isn't what I'm use to but it suits this story well. As for Yami, he is an alright OC but I feel like there wasn't much about him revealed that can suggest what type of character he will be. As for the POV switching, here is a little bit of advice for that, switching between POV after a few lines of dialogue and one paragraph can lead to confusion. I do like this story so far and I hope to read more in the future.

Sincerely, with kind words, your friend, IDRF
1/8/2016 c1 8AyumixRose
Well...it's true you DO need to finish posting your other stories. But, so far i'm liking this new one you posted up! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

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