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12/27/2021 c1 Rylek196
If anybody is looking for a an ACTUAL great story (because this one sure as shit is NOT) then go check out my novelization of Pokemon White, Long Way to Fall. I’ve been getting out chapters at a crazy rate lately, and as usual, with my most recent chapter, which is 29 as of this writing, I hit yet ANOTHER Gym Leader fight outta the park! :D
10/16/2016 c1 j
interesting idea! volkner is volkner, of course! i wonder how he'll get pikachu to warm up to him.
i hope you decide to continue!
1/11/2016 c1 157Farla
Dialogue is written as "Hello," she said or "Hello!" she said, never "Hello." She said or "Hello." she said or "Hello," She said or "Hello" she said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, which is a verb describing how the dialogue is said. ("Speak" is not a speech verb.) In that case it's written as "Hello." She grinned, never "Hello," she grinned or "Hello," She grinned or "Hello." she grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category. Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," she said. "This is it." not "Hi," she said, "this is it." or "Hi," she said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," she said, "is it." The same punctuation and capitalization rules apply to thoughts, except you don't use quotation marks or any other ones with thoughts.

You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor.

Write out numbers with letters.

[He had wanted a Sinnoh starter like everybody else but sadly his father had gave him this Pikachu. ]
["Well I can still allow you to take the Chimchar or Piplup" he offered.
"No thanks, appreciate the offer Mr?" ]

He wanted one, but also wouldn't take one when explicitly offered, because nothing makes sense.

Also your grammar is generally awful. Try harder and get a beta reader.

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