for Robin's Case Files: Case of the Two Hounds12/4/2020 c9 Dawn
Excellent story. It had a plot that was interesting. And you had very good characters. Thank you.
Excellent story. It had a plot that was interesting. And you had very good characters. Thank you.
6/15/2016 c1 
26Alexandria-likethecityinEgypt
Just found this . . . Promising start! I'm interested. Only one suggestion: Could you put lines between the POV changes and between the time gaps? Makes it easier to follow. ;D
The option is there in Documents when you pull up to do your edits. Or if you don't see it, you can always ask me.
26Alexandria-likethecityinEgyptJust found this . . . Promising start! I'm interested. Only one suggestion: Could you put lines between the POV changes and between the time gaps? Makes it easier to follow. ;D
The option is there in Documents when you pull up to do your edits. Or if you don't see it, you can always ask me.
6/15/2016 c7 5jdcocoagirl
robin sneak in some little bossiness into bruce... liking the story. more soon.
5jdcocoagirlrobin sneak in some little bossiness into bruce... liking the story. more soon.
1/16/2016 c3 steelec1
My, my ,my Dick. You will be in so much trouble because Bruce will know you were there. Worlds greatest detective...
My, my ,my Dick. You will be in so much trouble because Bruce will know you were there. Worlds greatest detective...