for Impose7/12 c53 Guest
Ohhh no draco and lucy ..
Ohhh no draco and lucy ..
6/25 c1 Bettina
Hi there, I discovered your amazing universe a few months back and have been progressing unti here without reviewing simply as it's old and well-commented.
Still, you have me hooked, and I love your ideas. I like your characterization and the easily flowing narrative. The plot and tensions anyhow.
Now I'm wondering though, about the runes Suoja and Unelma - are you a Finn or related to some? For others, they are Finnish words: suoja protection and unelma dream, while I saw no such runes in the WWW. I love the idea to use them!
Now I'm off to that wedding to not annoy Andromeda!
Hi there, I discovered your amazing universe a few months back and have been progressing unti here without reviewing simply as it's old and well-commented.
Still, you have me hooked, and I love your ideas. I like your characterization and the easily flowing narrative. The plot and tensions anyhow.
Now I'm wondering though, about the runes Suoja and Unelma - are you a Finn or related to some? For others, they are Finnish words: suoja protection and unelma dream, while I saw no such runes in the WWW. I love the idea to use them!
Now I'm off to that wedding to not annoy Andromeda!
5/16 c27 Guest
Harry’s right it is absolutely Hermione’s fault for not helping him catch pettigrew i don’t know why you keep saying it’s not her fault when it absolutely is in my opinion harry should unfriend her just for that she is helping pettigrew she helped him escape
Harry’s right it is absolutely Hermione’s fault for not helping him catch pettigrew i don’t know why you keep saying it’s not her fault when it absolutely is in my opinion harry should unfriend her just for that she is helping pettigrew she helped him escape
4/22 c44 
2HetaPhiPuffPrincess
Sooo literally the chockhold u put us in , at the end of everyone of these is almost too much! Like seriously u are Brilliant! This is like reading the actual HP series but on steroids! Like sincerely Jk WISH, PRAYED, to write the original this good, and she failed in comparison. Like you just ughhh magnificent!
2HetaPhiPuffPrincessSooo literally the chockhold u put us in , at the end of everyone of these is almost too much! Like seriously u are Brilliant! This is like reading the actual HP series but on steroids! Like sincerely Jk WISH, PRAYED, to write the original this good, and she failed in comparison. Like you just ughhh magnificent!
4/22 c44 HetaPhiPuffPrincess
Why is Hermione pushing Harry on Cho? He’s 13 it’s like she thinks cuz she already 14 and thinks like a 16 year old that he should be thinking the same and then pushing him as if he likes the girl just cuz the girl likes him. That’s really rude . He literally just met her, even if she does like him.
Why is Hermione pushing Harry on Cho? He’s 13 it’s like she thinks cuz she already 14 and thinks like a 16 year old that he should be thinking the same and then pushing him as if he likes the girl just cuz the girl likes him. That’s really rude . He literally just met her, even if she does like him.
4/22 c37 HetaPhiPuffPrincess
Ok I am loving this story. However I honestly think that a 14 year old girl and a 15 year old girl are expecting entirely too much out of a 13 year old boy who doesn’t have a Mother! He doesn’t even know he’s “dating” Cho he jus thinks he likes her she likes him and they hang out. She is 15 going on 16, she has no business trying to date and or having expectations of a 13 year old. And Hermione for all theI’m a girl” comments still doesn’t understand Harry enough to know her best friend is Obtuse and a Boy. So why would it matter if he couldn’t go to hogsmead and hung with a group of friends. Like the expectation of a 13 year old is beyond. Not to mention a emotionally stunted 13 year old BOY. Not to mention he’s clearly friends with Luna and Cho takes shots at his friends . No one likes that and the idea she thinks it’s ok just proves the point she’s immature and too old to be trying to date Harry. Like I am all the way on Harry’s side . I really hope you don’t end up making him feel bad because of this or forcing him to apologize cuz honestly she’s a friend who kissed him once and that he sorta kicks it with. He’s never had a relationship that’s not friendship and even if he sorta sees it like he’s 13 and needs leeway . I’m so annoyed with Hermione cuz it’s as if she doesn’t want to actually help him, only push him to be with a girl just cuz she thinks he likes her. Finding someone attractive is not the only thing u need to fancy someone not to mention everything going on. Like Cho is the last thing on his mind and always will be compared to anything else. Which is why him dating at 13 just cuz they can go to Hogsmead now is Ridiculous.
Ok I am loving this story. However I honestly think that a 14 year old girl and a 15 year old girl are expecting entirely too much out of a 13 year old boy who doesn’t have a Mother! He doesn’t even know he’s “dating” Cho he jus thinks he likes her she likes him and they hang out. She is 15 going on 16, she has no business trying to date and or having expectations of a 13 year old. And Hermione for all theI’m a girl” comments still doesn’t understand Harry enough to know her best friend is Obtuse and a Boy. So why would it matter if he couldn’t go to hogsmead and hung with a group of friends. Like the expectation of a 13 year old is beyond. Not to mention a emotionally stunted 13 year old BOY. Not to mention he’s clearly friends with Luna and Cho takes shots at his friends . No one likes that and the idea she thinks it’s ok just proves the point she’s immature and too old to be trying to date Harry. Like I am all the way on Harry’s side . I really hope you don’t end up making him feel bad because of this or forcing him to apologize cuz honestly she’s a friend who kissed him once and that he sorta kicks it with. He’s never had a relationship that’s not friendship and even if he sorta sees it like he’s 13 and needs leeway . I’m so annoyed with Hermione cuz it’s as if she doesn’t want to actually help him, only push him to be with a girl just cuz she thinks he likes her. Finding someone attractive is not the only thing u need to fancy someone not to mention everything going on. Like Cho is the last thing on his mind and always will be compared to anything else. Which is why him dating at 13 just cuz they can go to Hogsmead now is Ridiculous.
8/11/2022 c29 Guest
- Dudley smiled back for just a moment, but he had questions now, important ones.
"So, if magic's real, what about aliens?" -
You just made me like Dudley Dursley, I can't believe it.
- Dudley smiled back for just a moment, but he had questions now, important ones.
"So, if magic's real, what about aliens?" -
You just made me like Dudley Dursley, I can't believe it.
7/20/2022 c52 sarrylover
Oh god not Harry telling stating the whole prophecy to children. Also all of a sudden Ron cares about why Voldemort is after Harry. Yeah so random
Oh god not Harry telling stating the whole prophecy to children. Also all of a sudden Ron cares about why Voldemort is after Harry. Yeah so random
7/20/2022 c47 sarrylover
This Harry is really annoying and really useless. God the theory of Harry having some sort of disability always resurfaces, when I read a frustrating story that uses the cannon Harry personality. When using a JK Rowling Harry for this type of story just doesn’t make sense literally Padfoot and moony were “afraid” they taught Harry too much before his first year we saw a wind spell from him during school and that’s it while during years before the school Harry was using magic sight, apperating, moving aside wards, using strong accidental magic, potions Harry. when we witnessed 9 year old Harry out preforming this third year Harry it does get annoying like this kid could have used his magic sight to see Ron’s wand on Peter when they were in a stand off other wise what was the point of showcasing Ron’s wand and the color of the magic when he finally used his might sight after years of not using it.
This Harry is really annoying and really useless. God the theory of Harry having some sort of disability always resurfaces, when I read a frustrating story that uses the cannon Harry personality. When using a JK Rowling Harry for this type of story just doesn’t make sense literally Padfoot and moony were “afraid” they taught Harry too much before his first year we saw a wind spell from him during school and that’s it while during years before the school Harry was using magic sight, apperating, moving aside wards, using strong accidental magic, potions Harry. when we witnessed 9 year old Harry out preforming this third year Harry it does get annoying like this kid could have used his magic sight to see Ron’s wand on Peter when they were in a stand off other wise what was the point of showcasing Ron’s wand and the color of the magic when he finally used his might sight after years of not using it.
7/19/2022 c31 sarrylover
I’m just skipping through all the extra stuff. Like why would I be interested in the twins blowing things up when Harry is in trouble. I’m curious if Harry get all emo about HIS own decisions.
I’m just skipping through all the extra stuff. Like why would I be interested in the twins blowing things up when Harry is in trouble. I’m curious if Harry get all emo about HIS own decisions.
7/19/2022 c23 sarrylover
Boo how boring hetero Harry. I hope at some point it will change because how boring. Plus the whole Draco family conflict would be for nothing.
Boo how boring hetero Harry. I hope at some point it will change because how boring. Plus the whole Draco family conflict would be for nothing.
6/14/2022 c53 Guest
Bruh. Reading through this I am starting to get annoyed that Harry hasn't run with moony yet.
Bruh. Reading through this I am starting to get annoyed that Harry hasn't run with moony yet.
5/29/2022 c53 TtotheA
Author I had a great read. I was so excited for every chapter I kept on reading. It was a great reading flow to be in. On the one hand I wanted to review more, but also being so wholly transported into your fic was an is gold. I think that’s why we love HP so collectively, the world has the ability to suck you in completely finishing a book within several hours. Like you went into a pensive. I feel like your series 98% allows us the reader to be transported into the HP world again but tweaked by you. So it’s what makes your fic great, but maybe why it’s not as well reviewed as it definitely should be.
Author I had a great read. I was so excited for every chapter I kept on reading. It was a great reading flow to be in. On the one hand I wanted to review more, but also being so wholly transported into your fic was an is gold. I think that’s why we love HP so collectively, the world has the ability to suck you in completely finishing a book within several hours. Like you went into a pensive. I feel like your series 98% allows us the reader to be transported into the HP world again but tweaked by you. So it’s what makes your fic great, but maybe why it’s not as well reviewed as it definitely should be.
4/14/2022 c53 Guest
Now you're ending the stories in as stupid of places as the chapters.
Now you're ending the stories in as stupid of places as the chapters.