11/9 c23 DaV1nc136
Nicely done with this chapter!
Can’t wait to see what comes next as the story continues!
And nice having Zatanna perform a morning matinee!
It is Vegas, after all.
Wonder if we’ll see Huntress get her next turn or perhaps Shayera, Karen, or Beatriz after that?
Either way, I look forward to it.
Also, it looks like you’re adding elements of the 2nd Suicide Squad movie into the fold.
I’ve seen it, and I think it holds up.
Looking forward to how Diana’s Team in Corto Maltese handles the Amazo Mission with the Rebels.
See you for the next chapter!
Nicely done with this chapter!
Can’t wait to see what comes next as the story continues!
And nice having Zatanna perform a morning matinee!
It is Vegas, after all.
Wonder if we’ll see Huntress get her next turn or perhaps Shayera, Karen, or Beatriz after that?
Either way, I look forward to it.
Also, it looks like you’re adding elements of the 2nd Suicide Squad movie into the fold.
I’ve seen it, and I think it holds up.
Looking forward to how Diana’s Team in Corto Maltese handles the Amazo Mission with the Rebels.
See you for the next chapter!
11/8 c4 Rocket Fallout
Okay honestly pretty good story so far. Although I absolutely just love the fact that Chief didn't even ask for a possibility of the men coming back to life. Like it didn't even cross his mind he was like you know what let Diana have some time with her family and being ambassador. I mean it wasn't the wrong move but I would have at least appreciated if you wrote the chief asked and that was denied because it was impossible for blank reason. There or maybe you tried to like convey the fact that they couldn't send Chief back to his world therefore chief thought there's no way that they could bring back all the dead people. Anyways I'm kind of interested to see how you're going to save Cortana and if there's going to be any other Halo characters appearing. Maybe even some characters not from Halo I don't know there's some crazy ass stuff you can do with this story. You doing great so far and keep it going!
Okay honestly pretty good story so far. Although I absolutely just love the fact that Chief didn't even ask for a possibility of the men coming back to life. Like it didn't even cross his mind he was like you know what let Diana have some time with her family and being ambassador. I mean it wasn't the wrong move but I would have at least appreciated if you wrote the chief asked and that was denied because it was impossible for blank reason. There or maybe you tried to like convey the fact that they couldn't send Chief back to his world therefore chief thought there's no way that they could bring back all the dead people. Anyways I'm kind of interested to see how you're going to save Cortana and if there's going to be any other Halo characters appearing. Maybe even some characters not from Halo I don't know there's some crazy ass stuff you can do with this story. You doing great so far and keep it going!
11/8 c23 Randynotsosavag
Okay so Waller no. FBI, MI6 and all the other alphabet soup agencies that are not controlled by evil pricks yes. If a rolling with the Spartan survived because of split space thing or space incident or freak accident or something. Then obviously every Spartan that died to a slit space bomb or some sort of space incident in general! Or a cooler thing would be just have the spirit of fire show up in all its Glory plenty of male and female Spartans and ODSTs and Marines and various other soldiers and military personnel of the UNSC! Hoorah and hooyah! Pretty simple actually! Also this might not be from Halo but Delta Squad from Republic Commando got pretty screwed over it'd be pretty cool if they could I don't know be saved by an author.
Okay so Waller no. FBI, MI6 and all the other alphabet soup agencies that are not controlled by evil pricks yes. If a rolling with the Spartan survived because of split space thing or space incident or freak accident or something. Then obviously every Spartan that died to a slit space bomb or some sort of space incident in general! Or a cooler thing would be just have the spirit of fire show up in all its Glory plenty of male and female Spartans and ODSTs and Marines and various other soldiers and military personnel of the UNSC! Hoorah and hooyah! Pretty simple actually! Also this might not be from Halo but Delta Squad from Republic Commando got pretty screwed over it'd be pretty cool if they could I don't know be saved by an author.
11/8 c23 Gg Leroy
Oh my candidacy for the possible mails from the Halo Universe is good old Jorge because a slip space bomb could possibly not kill him and take him to the Justice League Universe instead. Also fellow Spartan II want a Chiefs best buds not in the same level as Sam and Kelly but they were still friends. There's also the fact that other Spartans went out with a slip space bomb and similar fashion so you could have them also show up. Honestly with all the dirt the league and Cortana gave Chief about Waller's bullshit. Yeah I don't see Chief joining Waller. Like at all. There's a difference between Oni from Halo and even the terrible version of Oni from Halo in other words 343's Office of Naval intelligence. Or as I like to call them 343's obsessively narcissistic idiots. But hey compare them to the stupid crap that Waller's division does and they actually look intelligent which to be completely honest. Yeah I don't see Chief joining them. I see Chief occasionally and not permanently joining un allied powers military spec ops but not Waller's bullshit. This also doesn't just limit him to America. He's UNSC not early Captain America.
Oh my candidacy for the possible mails from the Halo Universe is good old Jorge because a slip space bomb could possibly not kill him and take him to the Justice League Universe instead. Also fellow Spartan II want a Chiefs best buds not in the same level as Sam and Kelly but they were still friends. There's also the fact that other Spartans went out with a slip space bomb and similar fashion so you could have them also show up. Honestly with all the dirt the league and Cortana gave Chief about Waller's bullshit. Yeah I don't see Chief joining Waller. Like at all. There's a difference between Oni from Halo and even the terrible version of Oni from Halo in other words 343's Office of Naval intelligence. Or as I like to call them 343's obsessively narcissistic idiots. But hey compare them to the stupid crap that Waller's division does and they actually look intelligent which to be completely honest. Yeah I don't see Chief joining them. I see Chief occasionally and not permanently joining un allied powers military spec ops but not Waller's bullshit. This also doesn't just limit him to America. He's UNSC not early Captain America.
11/7 c23 Leman42x
This has been a fun story to fall and can’t wait to see more. Though just a thought on the whole G.I. Joe thing. It’s kind of funny that there’s not a lot of crossovers between Halo and G.I. Joe just an observation. I already cast my vote on the pole.
This has been a fun story to fall and can’t wait to see more. Though just a thought on the whole G.I. Joe thing. It’s kind of funny that there’s not a lot of crossovers between Halo and G.I. Joe just an observation. I already cast my vote on the pole.
11/2 c23 FusionCoreReactor
An expected development, it was about time Amanda Waller addressed Chief again.
Honestly it wouldn’t be that bad of an idea to join this special forces group. He could be the inside man for the league.
That is if Waller and Cadmus don’t try to pull something (lets be frank, they will try something). Brainwashing, cloning, bomb in neck, etc.
An expected development, it was about time Amanda Waller addressed Chief again.
Honestly it wouldn’t be that bad of an idea to join this special forces group. He could be the inside man for the league.
That is if Waller and Cadmus don’t try to pull something (lets be frank, they will try something). Brainwashing, cloning, bomb in neck, etc.
11/2 c23 Cerberusx
The idea to bring in Jorge and Noble 6 is an interesting idea. Especially having two Spartan-II who know each other and a Spartan III that was considered the best of the threes.
With Jorge, you could have it so the Corvette and what's left of the Super Carrier enter normal space in the Sol system. Not sure about Noble 6.
The idea to bring in Jorge and Noble 6 is an interesting idea. Especially having two Spartan-II who know each other and a Spartan III that was considered the best of the threes.
With Jorge, you could have it so the Corvette and what's left of the Super Carrier enter normal space in the Sol system. Not sure about Noble 6.
11/2 c23 Guest
Done and dusted. Just like John’s reaction time. Bro just write an Oc cuz damn this isn’t 117 it’s master cheeks
Done and dusted. Just like John’s reaction time. Bro just write an Oc cuz damn this isn’t 117 it’s master cheeks
11/2 c23 Bucio
It was not bad, with John spending much longer with Zatanna, breakfast and a show, where now she shows the reason why Bruce was learning from Zatara and that is the art of escapism, leaving him astonished.
Also with Zee seeing that he is not a very sociable person, given his very dark comment about the smiles (Izuku and All Might would definitely disagree, even Cortana could reprimand him for it, because it is not bad to smile, the detail is with or for whom)
From the end (and it would be ironically fun if John admitted for himself who was also entertaining), it is an assault of Harley and Ivy that was frustrated by John, seeing that even without armor he is someone to fear, being able to face them without problems, In addition to being able to resist both the poison and the mental control of Poison Ivy
Although, given who appears at the end, I would not be surprised that this robbery was orchestrated by Amanda Waller, knowing that John would be there, looking for him to tell him that she also has a team in the nation where Diana and the others are and this team being aware of the presence of the heroines there, to make him a job offer to work with her, one that John agrees to consider, for the slight horror and surprise of the women of the league, whom he promises to explain the reason for said answer
From your idea for the Joes (wink/tribute to the work of Freedom Guard?), both have their pro and cons, theirs being part of that universe, would have the detail of the women of that team having to work for Waller (not precisely something in favor), while the other, with John in some way ending, for an accident in a teleporter, in the world of the Gi Joe, although the premises would have to decontaminate him and his gear, since although he is immune does not mean that he does not carry the virus (being living some time in the world of the league), which could endanger the locals; Apart from that he would have to be accompanied by Cortana
Or the feelings of the women of the League, given the possibility of John's possible departure to his world, which they briefly experience when the device failure, and the joy of see him back, one or the other of the heroines having the courage of giving him a kiss, happy to see that he returned (and perhaps the side effects/aftermath of these experiments, the departure and the return, is what allowed certain Spartans to also reach that world and help John)
From Waller, I suppose that John's response is partly to know what elements Cadmus have (I guess the option of whether Joe would also be part of this world, being them - and not Task Force x aka Suicide Squad - with whom John would work) and more than being something definitive, seeking to work together occasionally, because the blow that gave them the loss of men in that world, has them short in resources, of there being logical - for John - avoid wasting time in unnecessary disputes or quarrels in a time of necessity
Good luck and keep it up
It was not bad, with John spending much longer with Zatanna, breakfast and a show, where now she shows the reason why Bruce was learning from Zatara and that is the art of escapism, leaving him astonished.
Also with Zee seeing that he is not a very sociable person, given his very dark comment about the smiles (Izuku and All Might would definitely disagree, even Cortana could reprimand him for it, because it is not bad to smile, the detail is with or for whom)
From the end (and it would be ironically fun if John admitted for himself who was also entertaining), it is an assault of Harley and Ivy that was frustrated by John, seeing that even without armor he is someone to fear, being able to face them without problems, In addition to being able to resist both the poison and the mental control of Poison Ivy
Although, given who appears at the end, I would not be surprised that this robbery was orchestrated by Amanda Waller, knowing that John would be there, looking for him to tell him that she also has a team in the nation where Diana and the others are and this team being aware of the presence of the heroines there, to make him a job offer to work with her, one that John agrees to consider, for the slight horror and surprise of the women of the league, whom he promises to explain the reason for said answer
From your idea for the Joes (wink/tribute to the work of Freedom Guard?), both have their pro and cons, theirs being part of that universe, would have the detail of the women of that team having to work for Waller (not precisely something in favor), while the other, with John in some way ending, for an accident in a teleporter, in the world of the Gi Joe, although the premises would have to decontaminate him and his gear, since although he is immune does not mean that he does not carry the virus (being living some time in the world of the league), which could endanger the locals; Apart from that he would have to be accompanied by Cortana
Or the feelings of the women of the League, given the possibility of John's possible departure to his world, which they briefly experience when the device failure, and the joy of see him back, one or the other of the heroines having the courage of giving him a kiss, happy to see that he returned (and perhaps the side effects/aftermath of these experiments, the departure and the return, is what allowed certain Spartans to also reach that world and help John)
From Waller, I suppose that John's response is partly to know what elements Cadmus have (I guess the option of whether Joe would also be part of this world, being them - and not Task Force x aka Suicide Squad - with whom John would work) and more than being something definitive, seeking to work together occasionally, because the blow that gave them the loss of men in that world, has them short in resources, of there being logical - for John - avoid wasting time in unnecessary disputes or quarrels in a time of necessity
Good luck and keep it up