10/21 c41 Neroscurse
Absolutely loved the story, looking forward to reading the sequel!
Absolutely loved the story, looking forward to reading the sequel!
10/19 c9 Guest
Seeing Plagueis treat Sidious the way he does, imagine how terrifying these two would've been if Sidious had never killed his master. But then again, that wouldn't be Sidious.
Seeing Plagueis treat Sidious the way he does, imagine how terrifying these two would've been if Sidious had never killed his master. But then again, that wouldn't be Sidious.
9/16 c36 Adventwolf
Pretty sure the reason people didn't like the Battle of Naboo as much is because it jumps around to plot points that either have to impact, are meant to set up more stuff, are completely ignored and forgotten, or are just straight up inconsistent.
Like the ships in use the supposed well funded equipment and ships that Sienar was sending never showed up and then out of nowhere they have a prototype Kuat ship. Then that ship is said to be a smaller Acalmator but then it is supposed to be the half the size of a Luckerhulk which makes it more than twice the size of an acclamator. Then it is suddenly a battleship when as a prototype it should only be a slightly overarmed troop transport at this point.
The Battle is drawn out because there is no sense of scale/time in play. You had Vader look like he was just sitting down doing nothing waiting to be his dramatic self when the last time he showed up he was on a warpath. This is not how to raise and build tension or stakes.
Pretty sure the reason people didn't like the Battle of Naboo as much is because it jumps around to plot points that either have to impact, are meant to set up more stuff, are completely ignored and forgotten, or are just straight up inconsistent.
Like the ships in use the supposed well funded equipment and ships that Sienar was sending never showed up and then out of nowhere they have a prototype Kuat ship. Then that ship is said to be a smaller Acalmator but then it is supposed to be the half the size of a Luckerhulk which makes it more than twice the size of an acclamator. Then it is suddenly a battleship when as a prototype it should only be a slightly overarmed troop transport at this point.
The Battle is drawn out because there is no sense of scale/time in play. You had Vader look like he was just sitting down doing nothing waiting to be his dramatic self when the last time he showed up he was on a warpath. This is not how to raise and build tension or stakes.
9/14 c7 Adventwolf
So during this entire time with a far more clear threat of Vader around. Quinlin Vos still decided to not approach or help Qui-gon and Obi-Wan? Vader never knew he was there so wouldn't be able to "hide" himself even if he wanted to.
So during this entire time with a far more clear threat of Vader around. Quinlin Vos still decided to not approach or help Qui-gon and Obi-Wan? Vader never knew he was there so wouldn't be able to "hide" himself even if he wanted to.
9/9 c1 4Th3Hybr1d
To this date this is one of my favorite fanfics to read. I sure people are aware of the news but rest in peace James Earl Jones, the voice of Darth Vader (as well as other roles), you left a great legacy that will be cherished and remembered by thousands upon thousands.
To this date this is one of my favorite fanfics to read. I sure people are aware of the news but rest in peace James Earl Jones, the voice of Darth Vader (as well as other roles), you left a great legacy that will be cherished and remembered by thousands upon thousands.
9/8 c40 Yami188
Amazing story. Admittedly I was a bit wary of reading a story focused on Darth Vader given the quality, or lack thereof, of a lot of other Vader centric stories. I love the depiction of Darth Vader here and his weird relationship with everyone else.
I still think it whitewashes Vader and bashes the Jedi a bit much but I guess that's unavoidable to make a somewhat likable version of space Hitler. I also found his lack of reaction to Obi Wan and Padme a bit strange but I suppose he's completely cut off from Anakin at this point. This story doesn't bash Obi Wan to hell and back like a lot of the other ones so that alone puts it in my good books
Amazing story. Admittedly I was a bit wary of reading a story focused on Darth Vader given the quality, or lack thereof, of a lot of other Vader centric stories. I love the depiction of Darth Vader here and his weird relationship with everyone else.
I still think it whitewashes Vader and bashes the Jedi a bit much but I guess that's unavoidable to make a somewhat likable version of space Hitler. I also found his lack of reaction to Obi Wan and Padme a bit strange but I suppose he's completely cut off from Anakin at this point. This story doesn't bash Obi Wan to hell and back like a lot of the other ones so that alone puts it in my good books
8/30 c41 BobTheSkrull
Excellent story! It's weird but great to see a Vader time travel that wasn't post redemption and doesn't include Luke. There's just something about his truly menacing side, y'know?
Excellent story! It's weird but great to see a Vader time travel that wasn't post redemption and doesn't include Luke. There's just something about his truly menacing side, y'know?
8/30 c41 26LordStar8045
I would say my favorite is Vader's making Palpatine having hissy fits.
Since we know World Between Worlds is a thing I wonder if that was what caused Vader and others to time travel or maybe some godlike beings like Aboleth or Nakhash or Bedlam Spirits.
I would say my favorite is Vader's making Palpatine having hissy fits.
Since we know World Between Worlds is a thing I wonder if that was what caused Vader and others to time travel or maybe some godlike beings like Aboleth or Nakhash or Bedlam Spirits.
8/29 c18 LordStar8045
OOOF I think every force senstive in the galaxy felt the burn that Vader gave to the jedi order.
this is why Luke changed the Jedi Order in Old EU when he revived it.
OOOF I think every force senstive in the galaxy felt the burn that Vader gave to the jedi order.
this is why Luke changed the Jedi Order in Old EU when he revived it.