for Impose4/13/2022 c40 Guest
Getting your pronouns a bit mixed up aren't you?
Getting your pronouns a bit mixed up aren't you?
4/13/2022 c37 Dontworry
Yeah fuck that! Bitches like Cho too much damn work.
Yeah fuck that! Bitches like Cho too much damn work.
4/13/2022 c31 Dontworry
You end the chapters in the strangest places.
You end the chapters in the strangest places.
4/12/2022 c23 tomascatts
I think Harry's doing very well for a 13 year old. When I was 13 I yanked the pony tail of the girl I liked, splashed through a puddle next to her getting dirty water all over her dress, then tripped her as she walked down the bus aisle. Sigh, sadly our love affair never got going.
I think Harry's doing very well for a 13 year old. When I was 13 I yanked the pony tail of the girl I liked, splashed through a puddle next to her getting dirty water all over her dress, then tripped her as she walked down the bus aisle. Sigh, sadly our love affair never got going.
4/11/2022 c16 Tomas
Why would you stop a chapter there?
Why would you stop a chapter there?
3/10/2022 c1 SanFranMom
Thanks for another great story! I enjoy your twists on the original, which keep me guessing. Also, your books do a better job of developing the relationship between Ginny and Harry than the originals do.
Thanks for another great story! I enjoy your twists on the original, which keep me guessing. Also, your books do a better job of developing the relationship between Ginny and Harry than the originals do.
1/9/2022 c51 Anon
This story is fantastic, but so very frustrating when you know about the Room of Requirement but can’t tell the characters. Why didn’t they ask the house elves though? Dumbledore and Sirius have both been in the room before though it was something different. They knew that Pettigrew was on the seventh floor. Why not ask the elves and the elves would tell them about the Come and Go Room? Also why is Harry so frustratingly angsty and (minorly) thick. He needs to pay more attention to his studies and also respect his teachers.
This story is fantastic, but so very frustrating when you know about the Room of Requirement but can’t tell the characters. Why didn’t they ask the house elves though? Dumbledore and Sirius have both been in the room before though it was something different. They knew that Pettigrew was on the seventh floor. Why not ask the elves and the elves would tell them about the Come and Go Room? Also why is Harry so frustratingly angsty and (minorly) thick. He needs to pay more attention to his studies and also respect his teachers.
12/19/2021 c53 
1DJArla
This was so intense! I spent the second half of the book talking myself out of skipping to the end to read how it worked out. I’m so into this world you have created. In this story I especially loved the Dursley’s, Dudley the most. I was so hooked the whole way through and can’t wait to keep reading!
1DJArlaThis was so intense! I spent the second half of the book talking myself out of skipping to the end to read how it worked out. I’m so into this world you have created. In this story I especially loved the Dursley’s, Dudley the most. I was so hooked the whole way through and can’t wait to keep reading!
10/27/2021 c19 Pr0xim4
Currently rereading the I-series , and although a few months back, having read the available content I had left a review...However, after reliving these amazing scenes written by you, i felt the urge to drop a praising comment, because you truly deserve it!
The ambiance, the conversations, the characters are handled with such authenticity that it seems like I'm reading the original work of JKR for the first time, once again. Believe me when I say it, if there's magic in this world, it is woven in your stories. I feel privileged to be able to experience it for free, and I deeply appreciate the energy and time you invest in this project!
I wish you all the best, and thank you :)
Currently rereading the I-series , and although a few months back, having read the available content I had left a review...However, after reliving these amazing scenes written by you, i felt the urge to drop a praising comment, because you truly deserve it!
The ambiance, the conversations, the characters are handled with such authenticity that it seems like I'm reading the original work of JKR for the first time, once again. Believe me when I say it, if there's magic in this world, it is woven in your stories. I feel privileged to be able to experience it for free, and I deeply appreciate the energy and time you invest in this project!
I wish you all the best, and thank you :)
9/26/2021 c21 Westeller
I don't get it. Sirius knows there's a hidden room in that corridor, right there. It's where Dumbledore stashed his bike. He knows he had no idea the room was there before. He knows it's not on the map. And even if he didn't remember, somehow, Dumbledore would. It's way too obvious what's happening here and *he should know*.
I don't get it. Sirius knows there's a hidden room in that corridor, right there. It's where Dumbledore stashed his bike. He knows he had no idea the room was there before. He knows it's not on the map. And even if he didn't remember, somehow, Dumbledore would. It's way too obvious what's happening here and *he should know*.
9/23/2021 c53 Guest
This would've been the best one in this series if it wasn't for the silly climax, author. That rather dragged the whole thing down. Still worth a 7/10 though.
This would've been the best one in this series if it wasn't for the silly climax, author. That rather dragged the whole thing down. Still worth a 7/10 though.
9/23/2021 c48 Guest
I miss Quirrel. He was a damn sight better at villainy than this. This is even more pathetic than bullying an 11 year old girl.
You had a very good scene with Peter dragging around Harry in the forest though, author. It'd be a great scene if it wasn't built on unreasonable amounts of incompetence from everyone. As I've commented before a few times, plotting is where you screw up hardest and it's extra disappointing because you can do so much better.
Maybe Crouch has a side plan happening that's actually smart while this nonsense is going on here? We can only hope.
I miss Quirrel. He was a damn sight better at villainy than this. This is even more pathetic than bullying an 11 year old girl.
You had a very good scene with Peter dragging around Harry in the forest though, author. It'd be a great scene if it wasn't built on unreasonable amounts of incompetence from everyone. As I've commented before a few times, plotting is where you screw up hardest and it's extra disappointing because you can do so much better.
Maybe Crouch has a side plan happening that's actually smart while this nonsense is going on here? We can only hope.
9/23/2021 c47 Guest
There must be a curse on the third year climax like the defense teacher position to explain why it's always built on people being very dumb even in fanfictions.
My estimation of your writing is plummeting once again, author. You're certainly a roller coaster.
There must be a curse on the third year climax like the defense teacher position to explain why it's always built on people being very dumb even in fanfictions.
My estimation of your writing is plummeting once again, author. You're certainly a roller coaster.