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4/3/2016 c3 WindBear47
Enemies go bye-bye *evil grin*
4/3/2016 c1 WindBear47
Good to have a backstory
2/2/2016 c3 Blazeknight26
keep up the good work
1/23/2016 c2 3Drewman784
Maybe next time instead of calling this force "Magic", which in all honesty founds a little cheesy, maybe you should call it something else so it sounds all technical and stuff. For example: Psionics, physic, physici, etc.
1/23/2016 c1 Drewman784
The timeline chapter was a little gauge in everything, though it might have been made to be like that, the text didn't really grasp my attention so much. It was mostly to me just a ton of jimble-jambly-timey-Whiney... Stuff. Plot idea is good and all however and I see the potential am in this work. Keep writing!
1/14/2016 c2 Guest
give them hell...
1/14/2016 c1 2ImpsWithHats
You had my interest until magic and rpg slang was thrown around. I suggest instead of writing fanfiction you write an original work of your own in order to build lore for these aliens of yours.

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