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5/15/2019 c4 2Smilesforeverhappy
Me on a Friday, suddenly feeling this overwhelming sensation of happiness.
I love how Patrick was just like, "If you're happy, I'm happy too! Whoopy!"
I can definitely see your improvement here. You finally learned paragraphs in digital texts! Horaaay!
5/15/2019 c3 Smilesforeverhappy
OMG! I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOO MUCH!
5/15/2019 c2 Smilesforeverhappy
This is getting interesting...
5/15/2019 c1 Smilesforeverhappy
Oh, naw...I already feel bad for Spongey Boy.
3/3/2016 c4 1CZC90203
Amazing
2/1/2016 c1 Guest
This looks like it could be very very good, but it's hard to read. I recommend that you should space out the lines, and make paragraphs, so it won't be as hard to read. I really like the plot though.
1/17/2016 c4 SONICXFLUTTERSHYFOREVER
good but you need to space out the lines 7\10

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