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9/1/2017 c1 Grey Fountain
This is an incredibly beautiful poem about two of my favorite elves. I love the way you ask and answer a question at the beginning of each verse. I love the way you bring canon into the poem, and I love the way the poem ends with two lovers safe at last in one another's arms.

It is also very well done from a technical point of view. First of all, no typo or grammatical errors. Secondly, great job at rhyming in each verse.

Awesome poem! Thanks for sharing,

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