
1/31/2016 c9 Guest
chapter 9
Really great story i love it. I have to you Cinderella's next animal forms if
you're interested them. In the final challenge Cinderella could be somekind bird
like dove, nighthingale or sparrow. And sevond challenge she could be a fox.
chapter 9
Really great story i love it. I have to you Cinderella's next animal forms if
you're interested them. In the final challenge Cinderella could be somekind bird
like dove, nighthingale or sparrow. And sevond challenge she could be a fox.
1/25/2016 c6
10Wiztine
Well that certainly explains a lot. I like the twist with the spring! The complexity of the curse is a nice thing to have in your back pocket if you need to explain something down the line, or just to move the plot in a new direction (unless you have this all planned out already, which would explain how quickly you've been updating... in which case, one, I'm jealous, and two, kudos to you, all the better for us!)

Well that certainly explains a lot. I like the twist with the spring! The complexity of the curse is a nice thing to have in your back pocket if you need to explain something down the line, or just to move the plot in a new direction (unless you have this all planned out already, which would explain how quickly you've been updating... in which case, one, I'm jealous, and two, kudos to you, all the better for us!)
1/19/2016 c4 Wiztine
Feed the birds, tuppence a bag! I'm really enjoying your chapter titles. Trying to decide if Kit is the Cinderella character or not... guess I'll have to wait and see!
Feed the birds, tuppence a bag! I'm really enjoying your chapter titles. Trying to decide if Kit is the Cinderella character or not... guess I'll have to wait and see!