for Percy Jackson (more like Annabeth) and the Shiny Silver Laptop2/21/2016 c3 Star
ShutUpandBeCreative, maybe try actually complimenting a story for once! I've seen you on Frozen Body, Broken Heart, insulting Izzy... I like you giving constructive criticism, but maybe try and be nice about it!
Btw Moony, you updating?
ShutUpandBeCreative, maybe try actually complimenting a story for once! I've seen you on Frozen Body, Broken Heart, insulting Izzy... I like you giving constructive criticism, but maybe try and be nice about it!
Btw Moony, you updating?
1/25/2016 c2 Shutup and Be Creative
Well, Cliches. Not my thing.
You might want to go over character traits. This group seems a little unrealistic.
Well, Cliches. Not my thing.
You might want to go over character traits. This group seems a little unrealistic.
1/16/2016 c3 HappyTheDragon
Do a mortals meet demigods!
This story is great!
Hoe many stories do they have to read?
Do a mortals meet demigods!
This story is great!
Hoe many stories do they have to read?
1/15/2016 c3 Guest
Mortals meet demigods!
also is the person a person we know(ie: I don't know Artemis?)?
How much do they have to read?
This is a good story!
Mortals meet demigods!
also is the person a person we know(ie: I don't know Artemis?)?
How much do they have to read?
This is a good story!
1/15/2016 c3 
14MeganRouth
Oh Gods, awesome for me! I mean, it's a nice difference after reading so many dramas and serious fanfiction XD I can't wait for next!
Have a nice day :)
14MeganRouthOh Gods, awesome for me! I mean, it's a nice difference after reading so many dramas and serious fanfiction XD I can't wait for next!
Have a nice day :)
1/12/2016 c2 DoodleQueen101
Hahahahahahahah!
Hahahahahahahah!
1/13/2016 c3 10i'madivergentshadowhunter
I would say do a Pertemis one. XD I've been seeing those everywhere.
(And you could make Artemis OOC, like a Mary Sue who is the classic author-is-trying-to-make-her-seem-tough, but-she's-a-fem-fatal.)
Awesome job, by the way. :)
10i'madivergentshadowhunterI would say do a Pertemis one. XD I've been seeing those everywhere.
(And you could make Artemis OOC, like a Mary Sue who is the classic author-is-trying-to-make-her-seem-tough, but-she's-a-fem-fatal.)
Awesome job, by the way. :)
1/13/2016 c3 57151807
Wow, go logical Annabeth! It's hilarious that there was not only Chaos, but Order. After all, isn't Maat Egyptian? Looking forward to more!
57151807Wow, go logical Annabeth! It's hilarious that there was not only Chaos, but Order. After all, isn't Maat Egyptian? Looking forward to more!
1/11/2016 c2 7151807
Lol! I like Maryna, her backstory is ridiculous and her appearance too. How does she even know her own name? A two year old can probably barely even say "Maryna". You should do a Pertemis for sure. Or a Thalico. A "gods turn into kids" is good too.
Lol! I like Maryna, her backstory is ridiculous and her appearance too. How does she even know her own name? A two year old can probably barely even say "Maryna". You should do a Pertemis for sure. Or a Thalico. A "gods turn into kids" is good too.