for Oh How They Fall1/11/2016 c1 
12Supreme Commander
very good chapter i enjoyed it. i think its good idea to explain the original carnage squad.
12Supreme Commandervery good chapter i enjoyed it. i think its good idea to explain the original carnage squad.
1/11/2016 c1 cannonfodder43
Well... that went down hill pretty quickly. May they rest in peace. Grammar and spelling wise is is decent. Decent short story all things considered for you.
Well... that went down hill pretty quickly. May they rest in peace. Grammar and spelling wise is is decent. Decent short story all things considered for you.